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Posted: 14 years ago

^^ lmfao!! its not my fault..sangat ka assar hai...i have nadia, z, shreya, pix, sonia and a few other asking for a HOT maneet reunion scene...what am i supposed to make of that!?

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
^ Haha...i was wondering what u are going to do about that..😆...u could include one in the epilogue when Geet has finally digested the fact that indeed Maan is back for good...it's not like they are going to spare you if they don't get one..🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Writer Sahiba: That was pretty long and u leave me so tongue tied that i couldnt write anything..
so fine i will do wht i do best..post lines and u read them..thts quite a good punishemnt..ha i am so proud of that..hehe..waito i am typing..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reya: Obviously i will Kill Jaz if we dont get epi..and hola her HOT scenes are pretty decent..so i dont turn crimson red..tht saves me a lot..😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Commented twice for some reason so just read the bottom one.

Edited by GeetHSP - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Honestly, I dont know where I left off either so I'm just going to start at the last update. Here's my running commentary:

- I can so relate to that throbbing feeling you get in your head when you get up. As always, I love how the scenes are so realistic. The opening scenes are so descriptive! It's awesome.
- For some reason when she's coming down the stairs...I hear the piano part in Tere Pyaar Mein Jal Raha Hoon right before the 3rd verse. And the situation just reminds me of "Meri sanson mein, in niga ho mein, dil ki raho mein...tum hi tum to ho"
- That part where she thinks that its a dream...thats so sad. It's literally heart-breaking.
- "I'm coming home, I'm coming home. Tell the world that I'm coming home." Welcome back Maan :D We missed you...it's been seven LONG years :P
- Sigh...after that forehead kiss I would have collapsed in his big, strong arms...that would be an awesome Geet scene to see! Geet fainting from a kiss...LOL. Maan would tease her relentlessly!
- That was a beautiful story for the sari...who knew one item of clothing could have that much history? I really loved that.
- Maan's heart did a flip? Hmm...I'm so used to reading it from the girl's point of view but its refreshing to hear it from the guy's.
- Haha I didn't think he would kiss her anyways!
- "The kiss was theirs and it was long over due." Love that line.
- I don't think I've ever mentioned this but your little notes about ages during flashbacks are always so helpful! And greatly appreciated :D
- Dr. Garewal...sigh...that just reminds me of Rahul. I dearly miss my Rahul & Muskaan. They were the first DMG couple that I was introduced to...then KaJen..then Abhi and Nikki and etc.
- Anne and Lucky are so adorable.
- I love the bits and pieces Maan is remembering about Geet during the song
- It's good to see Savitri finally standing up to Mohinder like that
- LOL at the random English between Savitri and Mohinder. But I liked the scene. I wonder what Savitri (in the actual show) was like with her husband (as in Maan's grandfather). I bet they were quite the pair :P
- Lakku..I don't even know where to start.
Sigh...it was a long but amazing journey through this FF and I have loved every single part of it. I can't wait to read the epilogue now that they are back together again :D ...and Maan is alive...that's always nice. To see him in full form instead of having him alive through flashbacks. You've done an amazing job with this one Jaz. From the love angle but also the family angle. The relationships you've built in this...are...just wow. Especially Pinky and Geet's. I'm sad its ending but I'm so excited to read the final part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jazz! I know you're probably waiting for my lamba sa comments on both FFs right now but I'm so sorry I've been so busy these few days that I haven't gotten the chance to sit peacefully and read them!
But I shall get that chance by Monday FOR SURE and then you can look forward to my comments :) Sorry for the delay cuz I myself am dying to read the FFs but keep having to go out :( DARN VACATIONS! :P
Z
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

^ Haha...i was wondering what u are going to do about that..😆...u could include one in the epilogue when Geet has finally digested the fact that indeed Maan is back for good...it's not like they are going to spare you if they don't get one..🤣

I KNOW!! these besharam's wont spare me if i dont give them something...but main kya karoon...itni bholi bhali joh hoon...have you read some of the stuff that goes on in these FF!!? there's one particular FF...tauba tauba...mujeh toh padne mein bhi sharam aati hai!! 😲
JAZ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

Writer Sahiba: That was pretty long and u leave me so tongue tied that i couldnt write anything..

so fine i will do wht i do best..post lines and u read them..thts quite a good punishemnt..ha i am so proud of that..hehe..waito i am typing..

