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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear readers i can just do this for you all you want me to cont i am , i will just add the link of my ff part's here you can comment here or at blog ,even if you dont ,i dont mind.... that is the least i can do ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely updates dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Let maan be ok soon!!!!!!!!!!!

I hate seperations but I know that this is just the best for maan and geet.................

Continue soon dear!!!!!!!!

Me waiting...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...i just read all ur pms now...
read all the parts...loved them to the core...
everything is just so perfectly carved...!!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww shooo SHWeettt love it..reallly❤️
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WOOOW!!!!!!!!

Great updates dear but what is wrong with geet??????

Could she be pregnant???

The thing is, I cant remember anything whith could put her in this situation.

Am I missing something???

Continue soon dear!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmerr

WOOOW!!!!!!!!

Great updates dear but what is wrong with geet??????

Could she be pregnant???

The thing is, I cant remember anything whith could put her in this situation.

Am I missing something???

Continue soon dear!!!!!!!!!!

thx dear ... i censor that... 😉 😆
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Maan : my sleeping beauty is asleep that why her cell is switched off. he called at her number as soon as he got up. Geet madam here i come... he got you he stretch his legs... "i will walk to you without this support till then you have to wait for me.." he just freshen up .walk out of cottage.

Adi: was sleeping on chair out side in veranda . he was covering him self with blanket.

Maan: just smiled ... "loved your sincerity Adi" he went in make coffee & waked Adi

ADI: Maa sona do

Maan: i am not Maa i am Maan. he shake him

ADI: Maa what happen to your voice?

Maan: ADI shouted

ADI: oh oh SIR aap he try to find his glasses.

Maan: what are you doing here in such cold

ADI: Sir how could i leave you alone. i came but the door was closed so i slept here.

Maan: yeh lo... he offer him coffee

ADI: for me looked at him in shocked

Maan: yes

ADI: if i sleep here daily you will daily give me bed ... paused

Maan: looked at him in anger.

ADI: Sir i try Geet bhabi cell many time but it was switched off.

Maan: it was open you just trace her number.

ADI: ok sir..he was about to get up.

Maan: wait call DR & ask him to send his therapies, as now i want to walk to her.

ADI: you will not go today

Maan no we will just be in touch with her movement but stay away.

ADI:oh now you will

Maan:smiled yes lets see for how long she will stay away from everyone of us.

ADI: sir let me trace her where abouts.

Maan: call DR first..

ADI: smiled ... LOVE..

Maan: what?

ADI: kuch nai.

Maan: listen you don't tell anyone about this. & if she call's you tell i am busy in new project ...

ADI: smiled new project

Maan: hmm

ADI: Therapy..he jump out of the lawn chair call DR.

Maan: ask to trace the place.


AT GEET PLACE

Geet: woke up she switched on cell ,"He has so much ego he can't sms me " she closed again.

Kumkum :knocked in..

Geet: hi

Kumkum how are you?

Geet: fine.

Kumkum: my daughter told me that you didnot slept the whole night.

Geet: i did

Kumkum: your eyes are telling how much you slept

Geet: smiled

Kumkum:Geet if you don't mind can i ask you one question

Geet; jee sure why i will mind

Kumkum: ok i will first you freshen up have a proper breakfast.

Geet: ok..

Kumkum walk out.

Geet: what she want to ask? she walk to washroom...looked her self in mirror her eyes was red.


AT Maan place

ADI: she is in Simla

Maan: get the passenger list we will find out.

ADI how?

Maan: see there is their contact number call & ask have you seen a girl .

ADI: wah sir you are ...

Maan: showed him eyes,

ADI: called few number. everyone said they don't remember. ADI called Kumkum home number.


Kumkum: hello

ADI: hi

Kumkum: HI

ADI: kya aap kal he took bus number see Simla aai ha

Kumkum: yes

ADI: kya aap ka na kaise akele larki ko dekha .

Kumkum: who are you ...?

ADI: looked at Maan"sir i think we found her" he gave phone to Maan.

Maan: hi i am Maan Singh Khurana Geet's husband i think my wife is there.

Kumkum: hmmm are you Meera 's cousin,

Maan: yes

Kumkum: oh i have heard your name so many time from Meera.

Maan: looked at ADI.. made Crack gesture.

ADI: kya

Maan: didi is Geet there

Kumkum: Oh tou tume ho woh ., XXX XXX XXx

Maan: kept away the cell from him

Kumkm: are you there

Maan: JEE

Kumkum: ha she is here

Maan: took a deep breather he was relax.. he showed thumb up.

