Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#141

sooo sweet update

the id name was really gud n luved the e-mail part...

cont soon

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

oh i loved dis ff...😊

lol...da e-mail ws soo hilarious...😆

diya n adi r made for each other...😳

cont soon sweety

tczzz

loads of love

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

I know I reserved somewhere, but I'm to lazy to find it right now...

Very nice written, I like the flow the story is taking not to fast nor slow. I loved Samrat ek larki kisi bhi naye ghar main jaati hai toh ek deewar he hota hai jis say woh khul kar baat kar sakey. Bohat ehm rishta hota yeh, aur yeh rishta Nupur ko naseeb hua. Mayank ko nahi kisi say toh mulaqat hogi Nupur ki.

Mayank ki besabri samjh sakte hai, uss ke liye yeh sab shayad naya hai. Aur apni biwi say baat karna, amne samne dekhne ki besabri kis ko nahi hogi. Shayad itna sabar nahi hai Mayank main, lekin yeh janh kar achcha laga ke Mayank koshish kar raha hai Nupur say baat karne ka yeh bohat mayne rakhta hai ke woh kitna sanjeeda hai iss rishtey ko lekar...

Aurr woh tohfa... 😳

Nupur ka reaction samjh sakte hain e-mail parh kar. Koi ajnabi larke say aur kya jawab dega, but I think ek mauqa Mayank ko zarur dena chahiye. Jaise woh choti, choti baaton say kar raha hai. Jante hai ke aisa bohat mushkil hota hai aur woh bhi ek larki ke liye, lekin e-mail ka jawab dena ek shuruwat toh ho sakti hai...

Ab toh humein besabri say intezaar hoga Nupur ka agla kadam... Waise aap bhi Neela ki tarha likhen lagi hain, khat par apna update end kiya..Ab Mayank-Nupur ki dastaan khat say aage barhey ghi kya?

-Laiba

Waise hum jante hai ke urdu main likhna bohat mushkil hai ,kyunke Urdu main parhna bohat mushkil hai tamam readers ke liye. Lekin uss ke bawajood aap jitna bhi Urdu main likh rahi hai uss ke liye hum bohat shukr guzar hai... 😳

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
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*edited*

haaye main marjaawan... kya e-mail likha tha by god!!!😆

Mayank-ji to qamal ke hai ji😉😆

loved it fiza🤗

thnx for de pm

~jiya~

thnku soo much meri jan

glad u liked it

nupur bhi dhamal hai

agay agy dekho

😉

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

hey when are you going to update this one?

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
edited.

sorry Fiza, sorry for being late. actually i res d place n forgot.😳

m so silly.

bdw, nice update...n again urdu n again i took much time to read

mera kuch nahi ho sakta😔

bt finally i read entire update, n feel on d moon

i like samrat on ur FFs, first at ardhangini (truth disclose hone se phle wala samrat), n now here😃

he is so sweet, lil bit naughty, bt a very sweet person.

his convo with nupur is truly devar-bhabi type convo...love his teasing😉 ...hugs n...😉

ACCA k papers day rahy hian'.do saal se final year'mein aur roz bhai se daaat khata hoon'unhony tu first attempt mein kerliya tha'musbibat(problem) humari aai'.yeah hi meri dhok bari dastan'.aur lay shatan k nam liya aur who hazar(think od devil n here it appers) '..pointing to his cell phne wch was flashing bhai'.

i just love him...lol...he's truely hilarious😆

mayank ko shaitan kaha🤣

awww...mayank send a gift to her...so sweet.

par size kuch jaida hi bara ho gaya...poor mayank.🤣

love thier mail convo.

mayank trying to irritated her...n he succeed...bt he also felt guilty after that...n finally discole his identity...how sweet he is☺️...awww😃

i wish nupur reply him with positive sign.

update soon.

thanks for the pm.

uffuuu

tum bhi na...i know its diffcult for u to read n im houred u r trying

thnks alloot for tht

yaar i dont y but whn evry sami name cums in my mind...itpen automatic strt writng like this...

size zyada islyan tha...k us ny dekh nhi tu kasay pata us ko size k...i wnt this ff to b a bit prctical..with a tinch of fiction

gald ur liking maynak

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: DhanakZ
Oh That was so beautiful
So cute and lovely update

wah bhai Mayank sahab to kamal ki chez nikla per hammari nupur bhi kam nahi ha ekha ab wo kya karti han

thanks for pm

cont soon

thnks dear

so gald ur likin it

yeah tu hai...huamri nupur k kya kam hai...abhi dekho agay kiya kerti hai is mayank k

😆

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: valiyah27
yeh ideas aapko kahan se aate hai ji...kya subject n id diya hai😆...her reply was innocent n hilarious as well...so cute she is... well first gift n than emails...Mayank n his impressive gestures😳...thnx for this cute update...cont soon...!!!

hay Allah ji

yeah ideas😲..shatan k deemagh hai na😈..islyan

hey thnks fro liking it dear

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: -roshnee-
hey when are you going to update this one?

im sorry for being late

mayb 2morow..i''ll try

have written it but need to add english to it..to make u alll understand it..so need sum time...😳

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: achoose

very cute update dear...

loved the email part sooo much,,,,it was the cutest part...

loved it sooo much

pls continue soon..

love yaa...tc

hey dear

mising ya

thks dear for liking it

wil cont u read it later