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the wedding was very nice !!
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thanx fr the pm:)i really liked the story keep going!!
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Amazing nd awsm ff nd partz dear.
simply outstanding.
realy realy luv d part.
plz plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
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wooow...
wat an update....AWESOME...👏
everything was perfect....👍🏼
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Here We go I will have Abhhiya wedding longer. and the honeymoon, but I had to type this for luvarti. Others have to wait couple of days.
Chapter 3 ( Flashback/ Confession/ Marriage of Siddarth, and Panchi)
Panchi is remebering dancing with Sid, how all things had changed in the course of 8 months.
When you fall in love, it is a temporary madness. It erupts like an earthquake, and then it subsides. And when it subsides, you have to make a decision. You have to work out whether your roots are become so entwined together that it is inconceivable that you should ever part. Because this is what love is. Love is not breathlessness, it is not excitement, it is not the desire to mate every second of the day. It is not lying awake at night imagining that he is kissing every part of your body. No... don't blush. I am telling you some truths. For that is just being in love; which any of us can convince ourselves we are. Love itself is what is left over, when being in love has burned away... So go ahead fall , and be happy) were the advice two couples had given me , when Danish had broken my heart.I had learned to pick my pieces, and learned to live for my loved ones. I had learned that that loser did not deserve me. I was a strong woman, and I wanted to become example for womens who had their heartbreak. I thought I could find lover never again , until I met Sid. Everyday, I saw him , I came to fall more and more for him. He was a player, and womanizer. Worse, he slept with married women, and ransacked their married life. But, after he had confessed he loved me . I thought he changed 360 degree completely because of he had fallen head over heels over me ,as I had for him. When Piya(my sister later I found out) tried to warn me , I never believed her. I refused to believe Sid was a monster, a sinister, and heartless cold monster. But, I was wrong. It all came crashing down like a tons of bricks, and I felt tusunami of emotions. Danish had died tried to warning me. I saw his true face. I learned how he killed innocent victims, and try to ruin my sister. How he used me like a cheap trash, and a dirt. I crused myself for being such a idoit, and I just wanted to live no more. Why did God have to punish me. Am I not worthy of love, trust, and security?Am I always headed for doom , whomever I come to fall for? Don't I deserve a partner who will love me uncoditioanlly, irrevociably, laugh at faults, and who is always going to be cheerful see my face in the morning? Don't I have a future. Sid, Why on earth did you do this to me? I loved you so much.U r murder, a monster, and selfless bas***d. I cried locked in myself in my room shouting, and trying to release the pain of betryal
Sid
It's had been almost two centuries , since I had been roaming the earth as lifeless body. I covered my insecurities, fear, and my pain by utlizing women, and throwing them. That's what does to a lifeless soul who got rejected by a woman he loved, and a woman who ripped her brother, and tour right out of his heart. I thought I would always be up for rejecttion and humiliations. I had finally found love, and its all gone now. Saying this Sid cried and shouted his pain. Sid had finally began towards redemption through Panchi, and had ended up falling for her. Sid had changed, but Panchi seeing his monster had been scared and ran away from him. Sid had hoped to have a future with Panchi. But, It had been lost and gone at once because when he was about to set everything right , his true idenity had been revealed. When he was finally ready to confess , his love ran away and yelling at him. She had demanded answer sobbing, and crying. But , Sid had no courage to speak to her. Sid could not live to witness the hatred , disgust, and her fear of him.Sid decided he was going to speak to Panchi, and try to explain himself to her. If she does not give him a chance, he would disappear from her life, and be her shadow.
The Dobriyals Mansion

Madhu, Misha, Kabir, and Misha all were trying to push and opened the door. Panchi had locked herself in and hesitant to get out. She had locked herself for the past . Arnav could not bear to his beloved daughter in pool of misery . That bas***d Sid, he cursed. He had fooled all us? Arnav thought; How an earth could have been so imbecile on Sid. Sid had pretended to be the perfect gentleman, and he wanted to press charge him for all sins he had consigned. But, he had nobody render his testimony, and side with him. What would he charge him her for shattering his daughter's life. God ! Knows what could happened . HE could not open the door because Panchi was threatening if they did, she would kill herself. Arnav, and other were in jeopardy, and did know what could done to diffuse the situation. He called Abhay and Piya hoping they could handle the situation. Arnav calls Abhay, and Piya and tell him everything that occurred. Abhay and Piya were Maithali's palace trying to conceal the hidden secrets. The government had ordered it to converted in to museum, and Raichands could not risk to let Govertment have access to all of the palace.

Piya got a call from Arnav and picked it up.

Arnav: Piya! Please come to Dehradhun soon!

Piya: Why? What happened uncle?

Arnav: Panchi found out about Sid. She has locked herself in the room. I think she has cut herself. She has not ate in ,and the she won't let anyone in. She threatened if we open the door she would kill herself. I don't what to do? Arnav was shaking and sobbing when talking to the Piya on the phone

Piya: Piya's mouth dropped , and she panicked. She called for Abhay , sobbing, and desperately calling for him.