Kumkum: how you find her & this number.

Maan: told her the whole story

Kumkum: ok now what you want come & take your wife.

Maan: i will not come you keep her with you till i am fine..he told kumkum all of his plan.

Kumkum: but this will make her more sad.

Maan:didi kuch din ,please

Kumkum: she can stay in my home for every but i am concern about her , last night she had fever.

Maan: didi if i will come right a way then i will hurt her again , i want to be fine for her .

Kumkum: ok tell me what should i do?

Maan: just take care of her & tell me about her.& please dont tell Meera didi.

Kumkum: ok bye she is coming will call you after sometime

Maan heard Geet voice as she was calling didi.

Kumkum: closed the call"i am here "

Geet; yes didi ask?

kumkum : kuch nai

Geet: didi ask ...

Kumkum: cup her face "quickly have breakfast then we will go for shopping"

Geet: shopping

Kumkum: yes will you wear this clothes the whole day.

Geet: you get for me..

Kumkum: no you will come with me.

Geet: had switched on her cell she was expecting call from him .

Kumkum: saw she was looking at her cell , she smiled. "aara all men are alike they take no time to forget woman"

Geet: but My Maan is not like that. it was slip of tongue...

Kumkum smiled ..as it was confirm she was Maan's wife.

Geet: Oh i wanted to say My Man.

Kumkum. looked at her face "why are you putting sindoor ? as you said you don't want to stay with him"

Geet: i feel secure , & i am still his wife...

Kumkum: looked her again switching on cell . "why don't you calll your self"

Geet: i was just checking charge ha ka nai lets go for shopping.

Kumkum smiled wait let me bring my purse.. she walk to her room

Geet: to got her purse as she walked to living room the phone rang..Geet looked around no one was there,she picked up the phone."hello with scary voice"

Maan: hold his breath he just kissed her through phone & cut call..

Kumkum: who was there?

Geet; someone heard me & cut call.

Kumkum: wrong number hoga..lets go..

Geet: again switched on cell , she waited for sometime ..self talk"last night he was calling again & again why not now, hope he is fine.." she got scared.

Kumkum: drag her with her from when mall to other for 2 hours the roam here & there.

Geet wanted to check but she didnot as she couldn't hide from Kumkum sharp eyes & she didnot want her to make fun of her.

As they reached home Geet got some space she ... self thought "may be Maan found where i am he is coming,that why he didn't called. I should ask ADI, she sms ADI how is Maan?


AT Maan Place

ADI: was watching Maan having therapy ... as they had arrange Dr ..his cell peep. he read & smiled ..

ADI: sir

Maan: read replied "busy in new project"


Geet; read She just couldn't believe her eyes ...so that was your LoVe Mr Maan...she just closed cell hide her

face in pillow.." i will not think of you or show concern from now you carry on with your new project"

Pass Rehna
Dhoor Ha Jana
Dhoor Ha Jakhar
Yaadein
Sub Mausum Hai Pyar Kai
Jana

Maan:Geet you have made fool of Maan Singh khurana now see what he will do with you? he smiled & gave back Adi his cell.

At Geet place

Geet: just hide her self in blanket, "his work is important for him"


Maan: called at Kumkum home.

Kumkum: picked up" why you are teasing your wife?"

Maan: what i did?

Kumkum: you can't give her a miss bell .

Maan "bus woh"

Kumkum: you are not doing this right.

Maan: didi just for few days.

Kumkum: she love you alot

Maan: may be i love her more how can you say that.

Kumkum: ok tell me for how long this drama will carry on

Maan: till i am fine

Kumkum: till then you will make her cry.

Maan: no i want her to discover herself .

Kumkum: how?

Maan: she is a very nice painter i want her to start ..paused

Kumkum: you can make her start all this while she is staying with you.

Maan: when she is with me she will just be a house wife as she says "My husband has so much money why i work"

Kumkum:but

Maan: you just do me a favor just keep her in your home.

Kumkum: she is

Maan: and can you please arrange a land line in her room

Kumkum: so you tease her more.

Maan: jee

Kumkum: if she get's sick or something i will tell her right way.

Maan: i will fly to her ..that is my promise...

Kumkum: you are taking a risk ..

Maan:didi i just want her to be clear that i love her & got married her with my will ,not just to keep her papa promise.

