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Posted: 14 years ago

CHAPTER:3

zeenat: nupur .....neechy aajay ap....ap k sasural se jora(dress) aaya hai

nupur: ji...ati hoon

yes the time has arrived....her engagement has been fixed within two ....

nupur: api ek kam keray ap loog ...mangini(engegement) kyun shadi hi kerdain na

diya: acha agar asa hai tu mein nikah ke baat kerdatin hoon....supreesing her laughter

nupur: apii....itni jaldi kya hai

diya: ap k woh jarahy hain 2 wks ke training per abroad....us k bad ap ko pata hai moharam (islamic mth) shooro horahy hain....tu us mth tu koi keray ga nhi .....ilsyan ...aur jan mangini hi tu hai....

nupur: hmmm....she tok a deep breath

diya: acha ami se kaho driver bhaj dain hum atay hai....adi se pochliya hai

nupur: tu aao na....rkho phne

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diya: chalo necahy .....buhat pyar dress hai....ap k un ki choice tu bari achi hai

nupur: us ki maa ki

diya: nupur

nupur: aray baba ....gali nhi day rahin hoon api....mera matlab us ki ami ke choice hai.....

diya: ap ke ittala (information) k liyan arraz hai k yeah dress..unhony khud ap k liyan choice kiya hai

nupur: ap k kasy pata

diya: un ki mom ny khud kaha ....kya baat hai janab...abhi se itna kayal....hmmm..she said touching her shoulder with her

for the first time during the whole procedure ...she truley smiled n blushed

nupur: apiii...she pouted

diya: dekha khush rehan itna muskil nhi ....asay raha kero.....kal ki maat sojo.... aj ko dil khol ker mahsoos( feel ) kero ..apnay sary armnan nikalo ......Allah tumhain her khush day

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gathering n finding happiness in the moment ....she decent down to look at the first gift send by him for her.....somwhere her heart was very much excited...it will also reflect wht his mind set ...she hesitantly opened the box......n her jaw droped in shock....

no it wasnt a ghara ra....neither it was an anarkali suit

it was a sea green long shirt with straight paints....her heart was dancing ...as she was never allowed ot wear anything like tht

nupur: she whispered......api yeah tu buhat stylish hai...designer wear lag raha hai ......

diya: dekha hum ny kaha tha na...woh alag hai apnay ghar waloo se.....

anty: hay Allah yeah kiya hai....kasa jhora(dress) hai...asa koi apni mangin mein phahnta hai bhala......na koi kaam hoa hoa hai is per...aur rang tu dekho zara

nupur: in her mind...allah bhala( good) keray tumhara ...warna yeah loog tu mjhy laal(red) rang k gota kinari wala drees pehnatay..

diya: ab kya ker sakty hain anty ...sasural se aaya hai ....mayank ki pasand hai...ab tu nupur ny us ki pasand k mutabik (according) hi rehna hai ......wapas keray gay tu ....bora na man jay

zeenat: nhi nhi...nupur yeahi hi pehnay gi

nupur: par mein ny asa kuch kabhi nhi pehna ..is ko carry kasy kertay hai.....she suppressed her smile....n diya looked at her in disbelieve

zeenat: pehna paray ga beta .....shabsh .......

dadu: on phone.....yeah ap kasi baat ker rahy hai...humray yaha asa nhi hota

evry1 was scared n shocked...whom dadu is talking like tht ......

dekhain woh humara beta hain...jab jahy yaha asakta hai ....per mangin ke rasam alag alag ada ki jay gi.....nikah se pehlay dono k ek dosray se milana kuch sahi nhi lag ta

she felt a little low at the word...she lost another chance to see him ...she knew for anything like tht her dadu will nt allow....now she will get to c him at wedding night ....she swallowed a lump down...

hum abhi asa kuch nhi sochay ga...itna door k kuch nhi ...relax abhi buht time hai.....sab acha acha soch....plsss...dekho us mjhy mein aur is rishty mein intrest tu hai ..warna mjhy se milny ki lyan itny sary rasty nhi nikalta....

