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1/2 Month Later ( The proposal, The Big Fat Wedding, The Ever After)
Panchi had given Sid 1/2 month to manifest , and redeem his sins. Panchi had no doubt Sid had changed.But , she also knew he could earn forgiveness easily, after what he put Abhay, Piya, his parents ,and family through. His dad had learn to tolerate him , but it would take a while for him to make up to his dad. Haseena, Abhay, and Piya had forgiven him a longtime ago. These 1/2 months had been the most amazing chapter of her life. It had been full of fun. Sid everyday called her, and made sure they talked hours on the phone. He had not let her out of her sight. Everday of the week, her office would be covered with flowers. Sid ravished her every days. He had done more than she could ask for . Today, he had said he had a surprise for her. She wondered what all the fuss was about in her family members downstairs when she heard the noises. She did not anything, and she felt like being sidelined. They were all laughing at her today, and constantly reminding her today's would be her special day. She did not want to guess the surprise. She wanted to shocked when she saw the surprise herself. She had no desire of asking her family members, but she constantly wonder why they were all smiling, and laughing at her at the same time. Has her looked or face had changed. Panchi got dressed, and left in the limo Sid had sent for her.
As soon as see got in the car, She was blindfolded. She was wisked away, and kidnapped after she had gotten in the car. She could feel or sense anything. They were people who were holding her against her will.Panchi was flown in private jet, and her eyes blind folded, and her her hands being tied together. When the plan landed in Goa, she was taken to the private beach. As soon as the people who had kidnapped her, reached their destination. She was released from her blind flood, and her cuff links.
As soon Panchi was released , She wondered what the hell was she doing in a private beach in Goa, surrounded by curtains, a table for two, and a every where she looked it had been decorated with white veils,and linen. It looked like a romantic date designed right out of catalogue of a magazine. Soon, she was thrown flowers from the helicopter , and it was Sid. Sid jumped in a parachute,and kept a distance. He was smiling. As she walks towards him in confusion, she saw a near band was slow and small music, and more and more flowers were being thrown at her.When she saw Sid, she hit him hard on the chest.
Panchi-Sid! What is all this?
Sid: Hey beautiful! It's my way of showing u how much u meant to me, and how much you have changed me. Panchi! I am changed man than I was year ago. Before , my whole heart had full of bitter ,and hatred . Even though it might not beat, it still managed to have those emotions in tacked somewhere. When you came in to my life, everything fluctuated. U taught this man of steel to love.,and to care . U became a light, and my reason of hope. These 1/2 months have been wonderful, and the some of the most extraditionary memories are from these 1/2 months. This 1/2 month has passed so blissfully, u guided me to the right path, and reunited my long lost family. I have no words to describe how grateful , I am to you. Every day , I have fallen more and more in love with you, and I am still. I know I am in irrevocably in love with you,and you are missing puzzle in life.Panchi Dobriyal! I have already asked permission from your parents. And now I ask you permission, he said taking a ring out. Sid knelt beside her . Panchi ! I lov you so much that it hards to describe how much I love you! I wanna share my whole eternity with you. I wanna see your face when I wake up in the morning . Even though we might not grow old, I wanna be seen with you in fifty years. U complete me Panchi every inch, and every way. I wanna spend the rest my life with you. I can't picture my life wiht out you. Will make me the happiest vampire by being my wife, my mentor,and my partner?
Panchi overwhelmed with emotions, and tears , the only thing that was popping out of her mouth was Yes ! Yes!. Sid slipped the huge diamond ring on her finger, and kissed her passionately from forehead to her lips.
Sid- So Mrs. Siddarth Mehra Raichand! Now were are engaged! And you are officially mine. I will do this. Sid shouted I love you Panchi everywhere around the beach. He hugged her, embraced in his arms,and kissed her continusally. Panchi and Sid enjoyed rest of their day on the beach,and Sid had called the Dobriyals, and his brother to inform the good news . Madhu stated panicking, and started the preparations.
Panchi resting her head on Siddarth- So! that's why Misha, Mumma, Papa, and Piya were laughing at me hah!
Sid; I told them in the morning, and your mum was jumping up and down. And , you know them they could not wait to spill the beans,and they were laughing at that.I want to remember this day forever. He said kissing her.
Sid and Panchi were married immediately according to Hindu's rites, and traditions. Panchi became a vampire on the day of her wedding night. She was transformed by Sid . She sacrificed her human life to be with him . This was the new start for Panchi and future.
So that leaves us to come back!!! To present day. I realized typing 5 chapter in one day is not good way to divide my time. Next , Time there is going to Abhay and Piya only. After that , I will shift to two chapter on Kabir and Misha's married Life.Which will bring us to the pregnancy track after that. I am sorry for not making Sidchi's marriage track longer , but I thought this was the best way because If describe their wedding night at all and went further . I won't feel excited for writing Abhiya's sughraat. So forgive sidchi's fan, but I will promise there are always going to be chapters filled with their scenes. And , also chapters on just them in the future.😳


Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago
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Chapter 4 The Seduction( PIya and Abhay's big night)Location Abhay and Piya Private beach house on the outskirts of Capri Island , Italy
Every girl who gets married dreams of that one special night. To enjoy all the pleasure , she has been waiting for ages. She wants her husband to ravish her, kiss her passionately, take her in, and mark as her own. It's the first wedding night fantasy we all women have stored in. No matters what their experiences are before, every girl has dreams of this night. Piya had the same the dreams and aspirations. She was a wife now. Panchi, Misha, and Ruhi gifted Piya a sexy lingerie from victoria secret to seduce Abhay. Piya knew Abhay did have any desire to take their relationship to the next level. He said it might held some danger for her. She did not care. She wanted Abhay every shape or form. She wanted him to claim and take her body.Piya quickly dressed in her lingerie, and hid it.Her plan was to seduce Abhay, and get that stupidness out of his head. Abhay could be the most headstrong man on the planet. The room was set. She had light the room with candles, and there were traces of roses everywhere. Her outfit was ready. The only thing missing was her husband Abhay. Gosh! She thought it feel so virtuous to call him her husband.


Abhay enters the room. He was completely baffle led seeing the decoration around the room. The room was decorated for some one's wedding night. O no Piya! u did not! I warned you. We would consummate our marriage after you were turned. Abhay thought. Shit! Hell! IF he sees Piya , he sure was going to lose his control. He had get away for here, and piya he could not deny that he also wanted this badly. But, he could harm Piya. A mating between a vampire,and human would de dangerous. And, he was sure he was going to lose control. That was thing about Piya! She did not need to attempt to do anything to him. He just could not help what his mind would picture as soon he saw Piya. She always took his breath away. Before anything drastic happens, Abhay tipped out of the room. Piya ! Came out in her outfit. She put the song I know you want me ! by Pitbull. Abhay was lost it now. Piya danced around him, and Abhay tried best no to show any care. Abhay tried to stay calm, and any lose balance at the sight of Piya. Piya instantly closed the door to their bedrooms, when Abhay was about leave instantly.

Piya: Stop Abhay! She said

Abhay: Piya! Please stop it ! You know I already told you this this cannot happen. And , What the hell r u wearing? u like a s**t. He said turning off the music, and how could put on such a disgusting song.Has prostitution become your new hobby. Go! I free you! You can go sleeping around with man,and be a wh**e. Abhay yelled Piya hoping she would just be broken, and it burned him to say this Piya. Piya was hurt badly.But, she was adamant on not giving up.

Piya: Abhay! We are man and wife now.

Abhay: So! That does not mean we have rush in to. We can give it time .Abhay said brushing hairs from her side, and kissing her forehead.

Piya: I am being stubborn I know Abhay! This what I want. I am you wife, and I want you claim me . Abhay , I know you worrying about losing control

Abhay: What do u think Piya? I am a not human. Vampire desires are twice more than of human. I can lose my control, and danger you life He said banging at door, and getting irked.

Piya: I know you won't. U never have lost control Abhay. U have always kept ur boundaries. Please , break the boundaries tonight. I love you Abhay.

Abhay: What the f**k is wrong with you? Are you f**king insane? This is a not f**king romance novel. Who gave you this idea? Who gave you the permission to do this? You have any idea what bruises u might have end of this? Why don't u understand the logic? he said angrily throwing, and started lightening off the candle and insulting her, and he slap her.

