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PART 19


Hello..kaun?

It was geet's call from a telephone booth

Maan..i am leaving..

What? Why so soon

Tum railway station aa jao na

You wait…I am coming

He travels so fast that he reaches there in almost half the actual time…running through the platforms..he spots geet…

Geet..

Tum itna kyon bhaag ke aye ho?

Tum itni jaldi kyon ja rahi ho?

Papa told to come urgently maan…I cant dent it..

With a gloomy look on his face…he walked ahead of her to so that their back faced eachother




Almost yelling…do u really have to go today? Cant u just…just avoid it?

I have stayed longer than I should maan

Maan ran his hand through his hair in this helpless situation…

Waise tum phone pe kuch kehne wale the?

Maan turns to face her

What is it maan?

With a nervous smile oh his face…he continued…

Do u remember our first meeting….in that marriage..

She nodded her head to a yes..

Then…then the second one…we met na…

Ya maan…the third time…we again met na….hmmm…

Maan watched with a confused expression on his face…

Then the fourth time…and she burst out laughing…

Bolna kya chahthe ho?? First..second…

Again she laughed…





She looked over his shoulder and smiled brighter…she looked more beautiful to him with her smile reaching her eyes…after that split moment…she ran and hugged a guy…

Maan felt a stabbing pain in his heart seeing them…

Then geet started hitting him playfully….




[HE IS THE GUY]




He just walked towards them a few steps in trance…

Then that guy noticed him…Is he maan?

Looking at geet again he enquired…to which she nodded…

Dude…

He came to maan and hugged him…finally I got to meet you…really…awesome to see you yaar…

You know how unfair it is? She used to talk only for half an hour and for 20 min she used to speak about you only….maan ne ye kiya maan ne woh kiya…

Both the guys looked at geet…who was smiling brightly…

Bringing her bit closer…pehle toh bahut boring lagta tha…then I was simply bowled over by one who took care of my girl so well…

Maan was utterly speechless…he just stood numb…

That's why I love you…

You are just shameless…

Why wont I be? The day I saw ur photo….i said yes…I liked u madly…dint we get engaged then and their??

Geet hit him…

Turning to maan…shaadi bhi ho jati maan…par that wedding stopped mine…

Maan was clueless to what was going on…

Just then a train announcement is made and it arrives in the platform…

I will check with the tickets..luggage le ja raha hoon…jaldi karna…to which geet nodded…

After he went away….

Hyderabad meine bahut bahut enjoy kiya…sab kuch tumhari wajah se…

Iss baar tumhe Bangalore aana hai…ok?

Before he could respond DEV calls them…

Geet jaldi karo..

The next moment…geet hugs maan tightly…







Bye maan…thank you…

She turns and leaves…and dev helps her to get into the train…

I will call you from Bangalore…take care and thanks for everything…

Saying so…she goes away…









Maan was left numb….






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Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago
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