adihraj: apny kamray ki kiarki (window) band mat ker k suna

nupur: kyu

adhiraj : jitnay bechan hai woh janb...kahin window se hi na ajay .....phir woh bhi band ...tu bechara...kya haal hoga us k .....

diya n adi laughed n she got embarrassed

adihraj: nupur ,...uff..yeah kiya hai...tum tu waqi dhulhan ki taraha shrama rahi ho

nupur: bhiyaaa.....mein ja rahi hoo

allah hafiz.....

adhiraj: itni jaldi maat jao...abhi nhi aain gay woh ...n he laughed at her ...

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Engagement Day

it was the day of engament ...the first step for the expectance of the person in her life....the first time forgeting wht she liked ...wht she wanted she dress the way he wants her....strange it was ..nevr evr considering others choice...a girl was swept in diffrent world just merly in 4 days ........

sitting in front of mirror she was getting ready .....her hands filled with hena ...very light make up...a mang thika...n her head covered with dupata.......she here self was surprised ...how she is slowly excepting the unseen in her life......y i am liking to b in his choice..why it has started to matter ...wht matters to him wht nt....how he would have felt seeing me in his choice....wht he thought whn was selecting this...

she was wearing bangles in her hand.complelty lost in her thoughts...whn diya announced

diya: woh loog agay hain ..ready chaloo

she decent down n entered the room .wch was decorated to celebrate there first step in a commitment ...all ladies eyes where glued on her

nupur: in mind..yeah mjhy asay dkh rahy hain jasay MRI ker rahy hoon...wasy hi itni nervous hoon....ab tu lagta hai behosh hojay gay hum....arm se nupur pls koi garbar nhi keran

shilpa: aaiy beta...bahtiay......

she bow down to ask her blessings ....she put her hand on her head......she sit next to her mther-in-law.....

she took out the floweral jewllery n .... the haar(mala) , bangles n gajra.....make her wear that.....she than asked dadi to cum

she gave nupur sum sweets n thn asked her hand to slip the engemnat ring .......

it was a beautiful ring ....9 diffrent gems ...arranged beautifully to form a ring .....assuring nine diffrent promises n happines in evry area of the life

dadi: isay nooratan ring khtay hai ( nine stone ring)...yeah zindagi k her pehlu (aspect) mein mayank ke taraf se ..ap k sath nibhanay ki tasdeeq( assurance) kerti hai....han per yeah mayank ny pasand nhi ki...meri pasand hai......

she laughed n so as nupur smiled n blushed too.....

dadi: hamesha khush raho....hum umeed keraty hain k mayank ap ko....aur ap un....khushi...izaat....aur tahafus(security) day sakay gay aur humara ghar ap se ..izzat aur apna ban chay ga....

.saying so u put her hand on her head n stood up to greet her mother , diya

zeenat: mubarak ho ap ko

shilpa: ap ko bhi...aj se nupur poray tareeqay se humari amant(belonging) hoi ap k pass...

zeenat : ji bulkul.....

diya took her to room.........a maid put all the gifts given to her by her in laws ...she didnt looked at them as was busy playing with ring

wht it holds in her life its diffuclt to estimate...she wasn t tht type of girl who will be jumping with joy just find thmslf engeged.n lost in the world of her prince charming..but yet she has to accept this change in her life happily....her fear was increasing so as her restlesness....wht this holds for her....yet she also thought knowing him previously wouldn't have changed her condition....its still a new a complelty different phase of life....how owe a person owe her...how now he is not only the guardian but also everything for her....now wht maters is his prospective she needs to respect him ......

her saas came to say gud bye to her .....she return to her room changing she doz off to sleep

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next was mayanks turn to done the commitment...n it was also performed perfectly

mayank: salam api...kasi hain app

diya: walikum asalam....hum tu bulkul thik hai...ap sunay ....ap kasay hai ...