Piya was frightened, and finally gathered some nerves to answerr Abhay: Abhay! I can't take any more of your bullshit anymore. Sometimes u willingly come closer to me, and then again u maintain ur distance, Every time u have done this, I have stayed clam. Why the hell did you marry me for? At the reception you were all cheesy? Now , you are like tiger all of a sudden. I can't handle your mood swings anymore. U could have explained to me another way instead of using force. Worse , you called me a s**t, slapped me, a wh**e, and said prostitution was my new Abhay.How dare you Abhay? Is this you? A biploar man who always be happy at one time,and sad the next. You insulted me Abhay today, and I am your wife. Not some cheap trash you can use and throw. She said beating his chest, and breaking down.

Abhay could not see Piya in this state. He cursed himself, and ran away from the room. He went to take walk in the cool air. He had to go Piya, and explain it to her. He could not lose her, and he did not what had gotten over him. Abhay went back the room, and picks up the sobbing Piya by the bed. He held Piya , and let her stand slowly.
Abhay: Please don't cry Piya! You know I can't see you crying. I am really sorry Piya! You know i want you be mine in every shape in form. I am scared Piya. By insulting maybe I thought , you would run and walk away. I should have used a another approach instead of being so rational. Please ! Piya stop crying. I promise from this forth day something like this never happens. U know I can't hear any insult against you.

Abhay gives in to the temptation. Abhay knew he could not handle it anymore, and it was too late turn back. He kisses her passionately on the lips. Piya completely speechless, and effect of his kiss gives in to the temptation too. This time! Abhay shower Piya with kisses , with the urge , and passion like he never wanted before. He kisses her down her from forehead to her throat, her cheeks, kisses her tear up. Abhay kisses every inch of Piya's whole body . It sent chill through Piya's spines at Abhay touch warm sensation and tingles through out her whole body . She responses back . She kisses him back with the same heat, passion and intensity. The heat she was filling Abhay's touch was unexplainable. Abhay slowly picks up,and lies her on the bed. He kisses her again with the same passion, and intensity before. Piya bight his ears. Abhay knew he had lose his control, and now he could return back. Abhay makes sure that the door to their bedrooms are locked, and he turns the lamp off. The newly weds get lost in their world where it's filled with their love only.

Later .......................................................
Piya lying on Abhay's chest.


Abhay: Piya! Did i hurt you today?

Piya: Abhay! You were a perfect gentleman, and what you have not hurt me at all. She said giving him a reassurance by kissing him passionately on his lips. The question is Abhay do you regret making love to me.

Abhay; No Piya! In fact, I am so happy! All my wishes have come true!
Piya; Is this a dream or reality Abhay?

Abhay cupped Piya's face.

Abhay: Whatever today happened because we loved each other. We did because of our love. Piya believe in this reality. It's not fiction Piya! It's your reality and mine too. You are my wife, my soul mate and the reason of my existence. I love you Piya. I always will . You are my life now. And remember , i never wanna see tears on your eyes. I want see my Piya happy, blushing, and glowing all the time. Remember! Your the primary reason for my happiness, and I am yours. Yours only. And , I want us to spend rest of our life this way filled with love only, and nothing else.

Piya was moved and touched on what Abhay had said.

Piya: I want the same Abhay. Each day, when I wake up besides you in the morning.The first thing I wanna see you Abhay. I love you. She says hugging , and holding him tighter.

Abhay :Piya I will be back , Just give me a moment .Abhay quickly got dressed in jeans, and a t shirt. Piya took showered , and dressed in her p.j.s went on to look for Abhay. Abhay covered her eyes,and showed her two tickets.

Piya: Abhay! What are these tickets for?

Abhay: Our honeymoon silly! Where newlyweds go after marriage to spend time alone. Do I need to define it for you? He said lightly hitting her forehead. He hands her the tickets .

Piya: Abhay we are going to Venice, Paris, Switzerland, Hungray and ending our trips in Romania. These are lot of palaces.

Abhay: My love ! The more cities mean we can spend more time with each other. We have to stop by Romania because we have see some counselors members of the Vampire . They have give their blessing. I did not want us to go to Romania, but we have to

Piya: i always wanted go to Romania. Especially, the dracuala. does he exist?

Abhay: My innocent , and sweet Piya has transitioned in to mighty lion. Wow! Thank you Lord! He said teasing her,and pretending to pray

Piya: Shut up! She said tightly holding his shoulders,and dragging him to their bedroom. We have to get some sleep,and ger ready for the reception.


WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEDUCTION chapter ended . Guys, I know this is really bad, but I will try to make it more special. I will edit it , if you guys give me more writing tips. I wanted to keep it p.g. but at the same at the smoky fire at it. I failed miserably did not I. If i could make this X rated, trust me I would written a lot better. I had to cut so many scenes out bec this is a public forum. I did the page to keep it p.g. for all to read. Hope!!!!!!!!!! please don't throw eggs,and tomatoes at me because of this horrible chapter. Writing this chapter was easy, but not editing. There are 13 years olds so it was hard. Well, toodles now. Remember comment, comment, and vote. Sorry this chapter was short . From on the chapter are gonna be longer filled with Abhiya romances, and scenes. There 2 news entries. They are vampires. They are not evil let me assure u that.there is an important note on page 15. plz read it.
Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago
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Chapter 2 (The reception continued)

Piya wore Abhay's favorite color black dress designed personally for her by Christian Dior(If you wanna know what the dress looks likes just watch the v.m. from the previous chapter). It was a beautiful black dress filled with embodiery, and roses on the back of it. Piya was so excited to have her first dance as Mrs. Abhay Raichand. Piya had gotten ready for the reception when Rumi walked in.
Piya- I am so happy you came . Piya said giving her a hug
Rumi- R u kidding? I am gonna miss my bro's wedding. Piya sis, He is happy after a long time. How could I miss his happiest day of you life, and dada's . So did you like my entry, and the dresses.
Piya laughing: The surprise was really good! I am have give you credit for that, and the dresses I have heard pretty bad tales from Abhay how you tortured the designers. Piya said hitting her shoulders
Rumi- U r my soon to be sis in Law. And , I wanted the world and Dehradhun , This Italian town of Capri to witness our splendor and riches. She said lifting her hands, and acting like a king. Piya and Rumi both laughed. Abhay came, and asked what all the fuss was about
Abhay: Were you two making fun of me ? Abhay said walking towards them
Rumi- No we were having a sisterly bond! But some strange rude man walked in ,and interrupted that.
Abhay: So I am stranger Ha! He said Pouting
Rumi-Stop acting childish! Why did come here anyway?
Abhay: To see my wife. Why is that a crime?
Rumi- In fact it is in my rule book, Husbands can interfere between wife and their sister conversations.
Abhay: In rule book not mine! He said and kissed Piya.
Rumi- It's not even you wedding night yet. U already both started. Let's keep p.g here not cross the line of rated.
Abhay: Since when have you become so smart?
Rumi- Since, I took some time off from u crazy brothers .
Sid and Panchi came in to join them
Panchi- Whhy have you guys left for the reception yet?
Piya: Ask Abhay?







Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Apple Of our eyes ( The good news)
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this time abhiya ff will be longer than ever.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey u didn't pm me....but that sidchi part was awesome hpoe in show ilso it happens but if it does then all the curiosity and excitement will die........
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Originally posted by: ilove99

hey u didn't pm me....but that sidchi part was awesome hpoe in show ilso it happens but if it does then all the curiosity and excitement will die........



I have not p.med anybody . i am going to right now. u finished the sidchis' track thanks u so much for liking it.. i am working on Abhay and Piya wedding reception I have to lengthened that a little bit. Sidchi part track took longer time than expected
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Posted: 14 years ago
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guys stick around Abhay and Piya reception, and the "big night" will be finished as soon, i get my energy back. and shift myself in to abhiya's mood.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved all the parts👏
the sidchi part was good😳
sid running off to the elders to get executed was like shock to me😲😆
i woulndn't have been so shocked if it was abhay😆 sid has surely changed😳😆
the proposal of sid was also very good😳
thanks for the pm😉
update soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey syria..
awesome update...dear👍🏼
sidchi part was mindblowing...all the emotions..love..passion...sacrifice..it felt so real...😳
& rumi n piya r bonding quite well....😊
thanks for the pm...dear..🤗
update soon...can't wait for abhiya's honeymoon...wat to do i m a TOTAL BESHARAM...when it comes to these two...☺️
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awsm nd amazing dear.
superb.
plz add me to ur pm list.
cant w8 for d nxt part.
luv
vritika

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