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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: achoose

mindblowing update dear...

such a peaceful update...
i was in a dreamworld...dont knw wht to comment more...
hats off to u sweetheart...
love you...tc...
not commenting more bcz am suffering from chicken pox...

THNK U SO MUCH
even ur sick thn ur comen thnks dear...
lov ya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -moona-

Fiza it was BeautiFul Part and Loved every bit of it..

i love their BeautiFul bond and Lovely Update Fiza ji
and i dnt like this story i love this Story, and i love every bit of the story, and the story is going really well and Perfect for me..and i dnt think so u r Dragging the Story..EveryThing is perfect Fiza ji

thnks mona darling
thnku so much
hey love ya ...ur such coment put such a big smile on my face..thnks for always apreciating but i really love if u guys gonna point otu bad too...
lov ya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'll ...im on it today...going for the next chpt...inshaAllah within 2 days pakka...
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Posted: 14 years ago
api plzzz
i wnt an update cant wait for it plzzz
jaldi...
n looonnnggg update plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys

Yes at this update im not rplying nay1 of u...though I really want to specaill ur answers,'.

Thnku for nt liking but loving this story...u made be go on cloud nine ...I need to cum back...lol

This n other update will be quicker...within 4 days I'll try...im nt raplyng as my short of time n u all r eager to read further...

N ya the new readers welcum to my land

Lov ya

FIZA

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Oki I know its short just be patient..next is in process will update within 3 days most probably'.dont put out chappals for me..let me wear helmet'..so enjoy'kuch zayada hi sweet tha'..diabetes 'hoja gi'

Chapter: 9

Reaching home he has so many thngs changed in himself in this whole month...n whn he reached home his whole house was looking like...shoping mall...he knew the reason ..n smilingly he entered the house

Mayank: asalmulikum...yeah kiya ho rah hai janab

SA: walikumaslam...ap ki shadi ki taiyarri(preparations)

Mayank: itni zooro per..aur itny kapray...woh bhi itni kaufnaak (dangerous)colors

SA: Mayank dulhan k kapray(cloths) asy hi hotay hain samhjay ap'.

Mayank: ami pls..colour sahi kerlay ..yeah kaun pehnay ga

SA: woh tu shayad pehn lay per ap nhi pehnay day ga...haina

Kasa raha ap safar(journey)

Mayank: buhat acha magir kafi tahkan(tired) horahi hai'..hectic tha'.

SA: Mayank'.beta time buhat kam hai 'ap aj tu arm keray us k bad decide keray k ap ko apny kamray k kiya kerana hai

Mayank: mein ny apany kamray(room) k kya kiya kera na hai bhi

Samrat: bhai sahib ek aur insaan k rehany k qabil(use able) bana na hai'.

Mayank: tu sahi tu hai woh..ap k kamray se tu kafi behatar hai'.(better thn urs)

Samrat: yaar bhia us ko sajao sawaroo, khubsoorat bano'.raaho mein phool bejahooo

Decor it make it beautiful , spread flowers in her way

Mayank: he looked at him'.dekh mein buhat thak gaya hoon'ap mehrabani (please mercy me) ker k mjhy kuch dair k liyan arm kerny dayin ga'..ami mein thori dair so jao'.us k bad ap se baat kerta hoo'room mein kiya kya change ker nahai

SA: beta zayada kuch nhi furniture tu wah se aay ga

Mayank: ap ny dadu se baat nhi ki

SA: Mayank asa hi hota hai sab jaga'.

Mayank: jab hum ny ek daafa kah diya tu behas kyun horahi hai bar bar'..

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Mayank: addab dadu'hum Mayank

Dadu" aray Mayank beta ap 'kasay hain

Nupur was there in lounge eating apples lying in her mother's lap n they were finalizing guest list '..

She immediately look at clock 'tu janab pochach gay'on time'she smile a bit'.dadu ko kyun phone kiya

Dadu: magar Mayank beta. Yeah riwaj(ritual) hai

Hum ab ki soch smahj rahin hain per '..

