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Posted: 14 years ago

CHAPTER:8

her lips twitch from corner to a little smile turned into a wide grin….its was amazing how he can read in between her lines…she even didn't said she wants to know his point of view…but he guessed it nn guessed it right…..a strange emotion of proud n solace arose in her..yes he has strt knowing me…..n sumhow it's a pleasure …

diya and nupur moved out and started shopping, moving around the malls they bought a lot more thn Diya actually planned

diya: nupur..bs ab agar ek light color liya tu…ap ko pata hai na ami dekhy gi tu yeahi kahy gi shadi k kapro mein itny berang kapray….mar kilway gi ap humai

(if one more light colored dreess u bought tu mom is gonna kil me saying how cum we can take such colors for weeding dresses)

nupur : api ap janti tu hain humain achy nhi lagta buhat dark colors….

Diya: acha ….really..she was taping her feet n was grinning loking at her

Nupur: kiya…ap humain asay kyun dekh rahin hain

Diya: she chukled ….chalein ap k UN ki pasand ki shoping continue kertay hain…..saying so she laughed n patted her cheek lovingly …by passing a red tomato face nupur…who was finidng place to hide her self…..

Home:

Zeenat: hogai shoping

Diya; ji ami….hum ny 6 chorya lay liyan hain….aur ek hum ny apny liyan aur nupur ki mehndi k jhora bhi liya hai

Zeenat: beta humary liyan bhi ap hi kerlayin ….yaha aur bhi buhat sari shoping hai jo baqi hai….itni sari taiyarian(preparations)… hain aur waqt tu asa lag raha hai bhag(run) raha hai…..

Diya: ap pareshan na hoon…yeah zeemdari(responsibility) humari …..nupur k tu wasy bhi 21 choray hi layny hai…..6 tu hogay hain…..aur zeevar….

(it's a ritual to bought things in odd no….n mostly 21 dress are given from brides side n 11 from groom)

Zeenat: ek tu hum apna day gay …..aur ek dadu ny banwaya hai….baqi ek nupur ap apni pasand se lay lay……

Saying so she left

Diya: kiya soch rahi hain ap…janab…

Nupur: zeevar aur kaprao mein humari pasand pochi ja rahi hai…per insaan mein is baaat ki koi ehimiyat(importance) nhi hai……she said tears forming in her eyes

Diya: NUPUR…..ap ab bhi ….nupur yeah baat dil mein maat rekho warna tumhara pora rishta karab hojay ga…..agar mayank ko pata chal gaya k ap khush nhi hain tu nupur pls…..

Nupur: ap se kis ny kaha k hum khush nhi hain…..jo insane humain kuch maheeno(mths) se janta hai….us ko humari marzi ki fikar thi ….per ….

Diya: matlab….us ny tu se

Nupur: pocha tha….

Diya: tum ny kuch aur tu nhi kaha

Nupur: itny bewakuf nhi hain hum……

Diya: she puted her hand on her shoulder…. Tu thk hain na…..

Nupur: han api hum bulkily thik hain….humain choray ap adi bhaiya ko phone kerdain k ap ghar per hain…..warna woh pora shair (city) sir per utha lay ga…..

She went to her laptop n read his email again…n was trying to read in between lines…."hum khuda se bhi zayda ap se baatein kertay hain"…kya is k matlab yeah lay k ap hum per khud ke tarah baharosa kertay hain…..

Aadab

Thnks is barsosay(trust) k liyan jo ap ny hum per kiya….aur hum khud se yeah umeed rekhty hain k….k ap k sath…mjhy aur ap ko HUM tak lay jany mein ap k sath day sakay gay….jitni ahimiyat(importance) ap is rishtay ko daytay hai….us se humain jitna sakoon milta hai …ap janty nhi …

(the way u give importance to this relations give me immense solace)

Ap k sawal humain yaad hai….us waqt zara jaldi mein thy…..sach kahin tu hum ny shadi k baray mein khabi nhi socha….humary liya yeah hamesah fikar-e-khudi thi (Allah 's matter..)…aur khuda k mamaliaat(matters) mein hum madakhilat(interference) nhi kertay……

(N I don't interfere in God's a matter )

Per ab hum ap se zara bhi baat nhi keray gay…jab tak ap humin jawab nhi daytay..2 mehenay se hum ap se poch rahy hain ek swal us k tu jawab dain……

Nupur

He was laughing out loud at her irritation…..