Kumkum: hmm

Maan: she must be crying please for her to have lunch.

Kumkum: so you made her cry , i took me 2 hours to cheer her up.

Maan: sorry ...

Kumkum: ok bye let me see her

Maan: didi..

Kumkum: kya

Maan: thanks.

Kumkum: band karo warna bati hoon Geet ko.

Maan, quickly closed .

Kumkum: love makes normal people crazy... she walk to Geet room

Kumkum: Geet chalo it's lunch time aajo

Geet: didi i am not hungry

Kumkum: sit she pull the blanket "you are crying & starving for that person who doesn't care for you"

Geet: didi

Kumkum: pull her if you want to stay in my home you have to listen me

Geet: didi i had nice breakfast

Kumkum: will you get up or i start searching for your Mr Maan

Geet: quickly sit

Kumkum..murmur both are alike ... she smiled

Geet: kya huwa

Kumkum:chalo she pull her up

Geet: could not help it she walk with her

during lunch..

Kumkum : tell me about your hobbies

Geet: didi i don't have much

Kumkum: kuch to hogai

Geet: i use to like to paint.

Kumkum: oh Sumit ka friend kia gallery ha if you don't mind i can ask him to keep you.

Geet: what i will do?

Kumkum: do cooking their .

Geet: smiled

Kumkum: off course you paint ,then he will arrange ..she looked at Geet face, she was lost some where. "Geet"

Geet was in her past where she promise Maan she will just make painting for him...

Geet: didi i can't paint for any one, i promised Maan i will just paint for him

Kumkum: Maan again

Geet: blushed

Kumkum: larki dekho you have to stand on your feet. you have to show Maan that Mrs Geet Maan is something .she can survive without anyone support

Geet: jee

Kumkum : should i talk to him..

Geet: looked puzzle

Kumkum: don't worry he is married , he will not create problem for you.

Geet: asie baat nahi ha

Kumkum: beta your face say's every thing...

Geet: recollected Maan words ..."Geet you can't hide from me your eyes & face say's every thing..."Didi but some time few people can't read face.

Kumkum: Geet if some time people can't read face may be they don't try to read it.

Geet: pata nai

Kumkum: ok now you get ready i will take you to Arjun Gallery ...

Geet: abhi

Kumkum: yes as i don't want you to waste your precious life single min.

Geet: just hug her

Kumkum:smiled

Sumit enter .."oh emotional scene ..i think i enter at wrong time"

Kumkum: don't be jealous & by the way we both are happy not crying..

Geet: didi i will come she left to her room

Sumit : why she is still here?

Kumkum: because she will stay here

Sumit: you said you will ask her to leave in morning.

Kumkum: wait she took out her cell "see this "

Sumit: she is not your friend Meera ..she looked at their wedding pic

Kumkum: yes she is Meera bhabi...

Sumit: oh but what is she doing here..

Kumkum explain him everything...

Sumit: smiled Wah begum maagai you can judge people..

Kumkum: smiled...



At Geet room

Geet: i will not shrike if i call him & ask him how he is? as she looked herself in mirror. she sms Adi

did he had lunch...

Maan who was sitting with his laptop on staring at Geet pic... looked at the message ...smiled ...he type "did you had?"

Geet: yes reply back

Maan: pull the tray in front of him took first bit...sms"he is having right now "

Geet: don't forget to give him medicine, can i message you?

Maan: read the message..."yes any time"

Geet: smiled "thx :)" text him


Maan: :) send back... i will be 24/7 with you my sleeping beauty what happen we are far but we are still one soul ... he had ask Adi to take other number & give him his cell.

Geet: switched off her cell " Mr Maan i will be in touch with you " she smiled "it is not must to stay close & show your love we can stay far & still love each other, i know my presence use to make you angry." she talked to her self.

Kumkum :knocked ..

Geet: come in

Kumkum: Geet i called line man to install a phone in your room.

Geet: didi i don't need.

Kumkum: when you will start going to gallery you must need.

Geet; ok didi..

Kumkum: you come with me..

Geet: followed her

Kumkum: your bhai had talk to Arjun, he had said you can come & join him.

Geet: thank.

Kumkum: go driver will take you , Aashka will too accompany you as she also go there to take music & painting class from Arjun & Anni.

Geet: smiled as she will have a company...

Niyati Joshi

Aashka: chala didi

Geet: yes.

both reached Arjun home

Geet; was through out the time thinking about Maan.."It was your wish i have a gallery see today i am fulfilling it as a career i am starting to do painting .but you are not here.."