Mayank: is baray mein dadu hum koi aur bat nhi kerna chaty '..shadi hogi tu asay hi

Dadu: aray nhi nhi'ap naraz nahoo

Nupur: Mayank aur naraz woh tu kahbi bhi kuch nhi khaty 'phir dadu se asay baat kyun ker rahy hain

Dadu: thik hai jasay ap ki marazi

He set n put off the phone

Nupur ap apny kamray mein jay

Nupur: ji'this made her more curious n worried'she knew tht Mayank is very clam n patient thn wht made him so anger 'she even cant say abt her grand dad as whtever he do he never share with her'..

She was going all around her room n was very much nervous'..whom she should ask 'mayank no she cant '.or mayb she can..wht to do

She open her email knowing tht he would have email her

But it was very short

Reached safely'.

She dialed diya's no n told her everything

Diya: acha ap persahn na hoon hum dekhay hain

Adi: kya hua'..

Diya: Mayank k phone aay dadu k pass aur paat nhi kiya kaha woh ghusa horaha tha'..nupur pareshan ho raha hai

Adi: Mayank ko tu ghusa nhi ata 'us ko ghusa kis buhat bari aur eham(improtant) baat per hi ata hai'...acha relax ami ko call kerk dekho

Diya: hmm'.

Salam ami kasi hain ap

Zeenat: thik hi hoon'

Diya: kya hua ami kahriayat (is evrythng alright) tu hai sab

Zeenat: beta Mayank ko phone aay tha

Diya: kya'.woh asa kasay kah sakta hai'khandan waly kiya kahy ga'aur looog'aur sab se bhar ker nupur ki saas'zindagi bhar tany day gi'..khaty sab hain per mant kaun hai

Wht will people think n wht relatives r gonna thought abt it'

Zeenat: us ny tu yaha tak kah diya hai k shadi hogi tu asay hi '.bs

Diya: ya khuda'acha ap pershan na hooon ''

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Nupur: kya hua hai api k phone bhi nhi arha ..ya khuda sab thik hoo'kal tak tu sab kuch kitna perfect tha'..

Nupur: ji api ,'.kya hua'..KYA'mayank ny yeah kaha'.api per..nhi'hum khosih kertay hai'

Diya: arm se baat ker k dekho Nupur'.

Addab'.

Mjhy pata hai ap is waqt buhat thaky(tired) huay hain hum maafi chaty hain ap ko is waqt taqlef (sorry for the bother) dayny ki'..per ap k is fasaly ny sab ko kafi pershan kerdiay hai

Pls 'yeah ek rasam hai'riwaaj hai'khandan mein humary baroo k lyan izaat k masal'.pls maan jay'

Mayank's black berry rung to alarm him tht he has received an email'he was lying..looking at it ..nupur'.he was surprised as he knew she never disturb her whn he has said thy cant talk for 2 days'.

Looking at email sumhow he become very furious'..Ap bhi humain nhi samhj pai'humain ap se yeah umeed nhi thi'.

He wrote

Nupur'.online aay ap pls'.sirf beshak ek baar per aj hum ap se amnay samny baat kerna chaty hain '.5 min 'hum request behaj rahy hain

Nupur cum online just for once but this time I want to talk with u face to face'within 5 mins..

She looked at email n gulp down a lump'.no addressing her no hey n hello'.no mayank written at end 'n an order tht he never do..he always request'ya khuda yeah tu waqi ghusay mein hain''

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

res...

m the first... yuppy...
edited:
faria: sorry dear...😉😆 😉 itna ghussa health k liyei aacha nai hota...😆
fiza itna chota update...😡😡
kiya kerti hu yar...abhi interest start hua tha aur uss se pehlay end hugaya...
i dont know i wan nxt update longgg...😃
m sure mayank nai furniture ka mana kiya hai how sweet he is...
but y every 1 is tensed...?
pls reveal it soon...
love di tdear...it is my one of my fav ss...😃
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
mahaaa😡😡😡

edittt

Fiza janu
excellent update as usual...

it was awesome hun... mayank is back
loved mayu- S.A and sam convo
hmmm so nupur was tensed ... she was trying to figure out what he had said to dadu...
hehehehehe i know- and i've already told u right jana?????

lovely update fizu
wonderful
keep it up
tc

Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😃

abhi raat ke dhaai baj rahe hai.. fursat se edit karoongi😆 par wo fursat kab milegi pata nahi😭

filhaal ke liye... bahut achcha update tha🤗

love
~jiya~

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