Mayank: aray baap re….gusa….

Hmm…tu ap ny mamalayat(matters) mein Khuda ki razamandi mangt hain…..good…

Uffu….baaap ray …itna ghusaa…..sorry ..dil se sorry…humara maqsad(intension) ap ko intezar kerana nhi tha..bs samhj nhi arah tha …k kaha se shooro kerya…

Ap ny khabi yeah jany ki khoshish nhi ki k ap k ghar waly humain kasay jantay hain…..aur yeah rishta kasay aaya….

Aditiya…humary baba jan k dost k beta hai…diya api aur adi ke weding anniversary thi abhi kuch moths pehly….aur jis mein ap k dadu nhi thy….aur courtesy adi ki arrangement …waha parday k buhat acha intezaam(arrangement) nhi tha…hum ny ap ko waha dekha tha …..bulkay ami ny humain ap ko dekhaya tha….kyun k us waqt tak ami ap ko pasand ker chuki thi…..

Ab tu ap ghusa nhi hai na…hum ny sach sach bata diya…..

Per yaha ek na isnsaafi(not fair) hai…jo hm door kerna chahty hain…jab hum ny ap ko dekha hua hai tu …ap k bhi tu haq banta hai humain dekh ny ka…aur humary laptop mein ek bhi tameez ki picture nhi…..(she smiled…imaging is expression)

Hum ap ko apni ek picture send ker rahy hain…..yeah haq ap k bhi hai….jab khuda ny is baat ki ijazaat(premession) di hi nhi bulkay talkeen bhi ki hai …..tu phir hum kyun na yeah keray …..

(when allah has asked a girl to see the person before getting married…n insisted on this ..thn nt v shud follow it)

Ab hum ap ko kasay lagay ga yeah hum nhi pata …..per ek guzarish(request) hai …is email k jawab abhi chaiya ….kyun kal hum wapas arahy hain …aur flight n travel mein phir 2 din tak baat nhi hosakti ….aur itna intezaar hum se hoga nhi…..

Mayank

She looked at the email n thn try to recall the anversy function

Nupur: ya khuda us din tu hum n itni masti ki thi…kyun k dadu bhi nhi thy….yeah humary baray mein kiya soch rahy hoon gay……aur us din hum pink…..han pink mein hi tu thay……

She looked at the top…at the words written "one attachment"

Wth shivering hands she moved up n clicked the download button….

As more the bar was going to wards completion more her heart was beating load…her throat was going dry …n her pulse were irregular..

The moment she is gonna see him..moreover she doesn't want her opinion to b changed after seeing him….she doesn't want this to b a reson to of a doubt abt this marriage….

Download complete

With slow n not at all steady hands she went n put curser on open…..closing her eyes she click the open button…

N slowly open her eyes n chukled….it was such big picture tht at 100% only she can se his hairs….

Slowy she decrease the resolution n his picture was become more view able

His hair style was neat nt over the top trendy …but decently trendy…

His eyes where deep …she wasn't able to look at them constantly …thnk god thy r nt loking at me…

Nupur picture hai…she hited her head….

Click – button further she can now see him….

As he appears in front of him…her lips slowly showed an expression of surprise initially n thn her eyes where looking evry where n now thn him too…in higly shy expression….

She smile fully n thn lowered her eyes…..she never thought he will be like this…not being able to take it more she close the window with a jerk n close her eyes to make her scenes..her heart her breath cum to normal…she was holding her laptop….

Nupur: yeah humary samny aay gay tu humara kiya hoga…ab hum jawab kiya day….kasay day….hum se kuch nhi kaha jarah…..

Thnku…..

