Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#321

I really Loved this part

I love Mayur bond

or Mayank yeh pic dekh kar to mujha bhi kuch kuch ho raha ha to hay Hammari Nupur ka kya hal hoa hoga

Now Your Questions

1. A thing u want to change in this story, or u don't like it…

Its Perfect no need of any change

2. One thing u liked..?

Mayur bond

3. Any suggestion?

If possible Mayur Phone conversation accidently hi sahi

4. are u finding this story , slow, dragged…?

Its Not slow But I am dying to see Mayur life afteter marriage soon

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

Oki for me pls answer'

1. A thing u want to change in this story, or u don't like it' nothing

2. One thing u liked..? the e-mail interaction between mayank and nupur.. and mayank's character

3. Any suggestion? plzz continue as you had planned initially.. do not rush the story

4. are u finding this story , slow, dragged'? not at all

^^ hamara jawab😃

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#323

beautiful updt dear
loved nupur feelings after watching mayank's photo ..loved nupur's innocence and mayank's eagerness to watch nupur's expressions
2. mayank and nupur's characterization
4.loving the way story progressing ..so don't rush the things
waiting for the next updt...cont soon
thanks for the pm

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#324

i can understand this update easily...thnx fiza...
nd i don't want any single things to change in this story...it's perfect.

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#325

Fiza🤗

beautiful update dear.👏

love nups-dia shoping.😊

OMG!!! they brt 6 dresses😲.

21 dresses frm bride's side n 11 frn groom😲.

waise, itne sare dresses kisliye dete hai??😕

nupur ki shadi hai...kuch kami nhi honi chaiye😉

nupur-dia convo was so touchy...poor nups..

feel bad for her.

like nupur's letter...n mayank's reaction.

its felt so nice...soothing.

n mayank's picture😍

hayyy😍

hayyy...main marjavan😍

loved nupur reaction after saw his picture... u brt out her emotion beautifully.👏

her shyness...her fear...her love... eagerness...everything👏

she was so shy...even nt looking at mayank's picture.😊

aur main to bus mayank ko hi dekh rahi thi😆

i love nupur's reply...her one word answer made mayank's whole life.😍

she's truely a sweetheart.😃

waiting for mayank-nupur meeting.😃

update soon.😃

thanks for the pm.😃

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
Oki for me pls answer'

1. A thing u want to change in this story, or u don't like it' thre's nothing like this in this FF...bt i dnt like their restriction.

2. One thing u liked..? Dia-Nupur, Nupur-Adhiraj bond & Mayur email convo.

3. Any suggestion? nothing, but made Mayur first meeting special n add a song, if only it suitable with d situation.

4. are u finding this story , slow, dragged'? absolutly not ... m loving d way it is .

FIZA ... love u 🤗

[actually khali khali lag raha tha...to issliye likh dia😆]

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago

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MysteryTarannum

@MysteryTarannum

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#327

loved ur update...plz update soon...n will reply to ur questions...

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#328

wow... awesome parts..

jus read all the parts now...

pls continue soon...

n pls add me 2 ur pm list,...

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AnilalovesJUN

@AnilalovesJUN

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#329

hay...SUBHANALLAH...

app kya likhti hain...

ARJUN ki tasbeer dekh kar humey sach mein laga ki humney hi woh e-mail parha aur unhe dekha...

plzzz "API" i hope i can call u dat...

agli baar aur lambi n jaldi update kijiye ga aur humey pm jaroor kijiyega...plzzz

Allah hafez...

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#330

fiza api🤗
first of all kan pakar ke sorry..actually i missed so many parts i had to read ardhangini then this one so mai late hogayi..and i am really sorry pls maaf kar do😳

but finally tashu is done with all the parts🥳
and loved all the parts❤️
amazing..!! you know what you have the ability to take readers to a dream world andi just love you for that🤗
and now pls update soon and my promise neither i will be late nor miss the parts..again awesome writing❤️

love
Tashu