Aashka: didi kya huwa..

Geet: kuch nai

Aashka: didi you know after a 1month there is a exhibition of Arjun uncle painting if you mange to make few painting your work will be to added

Geet: sweetu i just paint for myself.

Aashka: looked at her...they reached Arjun home.

Geet: walked in she was amazed to see his work she walk all around

Stopped at each painting, As Arjun was busy giving class she again sat ,check her cell there was a sms from

ADI( Maan has ADI cell he is using it to be in touch her) "whats up?"..

Geet: "i am sitting in a art gallery, came here to work." send

Maan: reply wow why don't you too paint for the gallery" send

Geet: i just do for Maan send

Maan; wow wow mrs .. smiled "you do something for your self ,if you like you give to gallery" send

Geet: i will not sale it ... send

Maan: zadi ... "but you do join"send

Geet: ok how is he? send

Maan: he woh ..."kon"send

Geet:" about whom i will ask from you... of course Maan" send

Maan: sitting with his lappy...send

Geet: replied yes his first wife...send catch you later...as she saw Arjun coming.

Maan: had a laughter jealousy ...didnot reply...


Geet: hi i am Mrs Geet Maan

Arjun: hi ...pleasure meeting you

Geet; same here.

Arjun: ok tell me about your work..

Geet: told him about her work...as he was professional artist he asked Geet to show him her work...

Geet i don't have..

Arjun: paints & canvas is there you create...

Geet smiled sure .. she walk to studio started painting..she was so much involved in her work she didnot notice time...

Maan:on other hand getting restless as it is being 3 hours no news of Geet..he sms her... "did you join?"

Geet: cell vibrated ... she read sms..." yup painting i wish Maan would have seen this " send

Maan: wished same... he sms "can i see you take pic & mms me"

Geet; why not ... she capture..

Maan: looked at it ... lovely...send..he thought she is so stress out that she is taking out her emotions...

Geet: i was just mingle up.. replied send

Maan didnot reply ..."self thought all because of me ... i will not let you stay in this stress for long Geet..."


Geet: gave it last touch ... he ask the servant where is Arjun..he told her he has gone in dinner, he did came to see her but she was so involved in her work he didnot bother her ... she looked at time it was 9:30... she quickly walk out... driver was waiting for her ... she was feeling very sorry as it was her first day & she was so late... she reached home

Aashka :was waiting for her ..."didi i am hungry come fast we will have dinner"

Geet: where is you mama?

Aashka: party

Geet: relaxed..ok be there in 5 min's "Adi did he had dinner" she sms

Maan: was looking at her painting on his Laptop... "having"

Geet: smiled acha ha ... akaal thekna lagi...she walked out with Aashka ..she had dinner... the had chit chat...

Aashka:didi i have to make project...

Geet: i am too tired i will sleep... she walked to her room.. picked up her cell there were few sms ."did you had dinner?" hello are you there?

Geet: smiled ..."is he asking you to ask me?"

Maan: was impatiently waiting as its being 45min's she had not reply him...he had try to call at her room number but no one picked up... ."he read her reply " why i bhai can't ask?" send

Geet: read: "ok bhai i am sleepy... last night could not sleep... bye... she was very drowsy ,she just played Maan song & slept.

Maan: read ... did you had dinner... he sms... but didnot got reply.. he waited... after 30 mins he called... at her land line number...

Geet: was asleep... after few bells she picked up... uff kon ha... Maan.. listen her full sleepy voice ..he held his breath... geet said hello twice ...he didnot reply ... she kept receiver next to her & again slept...

Maan.. "i feel like hugging you... he listen her breath ..he too slept with her breath...

Geet: in deep sleep" i love you Maan..."

Maan: me too...

both slept without knowing they are talking in their sleep

Geet woke up next morning... she look at the receiver.."why it is here ? hello hello..."

Maan: hmmm...in his sleep

Geet: who is there ?

Maan: open his eyes as he heard her voice... Self thought ..good morning my sleeping beauty... he cut the call..

Geet: pata nahi kon tha ..she hang the phone... her cell vibrate... " hope you have a nice day..."geet smiled text back.. " how is Maan? do take care of him ?" ..walked to freshen up... "she recollected how he came in that day to washroom and scared her . she blush... Maan i have hardly spend 15 days of my life with you but those days are my full life , i can spend my rest of life with your thoughts... sometime a single moment is enough & sometime the whole life goes to waste... i got that single moment...she apply her sindoor ... " looked her self in mirror... "why i am so fresh today as if you are just around me .. " she felt strength in her self.