Piya: Abhay! Panchi discovered Sid's truth, and she is trying to kill herself.

Abhay: Piya !Calm Down! We will save Panchi. He said giving her hug, and kiss in the forehead, and through her face. Piya forgot everything , and was

Abhay droved to the Dobriyals Mansion like a lunatic, and was going 160 miles per hour. They soon reached the Dobriyals Mansion.

Abhay droved to the Dobriyals Mansion like a lunatic, and was going 160 miles per hour. They soon reached the Dobriyals Mansion.

Abhay and Piya rushed upstairs. Arnav, and Madhu were state of shock, crying and desperately calling for her to open the door, and not kill her self. Misha was supporting her mother. Misha knew irrational actions only lead to dangerous consequences, and could get anyone hurt. Last time, she had ended up pushing Piya's in a rage, and had damaged Piya's whole body. She was letting the history repeat, and was willing to come terms with Panchi. Misha was thankful for what Piya had done for, and she was the one responsible for bringing Kabir, and her closer. Kabir wanted to break the door, but she had explained the risks, and birdie was quite being stubborn and adamant when she made decision. Misha cursed Sid's for his sister's state. She wanted to kill that bas***d. But, he was a vampire, and she was strong herself to surmount such a monster. She pondered how in the world Abhay, and Sid are brother. They are different day and night. She saw Abhay and Piya. Piya was like a ghost, and she could see worry sister on Abhay's face. Abhay and Piya went to the door of Panchi's room.

Abhay: Look! Panchi! I know what my brother did was wrong? I will that bas***d for you. Please I am begging you to not do anything stupid, and punish yourself for my brother's sins

Piya: Panchi! Please Listen to Abhay! Please , I am down on my knees. Be strong! You are an example of a remarkable woman for us! Your strength, and courage to leave your past behind is the reason Misha , and I are so strong now days. You picked yourself from Danish mess, and became an inspiration for us to believe in ourselves. That we can surpass anything tragic if we are willing to have faith in ourselves. Panchi ! Your are our beacon of hope whenever we go through something turmoil . Please Panchi! I am begging you stop this madness. Please live for us! We love you ! Sid will get punished. Panchi if you don't come out, then you are just making your two sisters orphans. Panchi! Please hear out our plea.

Sid enters the Dobriyal's Mansion. Will leave to this today. Next is exciting. Promise. While I am getting part 2 ready, Please read this, and let me know what u think.
Sid enters the Dobriyals Mansion

Abhay sees Sid and stops him

Abhay: W*F are you doing here? Don't u think u have done adequate damage for the day?

Sid: Look! I am here to explain my circumstances. Give me the chance to speak ! Here my plea

Abhay: Plea! Sid ! This always has been joke to you. To lure women , and break their heart. You are criminal, and I am ashamed that we share a common blood. Everything is always a joke to you

Sid getting on his knees. Look! I know what I have done to Panchi cannot be forgiven. But, I have fallen love with her, and I love her with ever inch of fiber with my being. I love her please. Just let me talk to her! To save her life ! Once , I am done with what I have to said to do. I will leave Panchi, and will never come in her life. I am guilty for what I have done to the woman I love, and my loved ones. Because of foolishness, I lost my brother. I always suffered humiliation and rejection. The woman I love rejected me, and tore me apart from my brother. I became evil to cover my wounds. Today when I have finally learned what family, and true love means, I have lost woman I truly love. Please ! If don't save Panchi, you can punish me any way you want.

Abhay: For the first time in hundred years, He could feel his brother apology was truly genuine. He had heart of change, and his brother was related to him my blood. He could read his brother very well, and his intentions.

Piya: Sid! I don't know what you are upto! But, if you save her life today. I am willing to give you a second chance. And, forgiveness something you will have to earn Sid from us. Abhay let him handle the situation. Abhay whispered to Sid. We have a deal. You save her! Your life will be spared ! You don't, you die? Arnav was hesitant to give Sid a second chance, and Misha sided with her father. Kabir did not what to do. He was in shock. Madhu seeing no way out, and melting from Sid's plea requested Arnav, Misha grant him the permission , and seeing no solutions
Sid to Panchi
Sid: Panchi! I know what I did was a horrible crime against you. Believe me , At the beginning what I thought was doing was right. I suffered , rejection, my past lover, and my parents choosing Abhay always left me damaged and scared. I wanted to hurt them back, and make them pay every inch of my suffering. Sid confess all he had till now, and how he used . But , now i have realized what I did was wrong. I did not an angel was going to enter my life,a and lead me path towards redemption. She was going to make me a new man. Panchi I am not horrifying as I look. I love you truly from my bottom of my heart, and you mean everything to me. Panchi ! Don't forgive me, but for the sake of your family. Come out ! Live for them! They can't afford to lose their daughter. Panchi! you are my heart, and my road to redemption.Panchi! when you come out , you can punish me the way I want too. Panchi! please love I am begging you. I am not pretending anymore. My inner monster has died,and is filled with love. This man love you a lot. He is willing to whatever you ask. I am ready to be your servant, and if you tell me I will step out of your life forever. If I lose you today, I won't be able to forgive myself. I might go back to destructive path. Panchi! you are my true love! My hope, and my light for a better future. Please love! opened the door.
Panchi knew what she heard from sid was a sincere apology ,and love. She knew he loved her from his eyes. Today, he could have killed her in the forest when she beat, and try to stab him for his crimes.His eyes spoke all the answers she had been seeking for. She might not be able to read his mind, but being with him for these past months. She knew how to read his emotions. He was right why was she punishing her family members for his sins? Panchi told the others she was willing to come out, If Sid left.
Sid leaves , Panchi comes out. Sid was proud for the first time he had saved life instead of taking her. Whirlpools of emotions burned inside him that he had lost the women he loved. Sid could not live to see the hatred ,and he decided it was time to end his vampire life. He called the elders, and laid out his decisions. The elders had voted , and had enough of his nonsense. And gave voted to execute him. Sid called his mother Haseena to hear her voice one last time. Haseena asked what he was upto, and Sid did not inform what his decisions. Haseena would surely try to stop him. Sid knew what he was doing, by destroying himself. He would bring end to all his sins.