mayank; hum bhi bulkul thik hain....

diya: tu kasa lag raha hai ..

mayank: sach kahain tu ...kuch ajeeb ....do din mein zindagi is tarha badla jay gi humny ...soch nhi tha....

diya: hmm ...asa tu hota hai

mayank: kya hum ap se kuch poch sakty hai...api humain ap sach sach batay gai

diya: han bulkul .........hum nupur ki hi nhi ap ki bhi api hai...pochiay

mayank: ap loogo ny unhain zabardasti tu razi nhi kiya.......i mean ..unhony humain dekha bhi nhi,....asay kasy itna bara fasla....

adihraj: uffuuu....bhi yeah kamal hai

mayank: jee...surprisgnly

adhiraj: bhi larkiyoon ko tu apny honay waly shoor ka naam na lytay hoay suna hai...per yaha tu ulta hai

mayank: he shocked his head ,,n smiled....bhaiya ...ap bhi.....

diya: wasy baat tu thik hai

mayank: ap dono humari baat taal rahy hain

diya: nhi asi baat nhi hai....dekho humari taraf asa hi hota hai...tu us k liya is baat ko tasleem(accpet) kerna itna muskil nhi hai

adihraj: aur wasy bhi ..woh manti hai k shadi shakal se nhi aqadl se ki jati hai...

mayank: hmm...hum ny un k lyan kuch bahja tha...kya unhony dekha..

diya: kya ..kab...kab kiya ap ny asa ..hum ny tu nhi dekh ...mayank agar kis ko pata chal gaya tu buhat muskil hojay gi ...

mayank: arm se ...api hum ny naam nhi likha tha us per....ap itni fikar naa...lay hum jantay hai ...k kafi bari muskil hojay gi...hum ny kaun sa ghar mein bataya hai...

diya: tu ap ny humary ghar tak pochya kasay

smart: main hoon na.....in se is kis k kamo ki umeed na rekh.k yeah bhai k lyan candle light dinner arrange keray ga..ya guiter bajay gay....ya un k shan mein koi kaata..koi gazal khay gay(poetry)...wasy hum naraz hai

diya: tu acha hai.....wasy humari behan ko bhi in sab baato mein kuch khass dilchaspi (interest) nhi hai....tu mayank tu kamiyab (successful) hojay gay ......aur ap hum se naraz....bahala kyun

smart: bhai ko tu rehany dain....kam as kam hum tu miltay apni bhabi se ....humain bi nhi mil ny diya...

diya: koi baat nhi ap kis din phne ker lijay ga...ap ki baat hojay gi.....aur mayank...maafi chatay hai....us ny shayad dekha hi nhi hoo gift......hum aj us se pochty hai...phir ap ko bata tay hai

mayank:pls api maafi mang ker sharminda (embarce) na keray..... thnku...

...apii..woh.....acha choray ..ap sunay ap ki life kasi chal rahi hai

diya: kuch aur bhi pochna tha...poch saktay hoo...hum se maat daroo

mayank: i want k woh humain ek baar dekh lyan..baat tu hona imposible hai...he pouted

diya: itna bhi impossible nhi

mayank: matlab

diya: dekho ap un se phone pr,,,,celll...per...ya sms per bhi baat nhiker saktay ...per han email zarro ker saktay hain

mayank: kya asa mumkin..(possible) hai

diya?: bulkil...magar humain kiya milay ga

mayank:: duain.....prayers..he smiled

diya: she smiled....hum ap ko us k ID day tay hain...per pls...hum ap se ek guzarish(request) kertay hai... buhat ehtiyaat ( carefull) rekhana pls.......warna woh buhat bari muskil mein ajay gi

mayank: ap befikar (nt to woory) rahy ...hum is k galat istamaal nhi keray gay.....hum sirf k rishta bana chatay hai ....

diya: humain khushi hoi yeah jan ker....

mayank: api ...un ko bata na maat pls.....hum un k reaction dekhna chaty hain plss

diya: phir tu buhat kuch sunay k lyan taiyar hojao...us k reaction baary kauf naak bhi hosaktay hain....

mayank: phir tu aur bhi maza aay ga.....ab fikar na keray ......