AT Maan place

Maan: your present make me complete .. i felt you so much today... he smiled at Adi.

ADI: sir

Maan: yes

ADI: is bhabi coming back...

Maan: no not yet.

ADI:Ok sir i have to go to the site can i go.

Maan: yes sure i will call the therapist.

ADI: see you then...

Maan: smiled..

ADI: looked at him in strange way... aaj huwa kya ha he is smiling again & again... went...


At Geet place:

Kumkum: good morning

Geet; good morning didi..she hug her,,

Kumkum: nice to see you so energetic Geet.

Geet:smiled back didi can i go to gallery

Kumkum yes sure i will ask your bhai to drop you.

Geet: thanks... her cell vibrate ... she looked at number it was Meera ... excuse me she walk to room ...self thought if she ask me to call Maan what i will do...she calm her voice "hello"

Meera: wah beta wah ..tum dono to bhool gai ho,,

GeeT: nahi didi...

Meera: neither you or Maan called us ...

Geet: looked at Maan pic placed next to her pillow... "oh didi actually we were"

Meera:" that saying is so true "son is a son until he get's a wife, daughter is daughter for rest of her life..call Maan i want to talk to him"

Geet: didi let me call him you please hold , she called at ADi number

Maan: saw her call he didnot picked

Maan:. text her what happen?

Geet: where is Maan? while talking to Meera

Maan: "what happen?"

Geet: "meera didi want to talk to Maan kya karo?" text ..she kept on talking to Meera asking about everyone at home ,weather etc

Maan: reply"ask her to call at his number , as he has gone to see site..."

Geet: read the message smile...to Meera ... "didi you call on his number he is not at home"

Meera: "ok bye"

Geet: relaxed ... text "thanks for saving me Aaj tou mein phass gai thi"text

Maan: :P send her text

Geet: :@ ok i am going to gallery see you..text

Maan: why so early?

Geet: aapas ki baat ha i want to give surprise my beloved hubby... see you...text... she kissed Maan pic kept it in her bag walk out... Kumkum saw her doing that as she was coming to call her... she turn back.


Geet with new ambition she walk out... "I will make alot of painting's and i will dedicate to you "

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days started passing she daily made a painting and Maan was the first one to see as she use to Mms her work, daily he use to call her when she was asleep and sleep with her breath

all paintings are by different artists i just use it NO COPYRIGHT INTENDED

LoVe

Main teri aankhoon mein rehta hoon

tujhe pata na chale
tere har pal mein gujra hoon
tujhe pata na chale

Drowning in your love

Kare toh phir kya kare

tere bin kaise jiye
aaankhoon mein pyaar liye
bolo kahaan kahaaan phire

"Love is Eternal"

Khafa to hum bhi hai tum bhi ho
humein pata na chale
judai ka mujhe gham bhi hai
koi aisi khata na karein

Sea of LoVe

Sajni paas bulao na
ki dil aaj toota hai
aaj toota hai
sajan maan jao na
ki woh aaj rootha hai
aaj rootha hai
koi use aaj manaye na

the lost love

Jaane ja
dil tujhe hi chaaahe na
oooh ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo

Humein dil se bhulao na
yehi ab kehna hai
ab kehna hai
tum paas aaoona
aaoonnaaa

Enduring Love

Dere nare
dere na na re...
(Sajni paas bulao na
Sajan maan jaona
Sajni paas bulao na)

Sajni paas bulao na
ki dil aaj toota hai
aaj toota hai
sajan maan jao na



on the 15th day of their separation, or staying away from each other , there was exhibition in Arjun gallery , Geet had take a corner for her work she had strictly placed a note not for sale on her work. since last two days she was not feeling well her head was heavy and she was feeling weak.

during the whole period Maan was in touch with her through Kumkum & Adi.they both knew each and everything about each other. thou they had not talk to each other as both of they thought they will not resist if they will speak & they will break .

Geet woke up in morning

Geet saw phone again next to her ... "uff yeh ha kon jo roaz call karta ha ... she said hello , Maan was awake he was just waiting for her to get up and to hear her voice ,before closing the call...

