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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Jazz! I know you're probably waiting for my lamba sa comments on both FFs right now but I'm so sorry I've been so busy these few days that I haven't gotten the chance to sit peacefully and read them!

But I shall get that chance by Monday FOR SURE and then you can look forward to my comments :) Sorry for the delay cuz I myself am dying to read the FFs but keep having to go out :( DARN VACATIONS! :P
Z

aare what sorry...enjoy your vacation...the updates will still be here when you get back...lol...i hope you will enjoy the updates...and cant wait to see your super entertaining comments!!! 🤗
JAZ
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woh saath hai toh zindagi hai,
her khushi sebandhagi hai,
unke bin toh na guzre pal the,
nikale humne kayi saal the,
aaj woh hai phir humare saamne,
ji karta hai waqt ko hum thamle,
bus dua nikle yehi man se,
rahe woh humare janam janam se,
na zindagi mein unke bina khushi thi,
na rang tha, na uska roop tha,
le gaye the woh zindagi ki kushiyaan,
bas paas humare woh sunsaan raaat thi,
woh raat ke yaadein,
woh kadve khathi meethi baatein,
bas unki yaddon ko baandh jeete chale gaye,
haathon ko thame gam peete chale gaye,
chal pade hain hum ab unke saath ek nai raah par,
banane apna ek asshiyaan ek ghar,
bus khushi maange unki,
jaan sawaare unki,
Bas rahe woh humari aur hum unke...
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Posted: 14 years ago
There u go...typed..sorry yaara was dng accounts and writinga report last night lost track...but did..i know its pretty crappy...i will write another one for u and i collide..i am gonna catch up on that right now..GOD bless me with ur tragedies..
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Posted: 14 years ago
^^ ok...now i totally get what you mean by speechless...that was a beautiful piece yaar...captured Geet's emotions sooo well!! omg..LOVED IT!! thanks sooo much!!
JAZ
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was crap Jaz...but i loved the last line,,thnks for liking it..dekha when u love something..u cant write anything more than that i loved it..🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
its awsome..seriously jab geet royi me too cried
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Posted: 14 years ago
omggg Ms.Jazzy...i am so upset with u...don't be so confused...i shall explain...
so i went through a jaz writing marathon..and read everything u wrote on Maaneet more than once...then i remembered that u use to write on Prem and Heer...but i had never read any of it...so i decided to search it up...and see what i could find...
so i came across Heer's Secert...i was like 22 parts...awesome...i get to read a completed story...boy was i wrong...i read non-stop...all the way till part 22...the part apparently Preet died in...which i think didn't happen...
so i found out that u stopped writing after that part...i was like so 😡..i was like how could she leave us hanging like that??
so there is my sob story of how abandoned i felt by u 😔...please tell me the end of that story...i might just die thinking about the mystery of Preet's death...
i know this was a bit random but...ya...Reya is random sometimes😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

omggg Ms.Jazzy...i am so upset with u...don't be so confused...i shall explain...

so i went through a jaz writing marathon..and read everything u wrote on Maaneet more than once...then i remembered that u use to write on Prem and Heer...but i had never read any of it...so i decided to search it up...and see what i could find... oh no...what did you find...that i copied Humesha Saath from Premeers Tanhai...lol...just changed the title!! 😆
so i came across Heer's Secert...i was like 22 parts...awesome...i get to read a completed story...boy was i wrong...i read non-stop...all the way till part 22...the part apparently Preet died in...which i think didn't happen... no...preet did die...you read right...i think that update was one of the saddest things i've ever written...because having PReet say bye to not only Geet but to Aarav...and when he tells Prem to love Heer and Aarav because he wont be here...i killed myself at that point!!! 😭
so i found out that u stopped writing after that part...i was like so 😡..i was like how could she leave us hanging like that?? i just didnt know what to do after that...that was a story where the union of Prem/Heer didnt feel right after Preet died...from my point of view...Heer couldnt ever forgive Prem even though it was an accident...his carelessness cost Heer her best friend...the one person that had been with her through it all...how could she forgive him...and maybe she could...but could she ever be with him again?
so there is my sob story of how abandoned i felt by u 😔...please tell me the end of that story...i might just die thinking about the mystery of Preet's death... there was no mystery...i explained how he died...check again...😆
i know this was a bit random but...ya...Reya is random sometimes😆 randomness is what makes life interesting!! 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh ya...that last chapter had me shedding tears not that it's something new with Jaz''s writing 😆...but i am so upset that Preet died...the man was pure gold...i was wooing for Preet and Heer to be together because this Prem just didn't bloody deserve her...so i guess Heer and Aarav live with each other...they have each other...Prem and Heer can never be a couple after what Prem has done...
but do tell me the stories u finished on Premeer...i would love to read more...i use to watch them before...they were a wonderful couple...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing FF!
I totally loved it!
But some parts were really sad!
Geet's brothers stabbed Maan!
But they didn't want to do that!
And it was all her father's doing...
That was really shocking...and he is a real jerk!
But all is well now..And glad that maan was fine!
Oh and I love geet's friendship with sasha...like sister!
Will be waiting for the epilogue ...!

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