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m realy njoying dis ff...
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Mayank is soo desperate u see😆...just love the way he is😳...perfect life partner in real sense...waiting for the email romance...cont soon...!!!

Originally posted by: drmaha

ya doc i m realy enjoying ths ff...

maz aarah ai hai padhnai mai...😊

mayank is shooo cute...😆...

the conversation between aapi and mayank was awsome..i just loved it...

update soon..


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hello jii

@maria-soniarti

Thnks dear im so gald u liked it

@Auroni.92

Uff saliyoon ny mera deemgh jo kharab kerdiya tha…yes its diffrnt frm wajood…wajood is the part of reality series..thts gonna continue…pant n shirt…actually people frm pakistan will know wht im talking abt…it kind modern shalwar kames….a loong trendy shirt with a trouser….yup mayank is nice n…but he'll turn into husband….im a devil so be wear

@-Faria-

Walikum asaalm….uff kaha jao..itni tahzeeb se agar ap bolaoin gi tu humara kiya hoga jiii…I love the way dear u wrote it in udru…so nice to see tht…love ya

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Shukria is tahreer ko apny waqt k qbil samjhny ka…..aur humary likhy kerdaroo k samhj ny ka…..rehi baat urdu ke …tu laiba yaha buhat se asay loog hai..jin ki urdu se mukamal nawqafiyaat hai…woh humari muhabbat mein is tahreer ko bari muskil se parh rahy hain…per hum phir bhi khosih kerain gay …k ab ke motabiq kamasa kam ek tarreer dain ….thks

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Hay allah im soo sorry…pata nhi yeah ho kiya raha hai….hum pm keraty hain….maffi chaty hai…loved to hear u love it so much

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Im so glad ur enjoying this thnku

@valiyah27

Thnk dear..ya he is dying ..email romance..ahahyyy..

@love.mayurarti

Thnks dear

Hello guys

I know I have taken to long to update this ff n this chapter has not cum the way it shud …sorry for tht…sum how writng wajod I have lost flow…but hope I have regained….

Thnks for the immense amout of love n appreciation u hav showered on me….

Lov ya

Fiza

CHAPTER 4"

Smarat: dadu kya hum apko apna dadu maan ker kisi cheez ki ijazat(permission) mang saktay hai…

Mayank diya n adhiraj who were happily chating turned to him in surprise…mayank being more scared as he knew how childish n blunt he is…

Dadu: ji bulkul bolain

Smrat: hum sab yaha itny maza keray aur bhabi wah daal roti khay…yeeah tu achi baat nhi..hiana

Dadu: matlab

Samara: kya hum un ko ghar per khana dayny ja saktay hain….akleay nhi …kuch cousins k sath…agar ap ko koi atiraaz na ho…aur ap ko sahi lagay tu

Dadu" hmm is mein tu koi harj nhi….per ap ko kamaka taleef hogi

Mayank was looking at him in surprise…is ko taqleef hogi…akhir shaart jeet gaya…..

Diya: matlab….

Mayank: unhony sharrat lagi thi …aj apki behan se mil ker rahay ga….tu he did it ….

Smarat looked at his brother with winning smile…..

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Nupur: is waqt kaun hai…kaka dekhna pls…

Salam bhabi…hum smarat ap k deewar…

Nupur: walikum asalm..aay na..

Samrat: buaht bori baat hai..bhai tu thik hai per ap hum se bhi nhi mili….

Nupur: maafi chahty hai….per kya kerty ..human pata nhi tha huamra koi dewar bhi hai

Smart: lay janab…uff..yeah kya hai….chaly hum apk lyan khan lay thy ..aur sach baat hai ek huamin ap se milna tha….ab bhai ko j ker batein gay…un kit u kismat khool gai..

She smile n a bit blushed..

Samrat: ap tu bolti hi nhi…lagata hai humara ana acha nhi laga

Nupur: asi baat nhi hai… bs ap se pehli baar milay hain islyan///tu ap kiya kertay hai…

Smarat" ACCA k papers day rahy hian….do saal se final year…mein aur roz bhai se daaat khata hoon…unhony tu first attempt mein kerliya tha…musbibat(problem) humari aai….yeah hi meri dhok bari dastan….aur lay shatan k nam liya aur who hazar(think od devil n here it appers) …..pointing to his cell phne wch was flashing bhai….

Nupur: buhat bori baat…. baray bhai ko shatan kaha….

Samrat: ohoh…tu ap ko bora laga…ghustaki maaf ….(sorry )

Araha hoon bhi …bs nikal gaya hoon….

Nupur: jhooot

Smart: bhaibi ….mein tu ap ko apni side per kerny aaya tha…ap tu pori bhai k side per nikli ….ab mjhy kuan bachy ga …..

Nupur: hum tu sahi ki side per hain

Samrat: tu hum galat hain kiya…bhi kam azkam bhabi se milna tu zaroori hai…haina…….

chalty hain…ap k sadu na humain yaha rehny nhi day ga…khud jo nhi asakty na…..Allah hafiz..ap se mil ker acha laga….