Geet: "please will you tell me today who you are? i told you many time... "she felt morning sickness she just ran to washroom .left the receiver. Maan could hear her throwing up ... "bus Geet bohat hogaya i am coming can't see you like this any more."


eet: walked out… her head was shaking. There is no ego in love . I admit I can't live without you.she picked up her cell try to call him… out of reach reply was coming..she called at ADI number.. got same reply"I know that is you Maan for how long you will hide from me…" she just fall down on bed.

Kumkum : enter..Geet jana nahi ha tum ko..

Geet was fast a sleep because of weakness…

Kumkum: check her forehead it was warm. She called Maan…

Maan: picked… "did you call me before?"

Kumkum: no

Maan: where is Geet?

Kumkum: she is sleeping having temperature..

Maan: I am at airport I am coming till then you please be with her.

Kumkum: did you talked to her ?

Maan: no but I know she feel that person is me.

Kumkum: pagal ho tum dono

Maan: ha aik dosra ka leya …

Kumkum:ok you come quickly or i will tell Meera ..

Maan:no please didi...

Kumkum: aao phir...

Maan: here i come... he cut the call...

Kumkum: walked back to Geet room.. "Geet where are you going" saw her dressing up.

Geet: didi aaj exhibition ha, i had to attend that .

Kumkum: but you are not feeling well.

Geet: didi for last couple of days i am just working, not eating properly may be that why...

Kumkum: ok i will let you go at 1 cost first you come with me ,i will take you to the dr .

Geet: hug her my sweet didi, kuch nahi huwa... yesterday i had fast food may be because of that.

Kumkum: i knew you will not listen to me ..let him come... she had a slip of tongue.

Geet: who?

Kumkum: your jiju i will tell him

Geet:smiled, i promise if i feel same again i will call you then we will go to dr..

Kumkum: pat her cheek... meri aik baat mano

Geet: jee bola

Kumkum: Call your husband

Geet: why?

Kumkum:Geet koi baat nai

Geet: didi did he ever call me in last 15 days...

Kumkum: hmmm

Geet: chora didi muhje ko Maan tha Maan per but he let me down.

Kumkum: may be he daily ask ADI like you ask him... (kumkum knew she asked ADI)

Geet: may be... she started thinking..

Kumkum: call tou karo..

Geet: he must be in his meeting... she just drop the idea...ok i should better go see you there

Kumkum: you both are stubborn...saw her going..



Geet: was at Arjun Gallery ..everyone was liking her work,3 hours passed, Geet was not at all feeling well she just walk to the office and sat there...

Annie: Geet

Geet: yes..she was trying to text Adi ..

Annie: there is a customer he want to buy all your paintings..

Geet: but i don't want to sell ...

Annie: he give this blank cheque .

Geet: tear it & tell him i don't want to sell...

Arjun: enter..Geet please come with me & tell him yourself..

Geet: kya problem ha ... she with anger walk to her corner ... it was dim light there... she had some strange feeling she walk to the place ,felt some one is pulling her towards there ... Maan felt her he took a deep breath.

Geet: Mr my work is not for sale.. here is your cheque please take it back. she just pull her arm out... Please take it don't waste my time...

Maan: choke... "but i want it" he try to control his emotions.

Geet: just turn him ...there was music she just felt it was Maan" YOU"she took a step back as if she was in state of shocked

Maan: yes Me ... he took a step ahead...

Geet was trap in between a pillar .."stop there" she looked him from up to down...

Maan: why? he took 1 more step...

Geet: you can walk with out support...

Maan: yes for you i had to.. he took 1 more step... i promise myself i will come in front of you when i am able to walk...

Geet: was crying tear of joy flowing down her eyes...

Maan: Mrs Geet Maan can i buy your paintings?

Geet: was still holding the cheque in her hand ... "no "

Maan: he wipe her tears.. took cheque from her hand ..dekhti tou mera sign tha... he showed her his signature ...

Geet: muhje ko hosh kahan ha aaj kal...whisper...

Maan: hold his ears...maaf kar do ...

Geet: was shivering with joy & emotions... "you go"

Maan: where should i go when my each way headed towards you...

Geet: i will not leave ADI he must have told you..

Maan: stared in her eyes, yes punish him not me... see i am sorry ..

Geet: please Maan i have learn to stay alone with out you..

Maan: oh really ...he wrap his arm around her waist... pull her close...

Geet: chora ..

Maan: i will not...pull her more close

Geet: try to pushed him ... her head spin.. she clutch his shirt ...

Maan: kya huwa...