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ya doc i m realy enjoying ths ff...

maz aarah ai hai padhnai mai...😊

mayank is shooo cute...😆...

the conversation between aapi and mayank was awsome..i just loved it...

update soon..


love ya...🤗
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
fiza jee... humein yeh fasana bahut pasand aa raha hai...😃
~jiya~

*sorry if i wrote it wrong😳*
I am really really loving this story😃
Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

fiza jee... humein yeh fasana bahut pasand aa raha hai...😃

~jiya~

*sorry if i wrote it wrong😳*
I am really really loving this story😃

aur hamein ap k taranay buhat pasand arahy hain....
thnku soo much dear...u have said pefectly ..
glad tht ur liking the story...n pls keep comenting in urdu...im loving it



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Posted: 14 years ago
@Fiza
beautiful update
beautifully written...
i loved it.........
do continue soon.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Its very diffrnt from Wajood...Wajood hold the reality of life but this is light and hav some positive chracter jaise adi, dadi...Cant mix this two with each other...

Aaj to apne saaliyon ka intezar khatam kar hi diya...Finally our prolonging Hero arrived..😆😍.Mayank is exactly the same that i expected..😍😍.He's really a nice person...Par shirt or pant vo bhi engagement mein..😲.Ye to meri samajh ke bahar hai bhai...😆😆
I loved the ring...Is this really exist or just ur imagination...
Now as mayank is going to mail her there will be lots of fun na...Nupur to uski band baja degi...Im excited...😃
Cont soon...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
edittttttttttt

Salam Fiza ji

wah wah kya badiya update hai
mera dil khush hogaya
maaynk aoi pasand se nupur k liye shaadi ki joda bheja- wo bhi stylish- wow
aur pher wo jewelry--- baat kya hai bhia- shaadi ki pehle he itna khayal- hayeeeeeeee

BY GOD shaddi ki pehle na koi mulaqt, na koi phn call , na koi sms- Hai ALLAH aj ki jamana main bhi aisa hota hai kya..............

awwwwwww mujhe dia, maynk convo bahut accha laga- mayank bahutnhe suljhe huye ladka hai- nups ko wo khush rahega

bahut he accha update hai jana
bilkul mast tha

aisa update likhte rahiye

ab ap mujhe jane ki izazat de de....
salam........

finu i was trying write my comment in urdu nad hindi.... i know it was very bad......so perdon me okkkkkkkkkk
take care
love ya
Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hmm.. Kya kahein kahani ka, bohat achcha likha apne...

Yeh kahani harr larki ki taqdeer hai, parh kar bohat accha lagta hai. Rahi baat Mayank ki toh woh ek bohat he achcha jeevan saathi hai, Nupur bohat khush rahe ghi usske saath.
Waise bohat khoob likha Fiza, ek choti se guzarish thi kya aap apne updates main thori se ziada urdu likh sakti hain... Mera matlab hai ke aap dialogues urdu main likhti hai aur description english main kya aap sab nahi toh kuch description urdu main likh sakti hai..? Urdu main parhne ka maza he aur hai... Waise aap llikti bohat khoob hai... Please jaldi update karein, yeh kahani bohat achchi hai...'
-Laiba
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry forgot i res here...comment on pg 19😊...!!!
Edited by valiyah27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
subhan Allah Fiza jie Kya kamal ka likha hay
huuma bohat Bohat pasand aya
Khas tor ma uurdu zaban ma parh kar jo luutf aya wo hum lafzo ma bean nahi kar sakta
Huma bohat acha laga kay mayank nupur ka itna kheal rakh raha ha
Hum agala hisa ko parhna kay lia betab
to Barhay karam jaldi kahani ko aga barhaiey ga
Pegam kay lia shukria

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