Nupur: allah hafiz..sab ko humara sallam khana

Samrat: sab mein bhai bhi ajaty hian..so un ko special do ga…kuch aur..i means hugs n….he winks..n left nupur blushed

Nupur: samrat…buhat badmassh hain aapp

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Diya: nupur nupur…kaha hain ap….

Nupur: api ap kasay agai…ghar nhi gai…

Diya: nhi kuch batana tha….ap k sasural se kal jo tahaaif (gift) aay thy who kaha hai..

Nupur: waha humari desk per …kyun

Diya: aur kisi ny dekhy tu nhi

Nupur: nhi baba…per batay tu …akair ap dhood kiya rahin hain

She was going through all box as most of them where still packed…..n there she found a box unnamed

Diya: yeah…yeah dhood rahy thy hum……with a smile

Nupur: ab yeah kiya hai

Diya: is ko kholnay k haq humara nhi…..with a grin

Nupur: api jo humara hai who ap k bhi khol lay na…wasy is mein itni kiya khas baat hai…

Diya: na baaba na….yeah haq humain nhi layna…humaray liyan adi hi kafi hain…..yeah tu ap hi kholay

Nupur: api ap kiya bool rahin hain kuch smhj nhi araha

Diya: yeah ap k lyan kal mayank ny bahja tha

Nupur: she looked at her in surprise …kya….

Diya: ji….aur us ny naam nhi likha tha….takay ap k lyan koi muskil na hoo….yeah loo

Nupur: with shaking hands she took it form her…n was looking all around it

Diya: hum chalety hain…akelay mein arm se dekho….she smiled

Nupur: apiii…..wasy kasa raha sab kuch

Diya: sab kuch bulkily perfect tha….she grinned

Nupur: aur…acha jao bhaiya intezaar ker rahy hongay

Diya: meri pyari behan….she puted her hand on shoulder…..woh ek acha insaan hai….aur yeah tumhain bhi buhat jald pata chal jay ga….

Nupur: she smiled allah hafiz…

She sit on the bed n looked around the rapped gift….it was in a smiple blue rapping ….very neatly packed….she opened it carefully not to spoil even little corner of the rapper…..she found a velvet box in it…opening it a huge smile appered on her face….

Nupur: waoo its so beautiful….so delected…..

It was a braclet….with a flower having a watch looped with it…..n to her surpise there was a note…..

"for u….shayad thora loose ho….andaz nhi humain…sorry"

This time she didn't smiled but giigled ……she can actually imagine how nervously he has sended this to her….but he thought of doing so…..made her heart really relifed…..

The more she is getting to know him the more she has start respecting him…n sum how she is a little bit sure…he too will repect her….

She wore it n laughed…..it was not of perfect size…..but the gesture was as perfect n pure as this relation demand…..she move her hand down n it droped on bed….

Nupur: Myank ji…yeah kis k size k hai…hm…..thora..yeah tu bora loss hai….

Placing the card in the box back she noticed a note at the back too…

..she looked around ..it was an adjustable one…."lagta hai pehli bar kisi larki k lyan kuch liya hai….."She smiled more widely….a strange kind of feeling was engulfing her…to know him more…….

Ring ring

Yeah api ko kya hogaya …

Nupur" hello api ji…kya meray bagair neend nhi arahi…

Diya: oho….itni ghanak( happiness) awaz mein ….tu tufa(gift) itna acha laga…..wahh

Nupur: asi koi baat nhi hai…woh tu is waqt ap ko phone dekh ker acha lag abs….

Diya: ohh tu gift itn abora tha

Nupru: koi nahi….saying so she bit her lip….

Diya: lolz…..enjoy kero jan…yeah lamhy sab se khubsoorat hotay hai….phir shohar(hubby) ko biwi se zayada laptop asiz hojayta hai…

Adi: diya…yeah na insaafi hai….ilzaam hai hum per…

Nupur: ap dodno ki agar romantic talk kerni thi tu mjhy kyun phone kiya..

He snatched the phone n put on loudspeaker

Adi: taky ap ki romantic zindagi ki raaftar dekh sakhy …..

Nupur: bhaiyaaa…..

Adi: saliii…acha chaloo….jao mein ny ek important email k hai chk kero ….Allah hafiz….

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Nupur: yeah bhaiya ny kaun se email kerdi…is waqt woh bhi chaloo …

She opened her laptop n connected it to internet…huming a song complety unknow of wht is waiting for her….opening her email u galred at her screen with surprise n bit annoyed with a mail with subject

" lets begin"

Hay Allah …yeah kya subject hoa….aur yeah shab hai kaun hai janb….

In her hestitaion n surprise..she looked at the id…..

" lets Guess"…

Yeah hai kaun…aur humara id in k mila kasay…yeah id tu kisi k pass nhi…ya Allah yeah kiya hai..koi muskil na gari hojay….aur yeah kasa id hai….hum yaha kya kausati( a game played in wch 1 team think abt sumthing n other guess it)……khel rahy hain..khol k nhi….