Geet: fainted...

Maan: picked her up in his arms..."koi ha, please call Dr."

Annie kya huwa..

Maan:Please call Dr Please...

Annie looked at him in strange way...

Maan: made her lay on sofa in her office...rub her hand & feet

There was a visitor in gallery who was Dr she came in.

Annie: mr you can go we will look after her...

Maan: just raised his hand, his eyes has so much pain that Annie didn't asked him again.

Dr: did this ever happen before?

Maan: since last two days she is not feeling well..

Dr: smiled ... no need to be worried ...

Maan: looked at her in strange way.

Dr: congrats she will be a mom

Maan: mom

Dr: yes her all symptom says that... if i am not wrong you are...

Maan: her husband...

Dr: then congrats to you...

Annie stand there with an open mouth...

Maan: why she ...he caress her face...

Dr: she will be fine.. you just keep her happy... she left the room

Annie: so you are MSK

Maan yes...

Annie her every painting has that initials .. ok you stay here i will go... she closed the door.

Maan: Geet get up we are going to be parents gently touch her face.. Flash back(part 24) "when he found after searching for hour .. he recollected how he made her realized how much he love her... when they just listen their heart beats & let each other conquer each other. he smiled on the naught thought ...tear of joy roll down his eyes... Whisper Geet get up...

Geet: was just getting up.. she was murmuring his name

Maan: here i am Geet, he just hold her hand in his...

Geet; gain conscious "what are you doing here" try to get up

Maan: looking after my Wife he made her lay down & sit on floor next to the sofa..

Geet:Please Maan go..

Maan: i will go with you...

Geet: why with me? she got angry.. in last 15 days did you ever call me ? other than first day ...

Maan: shake his head

Geet:do you know how much i miss you? did you ever asked about me? why should i come ?

Maan: cup her face so you are angry that i didnot called you ...

Geet: yes ..

Maan: if i had call you you would have forgiven me..

Geet: of course

Maan: smiled.. oh mujhe ko nahi pata tha.. he took her hand in his ..

Geet: no you can go...

Maan: smiled

Geet: i am angry & you are smiling...

Maan: tou kya karo ?should i cry like you ..

Geet: Maan

Maan: kissed her.. lips passionately didn't let her say other word... whisper should i tell you how much i miss you ?

Geet: yes ...

Maan: every single second i missed you should i tell you ... from day 1 you wore pink suite with open hairs , you had fast food.. skipped dinner, slept with my picture.. you called my

name 10 times Maan are you there ...

Geet: shocked how you know?

Maan: you are my life dear how could i let you go like that... again kissed her...

Geet was emotionally moved she couldn't argue with him... his eyes his touch his everything ask her to give up..

Maan: whisper aur batao ... winked ... removed her curls...

Geet: but how you know?

Maan Magic...

Geet: bola na...

Maan: first you promise you will not be angry..

Geet: bola...

Maan: Kumkum didi was in my team... he winked...

Geet: oh ... punch him

Maan: waved ADI cell... & this

Geet; oh so all the time i was sms you..

Maan: yes kissed her.. again... he just made her crazy with his passion.whisper... aur batao...

Geet: shyly kya kuch aur ha...

Maan: yes...

Geet: kya ... with surprise...

Maan:daily you use to sleep with my breath... i use to call you ...

Geet: hold his collar mujhe ko shak tha..

Maan: softly kissed her again"kya karta i could not pass a min with out you... i want you 24 /7 "

Geet: why you waited then?

Maan: twinkle his eyes... now you forgiven me ?

Geet: no ...

Maan: why see tit for tat you with veer ...paused...had a laughter

Geet : smiled...

Maan: whisper aur batao..

Geet: aur bhi ha...

Maan: yes ...

Geet: kya...

Maan: first you kiss me... closed his eyes ...

Geet: bola ... she shyly pushed him..

Maan:no first you kiss then i will tell you... & it is the best news...

Geet: why you are teasing me?

Maan: karo jaildi...he pull her more close...

Geet: she helplessly kissed.. Maan just made it passionate ...

Maan: whisper... "we are going to be parents Geet, i am so happy he just hug her..." she could not get him at first ... "Geet i am going to be papa..." he just kissed her fore head... " I love you more than myself never try to leave me again in future i can't leave a min with out you.I want to live with you together forever until my ending days"

Geet :neither i... she wrap her arm around his neck this time she kissed him as if she was thirsty for it for ages...

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