FF: Humesha Saath 1 - Link to 2 pg150 - Page 101

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

a harmless little soul that can make me fill tubs of tear drops ;)
jaz I'm still new to ur writings...This is my 2nd ff of urs that I was reading. oh...you're a newbie!! eeks!! issi liyeh toh...he he...sorry for making you cry...if you're interested...one of my personal favorite stories that i've done is called "Ek Paal"...Maneet story...i loved to see your thoughts if you want to read...its completed...so you dont have to worry about cliffhangers!! 😉 I just luv ur writings. The other one that I was reading was u & I collide... I left it a little while ago. I don't think maan n geet will b united in the end... They probably will find solace in their lives but that's all. It's a little too close to reality and I mostly come here to run away from reality... oh...sorry...but ya...no maneet in that one...i just posted that disclaimer on that thread with the last update...let me tell you...not many were happy...but i totally understand...getting away from reality and all...its funny cuz though all of this is imaginary...i try to make it as realistic as possible... 😆I can read stories that go brutally painful but have a nice ending but ending means alot to me. So don't think I've left it coz of u, it's me who refuses to read reality. lol...phir toh you wont want to read a LOT of my stuff...cuz though some of my endings all work out nice and neat...not all of them do 😉...what can i say...im a sadist as they all say 😳

Do u have a link for all of ur work? yes...here it is...of course i say...read with caution...but i hope you read...cuz i'd love to see your thoughts...😃 i suggest start with the OS...

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1629407

The ones that r finished... How do I know which ones have a happy ending and which one doesn't ? that you wont know...its just gonna be the luck of the draw...but one thing...dont let the title or caption fool you...because nothing is ever as it seems with me! 😛
I don't read sad endings... For a simple reason ... They make me sad ( ha ha ha) valid point...but i love sad endings...because as painful as they are...most of the time...they are utterly beautiful and those are the ones i remember most! 😳

Originally posted by: -dia-

Jaz ...I gonna kill U ...U really gave me stroke with your teaser ...But I love U ...U r just an amazing writer. he he...i knew how you all would interpret it...so i just had to do it!! 😈

It was Brilliant Jaz ...Fantastic⭐️

The best Part Savitri blasting at Mohinder ...but I felt he still needs to go more that was not enough for what he had done to them. what better way than to take away his money...and make it so that his girls..the ones he more/less despised...had everything he ever wanted!! 😉

I liked the way how u came up with idea with Lakku the lallu crack after all those emotional reunion. thodi si comedy toh laana hi pada...or else they'd all be crying buckets...thanks for mentioning it! 😳

"Jis duniya mein Geet zinda hai, uss duniya ko chodkar Maan kaise jaa sakta hai?"

the Best line ...loved it!!! omg!! thats my favorite line toO!!! 😳 i nearly melted while writing it! 😆

Beautiful ending ...waiting for epilogue.

Originally posted by: mchopra

Jaz: Hai hai..she is botehred abt comments not her freind..i am💔..

as a writer i demand lamba comments...ESPECIALLY from friendS!! *hmph*

JAZ

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

for a person who was stalking the thread for updates, i know i am awfully late with my comments...so sowieee...but this was just a fab update...it deserved a fab comment in return😃 lol...thats what i was wondering...i was like...mera yeh stalkar kahaan gayi? 😲

So this was the first thing i read...and i say i made a pretty good choice cause the update was like awesommeee😃 he he...maybe it should have been the last considering most werent happy with you and i collide...

OMG OMG OMG...so Maan is actually actually actually back..i am happy to know that you didn't want to torture us by making it a dream... as much as the torture would have been fun😉...im not ekta...sorry...but...no elaborate dream sequences...they used to make me want to strangle her!!! 😡

But damn i was emotional reading it...i could understand Geet's sentiments...she could hardly believe that her love is back for good... lol...i think even you guys could barely believe it! 😆

Maan's story was quite interesting...i was wondering why he didn't contact her for seven years...but then u cleared it up... i knew that his return had left tons of questions...so i had to clear them up...again...i have to finish all my tracks and make them some-what logical...unlike ekta 🤢

The Singh family was absolutely adorable...i could hug them 🤗..it's hard to find people who accept you like that...but all thanks to them...Maan was given a new life... right!? if only everyone else had half the heart that family did...the would would be a much better place 😳

and when he did get his memory back...he stayed away for three years😲..but it was the right thing to do...i loved the way he came back and claimed Geet as his own not giving a damn about her family thinks..or who was there to look at them...of course i am happy that the misunderstanding was cleared about her brothers.. it killed him to stay away...but he had to do it...like Maan said...those Handa's had to pay because they hurt his geet...the made her cry...and that was unforgivable!! 😉

Lucky is Maan's brother...i did not see that coming at all...leave it up to you to some kind of twist... honestly...when i had first introduced that character...it was just a random guy...it wasnt until later that i threw Maan into that family and made the story on that track...but im glad you enjoyed the twist 😃

the whole update was awesome...without a doubt...but there was one thing that had me jumping up and down in joy...do u wanna guess?

if you guess Geet's moon...then u are right...i was OMG OMG OMG 😲..no she didn't...but yes...yes she did...she told her no good of a husband...he deserved it 1100%...i can't explain how happy i was that Mohinder finally got what was long time coming for him😃 Geets "moon"...tauba!!! 😲...i dont even want to go there!! 🤣...but i think you meant MOM...so ya...she had to tell off that scum!!

Lots happened in the last chapter but it was everything great...glad that Geet can finally be happy with the man she loves...can't wait for the epilogue... so much to do...but no idea what to do...😆...but epilogue on monday...*fingers crossed* 😛

Thanks Jazzy for such a beautiful story

and since u ended this...does it mean u will Roshni's stories ?😳 hmm...thats definitely a possibility...just gotta plan those out properly...i have general ideas but i have to organize them 😳...but im SOO HAPPY you're interested in Roshni! 😳

Originally posted by: ajenn

Hi dear. Thx for such beautiful story. Thou am sad u had ended this but am happy that it ended for a good reason. What else we can ask for rather than Maaneet to be together. he he...that seems to be the most common thought...Maneet 24/7...but im happy you enjoyed it!! 😳
Glad to know someone was there to take care of Maan went he lost his memory.
A family had took him as their own. That so sweet of Mr.Singh's family.He made his plot work correctly to revenge back those who separated him from his Geet.He took revenge for every tears that Geet had shed. i had to have someone there for Maan...he needed to come back as the Maan Singh Khurana...to punish all those that made his geet cry...and...mission accomplished!! 😛
Totally unexpected from Savitri side. She burst out when anyone even her own husband harm her children. That is was called as mother's love. as they say...mamma lions will roar when their cubs are in danger...and...savirti proved that!! 😃
Loved the way Mohinder was been chased out of the house. There u go beggar!!! He is just waste now.
But why u named Lucky as Lukku. Thou it sounds cute but its weird name as well. Poor Lukku he going to be teased by his wife throughout his life. thats the point 😆...the weirdness is going kill him!! but think of it...more than half of the nicknames our loved ones give us...they are just plain embarrassing!! 😲
Lovely update with the last part btwn Maaneet .. "Humesha".
Looking forward for ur epoligoue. Will that be a long long update as usual. ill be very happy if so... 😃 will try 😳

PS: btw..."Kaise nahin kaar sakta? Main toh kaar chukka hoon," Perm said. Did i missed out sth. Is that Prem? who is he? that was a blooper on my part 🤣..i had first did this story for Premeer and the lead was Prem...apparently microsoft word didnt catch all the changes!