She opened n was stunt to read

Lagta hai ap kafi pareshan hai yeah dekh ker k yeah kis k email ap k inbox mein agai….tu yaqeen(trust) keray k yeah beshak koi khas insaan nhi per agar ap many tu koi ap ka apna hosakta hai……hum ny is zaryay(way) k intekhaab(choice) kiya hai …ap ko jany k lyan..kyun k ap ny koi aur raah tu humari liyan chori nhi…..

Ap k jawab k muntazir(waiting) ho mein NUPUR JI

Her mouth hanged down….hay Allah yeah kasi baatien kerta hai…aur humara naam bhi janta hai…yeah kaun hai bahala…aur ghar mein kisi ko pata chal gaya ..ya yeah ghar agaya…..ya UN k ghar walo ko khain pata chal gaya …nhi..nhi…per….

She was hell tensed n nervous didn't knew wht to do…she heradly dail DIya's no..

Diya: kya hua keriyat nupur

Nupur: api humaray pass ek email aai hai..woh bhi pata nhi kis ki…aur woh humara naam bhi janta hai …ajeeb tarha se baat ker raha

Diya tried to suppress her laughter…she knew whom it is..n can easily guess wht mayank has don't nt mentioned his name…….she thought of going mayanks way …as he asked her not to say anything

Diya: nupur ap ek kam kerain …un ko k email keray ..aur zara roob se ( she suppressed her laugh) ..un se pochain k akair woh hain kaun …aur un ki himat kasay hoi ap se aasy baat kerny ki…

Nupur: hm api ap sahi kah rahin hain…hum yahi kertay hain ………

Diya: ab aay ga maza…

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Mayank was laughing at reading his email gain n again….he can easily imagine wht would have her reactions been…but sum where he was nervous also….

Mayank: kahin humara yeah mazk un ko bora lag gaya tu….ya kahin unhony humary mein koi galat ray kayam kerli tu…Ya Allah ..pls ..humain pata hai hum ny shyad kuch zyada ker diya ……..email?...

He was shocked to see such a quick rply…n was laughing out loud whn he read it…

Ji tu mr " lets guess" …ap jo bhi hain..humain koi kausauti khelny k shook nhi…ap kahin aur jay k yeah khel khalain (play it) samjhay……na tu ap humary apny hain….aur na nhi khas…..aur hum ny muntakiab(selected ways) kiyay huay rasato per khud hi chalein…aainda as kiya ti phir dekhy hum kiya kertay hai…..

He was laughing at the innocent reply she gave " bewaquf larki ..email per kis k kya beggar lo gi" he shock his head n strt writing his rply

" kholi humari kismet k jawab un k aaya…..itna hi kafi hai humaray liyan…..khas aur apny dono hojay ga…is rasty per chal ker tu dekhain…hum sath nibahay( stnd by with u ) waloo mein se hai"

He looked at the email n thn looked at himself…

Mayank: janab mayank…ap ek larki k sath flirt ker rahy hain..woh bhi abhi mangatar( fianc) k sath …jo kam ap ny kabhi nhi kiya woh ab ker rahy ahin…..aur agar un ko bora lag gaya tu….umeed hai nhi….agar is k baad jawab nhi aaya tu hum khud kerdain ga taaroof…(introduction).

Even she didn't expected such a quick response

Nupur: faltoo insaan…lagata hai koi pakka chater hai…..ab dekho kiya bakwas likhi hai……humaray sath flirt ..kitan bara flirt hai…professional hai pora is kam mein…..ab kya kero…..ab tu api bhi soo gain hogi…hum jawab nhi day rahy ….dekhty hai yeah kiya kahta hai….

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Whn time passed n he has refreshed his email page atlest 20 times…cheked his wifi deviced….sign out ..n again signed in agin ….he decide to tell her whom he is..

" humain nhi pata ap ko humary mazak se takleef hoi ya bora laga…per humara irida(intension) as nhi tha….hum sirf ap ko jany k aur is rishty ko ek samjhotay( compromise) ki jag ek rishty k darja dayna chaty hain…islyan ..Api se ap k id lay ker ap ko email ki..agr ap sahi na samhjy tu hum dobara asa nhi keray gay….per agr ap sahi samhjy tu……..waran hum ap se phir baat kerny ki khoshish shadi se pehly nhi keray gay…..

For nupur it was not just a shock..but un usally experience….first she didn't expected him to email her….to absorb tht it was him n she was actuality talking with the person she now belongs to…her heart was complelety arrythmatic …..second he is such a character….itna mazak….ya phir woh sach mein asay hi hain…..his flirting was taking a different vision in her mind…she sumwhere was confused ..he was making her comfortable or tht is the way he is actually…..in such delima she just kept looking at the emails n read it again n agin …..wht conclusion she shud draw

On other side he was hell nervous n feeling immense guilt in himself….his first impression is not gud on her thts y she didn't rplyed…putting his laptop aside…he ly down thinking over n over…..n doze of to sleep…

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