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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG... Kya solid planning tha...


simple awesome Jaz... I loved it...

Finally Savitri stood up for her kids...

and Maaneet are together after 7 years of exile...

Cant wait for the Epilogue ...
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Posted: 14 years ago


1 of your Best works 👏 & 1 of my favorites too 👍🏼
Lucky & Anne were superb ... actually the entire Singh family 👏
Loved the twist of coma , amnesia & the way Maan regained his memory back 👏
Awesome plan 👍🏼
Really loved how Savitri confronted Mohinder like a wounded tigress shielding her kids from harm 👏

My eyes filled up for Geet ; finally she found her life 😊
Maan's plan to bring together Pinky & Lucky was too good 👍🏼



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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jaz.. awesome update..
waiting for epi..
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

oh ya...that last chapter had me shedding tears not that it's something new with Jaz''s writing 😆...but i am so upset that Preet died...the man was pure gold...i was wooing for Preet and Heer to be together because this Prem just didn't bloody deserve her...so i guess Heer and Aarav live with each other...they have each other...Prem and Heer can never be a couple after what Prem has done...

but do tell me the stories u finished on Premeer...i would love to read more...i use to watch them before...they were a wonderful couple...

lol..see...i too was more upset than i thought i'd be by killing Preet...he was like the perfect guy...the perfect friend for Heer...this is one particular story where i hated my saddistic tendencies!! 😆...i was thinking of maybe doing that story for Maneet...and then after the "other" man dies (not sure who yet)...i could just do an epilogue where...Maan would have a relationship with Aarav as his father...Maan and Geet would be "friends"...and i use that term very loosely...for Aarav's sake...and either Geet would move on later or just be happy with Aarav...what are your thoughts? 😳
as for other Premeer stories...there is one more but i kind of left that incomplete too since the show ended...but...im planning on doing that next for Maneet and i will complete it for sure...so wait for that...i have a few one shots and stuff...and a short story...if you're interested...no idea where the post got lost though...so if you want them i can email them...PM me your address if you want 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JayaR

OMG... Kya solid planning tha...


simple awesome Jaz... I loved it...

Finally Savitri stood up for her kids...

and Maaneet are together after 7 years of exile...

Cant wait for the Epilogue ...

lol...jaya yaar...what exile...just simple seperation no? he he...but yes...they are finally together...so...all the tears/pain was well worth it...no? 😉...im evil...i know!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drashsree100



1 of your Best works 👏 & 1 of my favorites too 👍🏼
Lucky & Anne were superb ... actually the entire Singh family 👏
Loved the twist of coma , amnesia & the way Maan regained his memory back 👏
Awesome plan 👍🏼
Really loved how Savitri confronted Mohinder like a wounded tigress shielding her kids from harm 👏

My eyes filled up for Geet ; finally she found her life 😊
Maan's plan to bring together Pinky & Lucky was too good 👍🏼



Loved it Glitter StarGlitter StarGlitter StarGlitter StarGlitter Star

aww...thank you so much!! im glad that you enjoyed it...i.ts actually one of my favorite pieces too...just cuz of the way im able to trink you all into thinking maan is dead!! 😆...lol...i love manipulating the readers!! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey everyone please check out the note regarding the next update. 😊