She wrote in email just a word…n not olny thnked him for giving her such a beautiful moment of her life….but also thnk God for given her perfection…tht she never thougth her fate hold……

Reading her email…he smiled looking at the only word wriiten …he knew she is a very shy girl now….n just can feel now how she must b feeling looking at his picture….he wished he can demand one for him to….or maybe he can see those expression rather imagining them…...now he wants to see her…holding expressions for him….for his gestures….for his feeling….new blossoming feelings….tht sum how changed his life totally….now he found theses 4 moths to be very long as he knew he only can see her then…whn she will be totally his….with his name …tied with the scared bond...which is now definte a bound of trust, respect ..and yes the added feeling today tht he has no doubt abt is…..love …..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Oki for me pls answer…

1. A thing u want to change in this story, or u don't like it…

2. One thing u liked..?

3. Any suggestion?

4. are u finding this story , slow, dragged…?

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

mindblowing update dear...

such a peaceful update...
i was in a dreamworld...dont knw wht to comment more...
hats off to u sweetheart...
love you...tc...
not commenting more bcz am suffering from chicken pox...
Edited by achoose - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey fiza...thanks for an update...
well loved the update...
and there isnt much that i would want to change...
and it is soo good to know u gve soo much importance to ur readers...
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

hey fiza...thanks for an update...

well loved the update...
and there isnt much that i would want to change...
and it is soo good to know u gve soo much importance to ur readers...
continue soon...

thnks dear
im readers made me wht im ...if thy r nt here...my writngs r nthing ...
thnku so muc
will try to cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza it was BeautiFul Part and Loved every bit of it..
i love their BeautiFul bond and Lovely Update Fiza ji
and i dnt like this story i love this Story, and i love every bit of the story, and the story is going really well and Perfect for me..and i dnt think so u r Dragging the Story..EveryThing is perfect Fiza ji
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Posted: 14 years ago
By GOD izu
bahut he accha update thi
maynk ne apni tasbeer email kya nups ko- aur janti hai nups ki reaction kaisa ho sakte hai...
GOSH both of them were so innocent...
i loved their simplicity...
Nups was blushing like hell...😳😆

poor mayu - he wanted a pic of nupur.. lekin usne himmat nehi juta payi...😆

accha mayu ne nups ko shaadi main dekha tha... hmmm waha nups bahit masti kar rahe the- kyun ki dadu jo nehi tha...

so humare mayu ko maasti wale nups bahut pazand agaya,
bahut he khiubsurat update cascade

ab jaldi mayurki shaadi karwa do-cant wait more...


Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: achoose

mindblowing update dear...

such a peaceful update...
i was in a dreamworld...dont knw wht to comment more...
hats off to u sweetheart...
love you...tc...
not commenting more bcz am suffering from chicken pox...


Get well Soon dear..

take care urself- Inshallah u will b fine soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -moona-

Fiza it was BeautiFul Part and Loved every bit of it..

i love their BeautiFul bond and Lovely Update Fiza ji
and i dnt like this story i love this Story, and i love every bit of the story, and the story is going really well and Perfect for me..and i dnt think so u r Dragging the Story..EveryThing is perfect Fiza ji



i toally agree with each n every word of moona
@moona very well said- ofcoursr we dont like this story as we loved this story so much... and fiza u dont need to change the story line for us... try to update the way u want to update... sirf ek baat khayal rakho- urdo ki saath hindi subtitle dey do.. baas



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Posted: 14 years ago

Totaly outstanding update Fiza

mayu pic he looks so handsme n made my nups blush 😛
1.A thing u want to change in this story, or u don't like it… ther's nothing to like this ff except falling in love each part more sachi sis
2.One thing u liked..? i love every bit of it

3.Any suggestion? if i do suggestion i'll make horrible 😆 coz ur the best

4.are u finding this story , slow, dragged…? absolutely going on the right pace

u know urdu language is not even my 5th language but do understand mostly but this ff i see lot's simalerites of Arabic words but pronounce is different like these i can understan withouth u puting translate
maqsad, ijazaat, mamalayat, especialy madakhilat,
thank u so much habibti for cute update n the pm

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