Chand got calls from the superiors. Chand told Haseena Sid's was going to killed , and it had been his decision to end his life. Haseena always wanted to her two boys to live under the same roof , and be happy. She knew Sid had changed. She could read her son like a open book, even though she might have given him birth. Her motherly instinct could read him. Chand did not want to deal with the drama, and left. Haseena knew only the woman who could save her son's life was Panchi. She rushed to the Dobriyals, and told Panchi what he had decided to do.
Haseena: Look Panchi! I know my son. He is not heartless monster anymore. You have changed, and touched him . Please! I am begging you! Spare my son's life,and let him perish him. Your love has the capability to give him a better future, and change his mind. I can't lose my family. Please let me have my family. Abhay and Piya heard what Haseena said to Panchi. Abhay knew his brother had changed. He could tell it clearly from his emotions, and he knew his brother. Abhay, Piya, Haseena, and Panchi rushed to the elders head quarters to save Sid. Sid's execution was about to begin. He knew this was the most appropriate decision,and it would be better for everyone else. The elders were gathered around him,and soon Areus would launch the bow that contained the poison that could kill any vampire.
Panchi- Stop! Sid! Please end this madness. The elders murmurer in whispers .
Arrow: May! I know what are you doing here young lady! You are not supposed to enter the realm of vampires, and how did get in here. A human cannot enter the relam of vampires.
Haseena : I brought her here your highness
Panchi - Please! Sid ! As you had plead me to spare my life for the sake my loved ones. I request you to do the same. I can't hate you Sid. I love you way too much. I have never loved anyone much as you! You might hurt me , tumble me , and left be heartbroken. One thing , I know I can never hate you. I am willing to give a second chance but u have to earn m forgiveness and from others. Sid was ecstatic Panchi was willing to give him a second chance. The elders were willing to leave them in one condition if they turned Panchi. Panchi . Sid and Panchi agreed to that . Sid embraced each others and Sid kissed her passionately that day.
Sid: You made me the happiest man today! I love you!
Panchi- I love you too ! Jerk! You are not forgiven yet! You have to work you way.
Sid: Are you sure u want to become a vampire
Panchi- I want spent my forever with you stupid! And , I am willing to sacrifice that much for you
Sid: Gosh! I must have done something right to have a girl like you in my life! Haseena, Abhay, and Piya were moved by seeing them together.They knew these 2 belong to each others.


THE END:


LOL! Kidding! We will have a leap of 1/2 months. That's the next chapter!!!

Sorry, I did not make this longer. I am out of ideas now, and I did not feel like repeating the same ideas. My plan was to make Sidchi flashback little mini anecdocte. I can't invest more than 2 chapters for sidchi. i hope u understand. but this is not end to sidchi scenes being on my ff. They will always be present in my ff, and will always have scenes. and, in the future 1 chapter a week focusing on them. Right now, I bid adieu. Remember
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Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
wow that was just awesome👏👏
you gave such a detailed wedding it was too good😳
I have never been to a christian wedding but the way you decribed every wows of abhiya and the linings of the minister was awesome👏🤗
waiting for their honeymoon😆😳😉
also th sidchi part is good😳 waiting for their part too😆😉
thanks for the pm😊
update soon😉
Edited by mansim - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: mansim

wow that was just awesome👏👏

you gave such a detailed wedding it was too good😳
I have never been to a christian wedding but the way you decribed every wows of abhiya and the linings of the minister was awesome👏🤗
waiting for their honeymoon😆😳😉😉
thanks for the pm😊
update soon😉

sure, it will be uploaded by friday.the honey moon, the seduction, and of course the pregancy annoucement. i had written in papers, i need to type it. u will love abhay's reaction. right now i wanna finish sidchi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I loved Sid and Panchis backstory. Waiting for them to unite as one. U are a fast worker Make the ABHIYA story long for me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: matwamango

I loved Sid and Panchis backstory. Waiting for them to unite as one. U are a fast worker Make the ABHIYA story long for me.

i will as soon i finish sid chi's back story. promise.

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