yeh toh ghalat baath hai naa...saab yehi kehte hai...that they are speechless and cant write...boo!! not fair..😭...vaise...kaab tune kaha that you are "typing"...im still waiting!! 😉
JAZ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: GeetHSP

doh doh posts 🤣...someone got excited!! 😆...*hug*
Honestly, I dont know where I left off either so I'm just going to start at the last update. Here's my running commentary: you missed the update before that as well...lol...when Maan really made is entry...and maybe even the one before that...not sure though...😕
- I can so relate to that throbbing feeling you get in your head when you get up. As always, I love how the scenes are so realistic. The opening scenes are so descriptive! It's awesome. when i put that as the teaser...people were after me thinking i was going to pull an ekta and make it all a dream!! 😆
- For some reason when she's coming down the stairs...I hear the piano part in Tere Pyaar Mein Jal Raha Hoon right before the 3rd verse. And the situation just reminds me of "Meri sanson mein, in niga ho mein, dil ki raho mein...tum hi tum to ho" lol...you are just lattoo over that song arent you? 😆...but i agree...that piano part is hauntingly romantic...and the lyrics...perfect too!! wow...i never realized that!! 😲
- That part where she thinks that its a dream...thats so sad. It's literally heart-breaking.
- "I'm coming home, I'm coming home. Tell the world that I'm coming home." Welcome back Maan :D We missed you...it's been seven LONG years :P lol...when you started "singing"...i was like wait...i didnt have that in my update...but then i realized you were singing to welcome Maan home...😆...toh lage raho...😛
- Sigh...after that forehead kiss I would have collapsed in his big, strong arms...that would be an awesome Geet scene to see! Geet fainting from a kiss...LOL. Maan would tease her relentlessly! tauba...Maan toh vaise hi teases her relentlessly!! aur kya bahana chahiyeh!! 😉,...but i agree...that would be just awesome!!! i love Maneet!!!
- That was a beautiful story for the sari...who knew one item of clothing could have that much history? I really loved that. my mom actually has a saree like that...i love it...so i took it...🤣...i wore it to a babyshower once...and everyone was like oh where did you get it...im like...oh...its only 28years old 😉
- Maan's heart did a flip? Hmm...I'm so used to reading it from the girl's point of view but its refreshing to hear it from the guy's. how can it not...its Geet...she's the only one that can make Maan Singh Khurana's heart flip...just like he makes our hearts FLIP!! 😍
- Haha I didn't think he would kiss her anyways!
- "The kiss was theirs and it was long over due." Love that line.
- I don't think I've ever mentioned this but your little notes about ages during flashbacks are always so helpful! And greatly appreciated :D im very particular about that stuff...i literally had to make a timeline when i first started so that i could keep track of all these characters and their ages...i dont want it to get all meshed up and look retarted...😆
- Dr. Garewal...sigh...that just reminds me of Rahul. I dearly miss my Rahul & Muskaan. They were the first DMG couple that I was introduced to...then KaJen..then Abhi and Nikki and etc. im a total Kajen fan...KaSu wasnt bad either...but shilpa...i couldnt stomach that girl...dont know...just something about her doesnt sit well with me!! and omg...subhankar and kirti...oh and sashank and padma!! omg...they had the best background score!! 😳
- Anne and Lucky are so adorable.
- I love the bits and pieces Maan is remembering about Geet during the song
- It's good to see Savitri finally standing up to Mohinder like that
- LOL at the random English between Savitri and Mohinder. But I liked the scene. I wonder what Savitri (in the actual show) was like with her husband (as in Maan's grandfather). I bet they were quite the pair :P lol..that english part just sounded better in english so i went with it...also it kind of showed that she's an educated woman too...housewife hua toh kya hua...she's a smart and tough cookie!! 😳
- Lakku..I don't even know where to start. ha ha...good one naa!! 🤣
Sigh...it was a long but amazing journey through this FF and I have loved every single part of it. I can't wait to read the epilogue now that they are back together again :D ...and Maan is alive...that's always nice. To see him in full form instead of having him alive through flashbacks. You've done an amazing job with this one Jaz. From the love angle but also the family angle. The relationships you've built in this...are...just wow. Especially Pinky and Geet's. I'm sad its ending but I'm so excited to read the final part! glad that you enjoyed it luv!! 🤗...you dont know how many hours i put into this story...not just typing it up...but the plots...the characters..the twists...oh sheesh...especially the twists...the had to be perfectly penned to have the right impact...gonna work on the epilogue soon...hopefully it will be up on monday 😳

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