Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143 - Page 30

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

beautiful update Fiza

loved how mayur undestanding each other

i can't wait their wedding

thnx hun for the pm

Originally posted by: -moona-

Fiza ji this was BeauTiFul Awesome and Mind Blowing Update, i was Enjoying while Reading, and i was imagining their expressions, in short i was lost in Your Update, the thing which i like the Most that Mayank respects her POV and most important her Parents too, and seriously Mayank cant run away from her questions as there is so muc Purety in Nupur's Words and she is very Innocent too..

Fiza ji Sachi ap ki Urdu kamal hai, mein to apki fan ho gai..😳

i hope this was not shrinked comment..😳😳😳

Originally posted by: gopi06

beautiful updt dear
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: cutiepie12

beautiful update fiza jee..loving ur update esp da typical urdu style u r using...hayyyeee...dey both r soo lucky...😃

take care

loads of love

Originally posted by: kirti123

lovely 😊

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

amazing

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

sry for late reply...but this time i did it purposely...actually jis din tumne ye update diya uss din I had fever...aur mujhe pata hey ki ye padhne ke liye mujhe bahut stamina chahiye...aur jab maine padha toh adhe se jaida mujhe samaj main nehi aya...urdu bahut tough hey yaar...phir bhi main samajne ki kaushish kar rahi hoon...becoz this is a wonderful story nd i don't want to miss it...

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

chapter>6

very nice update.

very funny.

like devar-bhabi relation.

its very nice...loved it.

mayank has very gud sense of humour

lolz

Mayank: kis baray mein

SA: chalo'.samrat k shadi k baray mein

Mayank: kya'ami pls'.is k pehlay bara tu haony do

Samrat: ha ha..kitna bora sense of humour hai na ap k bhaiya'.had hai'ap ki shadi ki baat k waqt mein ny ap k aramnoo( desires) k gala dabaya tha 'jo tum meray daba rahy hooo

Mayank: yeah armano(desires) ap logo k hi thay meray nhi'samjhy

its hilarious.

Originally posted by: Ayesha_LuvSaJan

Sorry for late comment!

But very interesting update! :D

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Lovely update Fiza...

"Honeymoon" wali confusion bohat mazeedar thi... Poor Mayank samjh he nahi araha tha kya likhun aur kya nahi... bechara...

I loved the concern she has for him... Shaadi say pehle he itna uska khayal karti hai... She would be the perfect wife.. :)

And he's so understanding unki bin bole baatein samjh lete hain.. the "was" in her letter was what I admired most about Mayank... Shaadi ke baad bhu unki ek zindagi hai yeh unko yakeen dilaya...

And Diya's teasing was was really sweet...

Diya: ohhoo..piya ji k khaat aya hai...zaroor zaroor..

Diya is the sweetest sis..

Awesome update Fiza, continue soon... Update sooner...

Aur haan this is for writing in Urdu... 🤗I looved it... :)

Update sooon...

Aadab

Thnku so much for the rplys I got on the note…..I so love u all tht I troubling u all so much with urdu even than u all are willing to read it …thnku soo much …a bear hug for u all…

Oki… as its chapter :8….n against my policy ..im doing it bfore 2 chapter……there sum question at last …pls anwers them…as im never so apprehensive abt any of my stories like the way im for this…..

Lov ya all

N yes now thinks wil rash to weding maybe I'll take leap after this chapter….abhi filler se kam chalo ..

Fiza