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Posted: 14 years ago
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I really liked this part. So romantic and pl add me on your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow maan such sweet heart crying becuase he take from her loved once geet did great
job to resure him that she is happy
fabulous update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Great part.............. Maan is such a sweetheart............love him............. He cares so much for Geet.................Love their mutual understanding update soooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn........................
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Tht was really a super cute update..continue soon...precap is much interesting..!!

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sooo lovely n touchy part
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Maan is so sweet,he is feeling guilty for Geet leaving her family back,how dreamy.
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NOTE:Guys,I said i'd give a double update on Part 50 but if you want a double one,It'llbe about 3 o clock.Or you can have part 50 now and Part 51 tonite😆
Pls tell me wat to do?😕
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whichever suits u dear....................all i want is the update................a big one.............he he he.................
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..all i want is the update
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NIGHT BEFORE THE WEDDING

The nerves were killing me.It was 11,Meera was tired and cranky but i wouldn't let her sleep.I wanted o talk to her.

Geet:Look,Its my last night here so lets make the most of it,Ok?

Meera:You mean your last night in this room? Because then,You'll move in the room next door and have better things to do at night than sleep,Right?

Geet:Right

Meera:So what do you wanna talk about?

Geet:Anything.Hows your life?

Meera:Great!!! Yours?

Geet:Well,its ok.But todays been such a hectic day,First all the work,Then Maan and all his worries and having to talk him out of it and then the ritual,Plus all that Crying!!! It was so tiring right?Right Meera?

I looked at Meera.She was asleep!!! I was so offended!! Was i that boring? Now,Who would i talk to? I'd have to go to sleep.If only Maan was awake!! I changed into a white nightie that had a bit of gold pattern at the top,It was comfortable and pretty.I lied in bed and closed my eyes.I couldn't sleep but laid in bed counting Sheep jumping over a fence.No matter how old i got,I still did that.It was childish really but i still did it even though it didn't work.That passed a few hours but i still wasn't asleep.Suddenly,I became aware of a noise outside,A Pitter-Patter of Raindrops!!! It was raining!!! This was the first rain since i'd come to New York and i remembered that when i lived here,I used to wait for the rainfall every year.I jumped out of bed and stuck my head out of the window.I let the raindrops fall on my face,drenching me in the cool breeze.But it didn't feel right.It wasn't the same as being outside and feeling it.I shoved on a pair of white leggings over my nightie,Put on my shoes and tiptoed down the stairs.In my excitement,I even forgot about missing the step that creaked.I ran to the door and yanked it open.Surprisingly,It wasn't locked.I looked outside and was stunned.No,Shocked!! Stood in the rain was Maan!! He was smiling and was enjoying the rain.I stood there looking at him smiling,Seeing the rain drench his black shirt,making it cling to his muscular chest,exposing things i'd never seen before until temptation gave way and i ran outside and joined him.He looked shocked to see me.

Maan:Geet?

Geet:I love the New York rains,I always used to wait for them to come when i lived here.I couldn't resist today either.But i never thought you'd be like this aswell.

Maan:See,Thats MSK for you.You never know whats coming next!!

Geet:Bighead!!!

Maan:I'll take it as a compliment.Thank you!!!!

I stood there watching the rain fall,Drenching me in its cold,pure water,enjoying the moment.Maan was stood there watching me.I ran my hands through my hair wondering what he was thinking.He started moving towards me and i stood mesmerised at his body.Ok,i had to look away from his chest.i forced myself to look at his face,i was surprised i could! He came and stood infront of me,he held his hand out and let the rain gather.Then,He poured it on my face gently.His touch send jolts through my body,intensified by the coldness and wetness of his hand. I wrapped my arms around him and hugged him tightly.He hugged me with the same passion and intensity.

A few minutes,Or it might have been hours,i wouldn't have realised, later we broke apart and ran to the bench on the balcony and sat there.

Geet:Why were you here anyway?

Maan:I couldn't sleep,i felt a weird sort of restlessness,and then i heard the rain!!

