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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Hey dear, when are you updatin again?
Continue sooooooon!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
hey di nyc update aww maan sings song 4 her n geet record it...ye...n nyc vm....
update soon n sry 4 lt comment
thnc 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
hi naddiya
firstly congrats 4 new thread 👏 👏 👏
a big hug 4 coming back 😃
awesome updates yaar... really superb
loved d way geet taking care of maan
but a small request.. plz bring back d arrogant msk back soooon...cant c him lik dat 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
It's a beautiful part dear🤗, loved it the way Maan want keep her with him😍, hope Maan will revover soon😳 update soon dear😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
wonderful update..
continue soon...
sry 4 commenting late
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86


despair 43


Early next morning...
Geet: woke up.. Maan... she sneeze.. open her eyes looked around.didnot find Maan..."Maan "called he many times "where is he ? where he can go? she jump out of bed walk barefooted to living room the entrance door was open. she walk out .saw Maa standing with out any support trying to do exercise.
Geet: Maan ran to him are you ok?
Maan didnot turn back. geet try to stop him..."kya ha"
Geet; dr asked you not to
Maan: Geet i know my body more...
Geet:but
Maan: please can you leave me alone
Geet: looked at his red face, she didnot get why he is reacting like that.... "kya baat ha"
Maan: please go ...he shouted
Geet: walked back..."raat ko to theek tha aab kya huwa ha" she walked in went to freshen up ... she really felt like crying"aik dum se kya hojata ha Maan ko." she was taking shower when he knocked at the door
Geet: what?
Maan: jaildi karo i have to go to site.
Geet: 5 min's ..she quickly dress up.
Maan: was waiting out side... "what happen to your eyes?"looked at her
Geet: nothing..
Maan: were you crying ?
Geet; no shampoo chala gaya tha....
Maan: hmmm how is your fever?
Geet: theek ha
Maan: i have to go to site please take out my clothes . he walk in ...."why i cannot take my eyes from her?why i need to talk to her?..he self talked
Geet: sure.... she smiled ... "yupi theek hogai " she placed his clothes on bed walk out to make his breakfast..

After a While.
Geet: Maan breakfast...as she saw him going out ....
Maan: i am not hungry
Geet: but you should take it ..
Maan: Geet i am not a kid please stop treating me like a baby...
Geet: looked at his face.. Why you are angry?
Maan: i am not , i will ask Veer to send car for you .
Geet: ok
Maan: looked at her face ..he was trying to find reaction on her face... but it was blank.... "should i trust her eyes her face or those sms... " he walked out.
Geet: kya problem ha in ka saath.....she just saw him going out with Adi.. "ADI will sure take care of him" she feel relax ....

After hour she was sitting in lawn saw Veer coming .
Geet: bhai what are you doing here?
Veer: your husband asked me to get you.
Geet: but why?
Veer; i dont know , as i was passing by i came here to pick you..
Geet: let me call him ..she got happy ..."may be he want to show me site"
Veer: but ..he didnot completed his sentence..
Geet; his cell is out of reach..
Veer: actually over here we have signal problems. like last night lchcha was calling you but it was not connecting.
Geet: how is she?
Veer: she said hi to you and asked me to ask you to come for lunch ..
Geet: thx bhai will you take me to Maan.
Veer: sure. he was going on other side of lake...
Geet; how
Veer: by boat?
Geet: ok lets go he must be waiting for me..she quickly locked the door.
Veer: smiled... you both friends are alike
Geet; we have send our child hood together, there should be some resemblance.
Veer: smiled.. ...


Maan was taking to ADI he was discussing the project..he saw Geet coming with Veer ... Geet was smile as she was sms Ichcha .
Veer:your husband is waiting
Geet: smiled she got out walked to Maan
Maan: just pretend as if he had not looked at Geet , he turn his back busy talking with ADI.
Geet: Maan mein agai....
Maan: looked at her ... "acha tou mein kya karo"
ADI: he he he... be right back sir... he walk to Veer.
Maan: i hope you enjoyed Veer company... his voice & tone had pain..
Geet: why you are saying like that? i enjoy your company the most, even if you are asleep or working your presence count for me alot... nothing is better than that.. hold his hand.
Maan: looked on other side ... "i don't want to comment on this, i just said what i am watching now days ,how excited you are when you see him,or attend his call"
Geet: you don't...
Maan: Geet we are getting late call them, i just belief what i see, you don't explain as i don't need it.. he with the help of boat man sit in small boat..
Geet: but you know the half thing..... she got he is misunderstanding ..
Maan: please don't create scene here...
Geet: you just listen me once..
Maan: raise his hand "bus " he shouted ADI ....
ADI: sir aaya ..
Maan: you come with me ... she will come with Veer.. ( the boat was small it was 3 seater)
ADI: looked at them he just obey Maan order.
Geet: walk to Veer.
Veer: what happen?
Geet: i want to go home,i am not feeling well.
Veer: ok you go to my home she is also alone will ask the driver to drop you.
Geet: ok... with teary eyes she sms ADI "Take care of My Maan. be his shadow please a sister request"..
Maan's boat was sailing through the lake ...
ADI: read sms & reply " i will " he looked at Maan who was looking at other side of the lake... he didnot ever turn back , he just trying to composed him self.. Geet smiling face , the sms all just run in front of his eyes .
He reached the other side , he got out & try to look at the location. He try to show he is very busy... after 15 mins he saw Veer coming alone.
ADI: wanted to ask Veer but he didnot.
They started discussing the project... after 20 min's there was a call at Veer cell.
VEER: please excuse me, these wives are ...wink at Maan..started talking.
Maan: looked at him... he got confused... he let Veer finish ....
Veer; yar does Geet do same , as my lchcha is always sms or calling , what are you doing? where are you? whats yup? aur agar signal prob ho to my madam BP is high....
Maan: you married?with open mouth
Veer: Maan: soon i will going to be a father...Geet didnot told you?
Maan: i don't let her...
Veer; smiled sorry sorry sorry ...oh these both school friends are upto some thing, their crazy plans, they took promise from me not to tell you.... my wife will kill me...he had a laughter
Maan: where is Geet.... he realized what he did?
Veer: she was feeling sick i asked her to go to my home , but my wife said she had not reached yet..
Maan: i have to go back..
Veer: yar boat will come after 1 hour as they take round .. there is no other way....
Maan: i can swim.
Veer are you crazy? no way
ADI: sir you can't go see this ..he was listening them , he showed him Geet sms...
Maan: but i have to go..
ADI & VEER : you can't.. together... what we will say to our sis?
Maan: looked at them.. "omg i did a mistake some time what we see is not what it is in real" he sat on a rock.
Veer: driver will take her home you don't worry......
Maan: call at home.
Veer: see it is cloudy , not connecting.
Maan: ADI you call?
ADI: sir her cell is switch off ..may be she is asleep as she had fever....he saw her sneezing
Maan: "hold his head what have i done?"
Veer & ADI looked at each other....

Ishq lata ha kaise kasie imtheen......


to be cont.. comment & don't forget to press button as that showed your presence ......
question..

Will Geet leave him?
or
He will be able to reach in time?

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
That is awesome update as always nadii....so loved it..really beautiful....
u are amazing of a writer and do keep writing....👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Awesome update !!! Luv that song from dmg <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
oh no...please dont separate them again.....already they are suffering with insecurities....please continue soon😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
tat was wonderful as usual nad di,
loved it!!!
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wonderful update!!!

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