JAZ
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOWWW!! Just WOW! Jaz, you didn't leave any stone unturned. Not only Geet but I couldn't help my own happy tears reading the entire reunion.
I knew you wouldn't be crazy to make it all a very big "dream" like you said. I hope you're still not mad about my "stuff it" 😆 Kya hai na Jaz .. your FFs do this to people .. they make us crazy and in turn we can sometimes give very crazy and unexpected responses lol.
BUT BOY AM I GLAD THAT MAAN STAYED ALIVE 🥳 .. btw your little header note totally gave away that he was alive LOL
Coming to this update: WOOH! Am I happy or AM I HAPPY!? First off .. all the flashbacks were simply amazing. Especially loved to see that someone like Maan who stood up on his own two feet .. who had only a mother as family before he met Geet sort of got a new chance at life. To make himself bigger and better .. to let himself have that feeling of a "family" that he never got before Geet.
It was totally amazing to see that the Singh's took him in like that. Very few people left in the world who would do that for someone. Loved the brother-sister bonding he developed with Lucky and Anne. Boy you really gave us a shocker with this whole connection of Lucky and Anne with Pinky.
Awwieee Maan was always there for Geet 😳 Perhaps that's why she still felt that strong connection with him sometimes .. he was there but not THERE.
The way you explained his entire transformation was amazing. Totally loved how he regained his memory and that it was connected to a moment only him and Geet had shared :) That was sweeet! Yay for Anne 😆 she helped him trigger his brain cells and regain his memory.
But the whole way of how his heart went DHAK DHAK at the mentioning of Geet's name .. her voice .. ahhh it was all out of a film .. I wasn't reading it .. I was watching it happen .. and it was just woohh ... got my heart racing too! 😍
And coming to the BEST part of the update .. MOHINDER THE DEVILs PARDAFAASH AND TAIN TAIN PHISSHHH!!! AHAH! Although I didn't blame Maan for totally hating on the three brothers for what he thought they did but the way he treated Mohinder was just MUAH MUAH! And finally Savitri came out with it all .. proud of her for standing up against her husband. Man .. how did this man build up all this selfish greed .. God knows. But that he got his due is just PERFECTO! Finally the Handa's can live in peace!
Ohh totally loved how the Maansi/Armaan/Maan connection was explained in this :)
Ok last thing I expected after that tense SHOWDOWN was people cracking up like there's no tomorrow 🤣 .. I was totally cracking up at the fact that they were CRACKING UP after all that. LOL! But it was like they were just laughing for all the right reasons .. letting go and releasing all this tension that they'd built up in their hearts for the past 7 years. UFF! To know that it all has ended and good times are ahead would make anyone happy na :) I especially loved that Geet got the chance to smile and laugh and crack up after so long.
Awwiiee she wasn't letting go of his hand 😳 That entire interaction was so sweet and romantic and adorable and just -- MAANEETLICIOUS for lack of a better word. Just perfect. 😍
Ok now I'm so looking forward to the epilogue. Cuz Maaneet still haven't had their SR. So we best be gettin one when you return from your holidaying! SAMJHI TUM! :P
Can't wait! Awesome awesome awesome ending to a completely awesome FF. The journey of reading this FF was amazing just like all your other FFs. The anticipation, the fright that Maan wouldn't be alive.. the crazy things we said to you when you left us hangin.. all of it.. this entire rollercoaster ride was AH-MAZING!
👏 You blow me away with each FF Jaz! Kudos to you and your talent!
Love,
Z
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

WOWWW!! Just WOW! Jaz, you didn't leave any stone unturned. Not only Geet but I couldn't help my own happy tears reading the entire reunion. ahh!! you're comment!! i swear...chori chori aayi hoon on IF to comment to your comment...cuz mom is yelling! since we have guests!! 😆