Geet:Me too! And Meera fell asleep.I hate her so much!!

Maan:No,You don't!!! You love her and you'll miss her

Geet:True!

I rested my head on his shoulder to stop myself ogling at his chest.I closed my eyes and drifted off into a dream.

SCENE CHANGE.5 O CLOCK IN THE MORNING.MAAN AND GEET SLEEPING OUTSIDE.

It was so cold!!!Why wasn't the heating on!!!! And why was i wet? The truth dawned on me and i woke up with a start! My suspicion was true!!! Me and Maan had fallen asleep outside!!

Geet:Maan!!! Maan,Wake up!!!

I shook him and he woke up.

Maan:What is it? Have i overslept? Oh no,i've missed the wedding!!!

Geet:No,But we slept outside!!! Whats the time?

Maan:Shit!!! Its 5 o clock.

Geet:Quick!!! Lets go back inside!!!

Maan:Yes,A brutal murder by the brides auntie wouldn't be right would it?

Geet:Stop joking!!! Come On!!

We got up and tiptoed inside.

Maan:What if you've got fever?

Geet:Dont worry,I'll be fine!Now Go!!!

Maan:Goodnight!!!

Geet:More like Good Morning!!!

Maan:Bye

I changed into dry clothes and lied in bed.Thank God Meera was sleeping!! I was tired now and wanted to sleep!!! As soon as my head touched the pillow,i drifted into a peaceful slumber.

SCENE CHANGE.9 O CLOCK.MAAN COMES INTO GEETS ROOM AND SEES HER SLEEPING.HE SITS ON HER BED AND STROKES HER HAIR.

Maan:Geet,Wake Up.

I opened my eyes slowly and saw Maan sat there stroking my hair.I was sure i had an overactive imagination,I was seeing Maan everywhere.

Geet:Geet,When will you stop dreaming? Theres a difference in fantasy and reality.

Maan:Im really here,geet.

Geet:My imagination talks? Wow,Geet!!! Now stop lying to me!! No,youre not!!

Maan:Are you ok? Have you got fever?

Geet:No,Now leave me alone.Youre not real!!!!

Maan:I'll prove it to you.

My imagination leaned towards me,leaving no distance between us.He pressed his soft lips on top of mine and i lay there unmoving,Totally mesmerised.Only Maan could do this to me.It was really Maan.He pulled away and looked at me.

Geet:Youre real!!

Maan:Duh!!! Youre so funny sometimes!!! Are you ok?

Geet:Just tired.You?

But before he could reply,i heard Auntie calling me and coming up he stairs.I jumped out of bed.

Geet:Quick,Go!!!! Before she sees you.

Maan:I cant,She'll see me leaving!

Geet:What should i do? Ermm get in the cupboard.No,Sit Down.No,i'll sit down.Ermmm...Got It!! Under the bed.

Maan:What?

Geet:Now!!

I pushed him under and put the duvet on the floor to help cover him up.

Auntie:Geet,Youre awake!!!!

Geet:Hmmmm...Just now.

Auntie:Ok,Try on your outfit once.Its the pink and purple one in that cupboard.

Geet:Ok

I walked to the wardrobe and pulled out a pink and purple outfit.

Geet:I'll just go try it on in the bathroom

Auntie:Youre shying from me? Im your auntie,Ive changed your diapers.Now come on!!!!

She began pulling at my top and i just prayed Maan couldn't see.I undressed and stood naked while she dressed me.

Auntie:Look in the mirror.

I turned in the mirror and was shocked.There was no way i was wearing this.No way.I would kill Meera for choosing this!!!

Geet:I cant wear this,Theres nothing to wear.Meera!!!!!!!

Auntie:Meera didn't choose it,You did!!! And you look beautiful!!

Geet:How could i have chosen this? No way!!!!

Ufff,I really wanted to know what she was wearing!!! But if i peeked,I'd get caught!!!

Auntie:You did and now youre going to have to wear it.Your weddings in 5 hours!!!

Geet:But...

Auntie:