I knew you wouldn't be crazy to make it all a very big "dream" like you said. I hope you're still not mad about my "stuff it" 😆 Kya hai na Jaz .. your FFs do this to people .. they make us crazy and in turn we can sometimes give very crazy and unexpected responses lol. i love those true reactions...even if SOMEONE tells me to "stuff it" 😲
BUT BOY AM I GLAD THAT MAAN STAYED ALIVE 🥳 .. btw your little header note totally gave away that he was alive LOL wait...what did i say in the note...bata naa...im too lazy to go and look up what i wrote 😆
Coming to this update: WOOH! Am I happy or AM I HAPPY!? First off .. all the flashbacks were simply amazing. Especially loved to see that someone like Maan who stood up on his own two feet .. who had only a mother as family before he met Geet sort of got a new chance at life. To make himself bigger and better .. to let himself have that feeling of a "family" that he never got before Geet. exactly!! he's such an awesome person...and on the home front he's seen lots of heart break and sadness so i wanted to make up for that...i think family is so important and the type of family you have makes you the person you turn out to be...good or bad...😳 of course lots of factors matter...but i think family has a big influence...most of the time...
It was totally amazing to see that the Singh's took him in like that. Very few people left in the world who would do that for someone. Loved the brother-sister bonding he developed with Lucky and Anne. Boy you really gave us a shocker with this whole connection of Lucky and Anne with Pinky. you know...i originally did this for Prem and Heer and the "anne" character was just a random girl named Priya...so whenever someone mentions Anne im like wait...yeh kaun hai? 🤣
Awwieee Maan was always there for Geet 😳 Perhaps that's why she still felt that strong connection with him sometimes .. he was there but not THERE. so close yet so far was maan's tag line for the past 3 years...😆...paas rehke bhi thi doori...jaane kaisi thi majboori...lol...i want to watch kuch kuch hota hai now!! 😳
The way you explained his entire transformation was amazing. Totally loved how he regained his memory and that it was connected to a moment only him and Geet had shared :) That was sweeet! Yay for Anne 😆 she helped him trigger his brain cells and regain his memory. i just sooo love that song!! you have no idea how much!! that's why i've used it not only in this ff but in Ek Paal...that was Maneet's first dance on the pier 😳...and i thought what better trigger!! 😉
But the whole way of how his heart went DHAK DHAK at the mentioning of Geet's name .. her voice .. ahhh it was all out of a film .. I wasn't reading it .. I was watching it happen .. and it was just woohh ... got my heart racing too! 😍 he he...i could totally picture the cameram panning, Maan turning...and right at the exact moment the wind blowing!! it doesnt more filmy than that!!! 😆
And coming to the BEST part of the update .. MOHINDER THE DEVILs PARDAFAASH AND TAIN TAIN PHISSHHH!!! AHAH! Although I didn't blame Maan for totally hating on the three brothers for what he thought they did but the way he treated Mohinder was just MUAH MUAH! And finally Savitri came out with it all .. proud of her for standing up against her husband. Man .. how did this man build up all this selfish greed .. God knows. But that he got his due is just PERFECTO! Finally the Handa's can live in peace! yup...i thought people might complaining that "nothing" happened to Mohinder...but i figured what better way to punish him than to take away what he cared about most..his money!!
Ohh totally loved how the Maansi/Armaan/Maan connection was explained in this :) he he...thats why i had to make sure the names all fit!! 😆
Ok last thing I expected after that tense SHOWDOWN was people cracking up like there's no tomorrow 🤣 .. I was totally cracking up at the fact that they were CRACKING UP after all that. LOL! But it was like they were just laughing for all the right reasons .. letting go and releasing all this tension that they'd built up in their hearts for the past 7 years. UFF! To know that it all has ended and good times are ahead would make anyone happy na :) I especially loved that Geet got the chance to smile and laugh and crack up after so long. he he...of course...itni tension ke baad thoda bohot masti toh honi hi chahiyeh!! especially with a name like that...how can you not fall on the floor laughing!! 😛
Awwiiee she wasn't letting go of his hand 😳 That entire interaction was so sweet and romantic and adorable and just -- MAANEETLICIOUS for lack of a better word. Just perfect 😍 i think that word is perfect...it fits and we have every right to make our own words!!! 😉
Ok now I'm so looking forward to the epilogue. Cuz Maaneet still haven't had their SR. So we best be gettin one when you return from your holidaying! SAMJHI TUM! :P tauba tauba...tum log naa...khabi nahin sudroge!!! 😲
Can't wait! Awesome awesome awesome ending to a completely awesome FF. The journey of reading this FF was amazing just like all your other FFs. The anticipation, the fright that Maan wouldn't be alive.. the crazy things we said to you when you left us hangin.. all of it.. this entire rollercoaster ride was AH-MAZING! aww...glad that you liked it cuz i had a blast writing it!! 😳
👏 You blow me away with each FF Jaz! Kudos to you and your talent! stop it yaar...you're making me blush!!!
Love,
Z love you too!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
JAZ ek toh acche baccho ki tarah wait karo upar se madam says that hum nahi sudhrogi..gosh KALYUG..main itne acche bachon ki tarah ek baar bhi nahi kaha jaldi uodate like last time..still this..nahiii

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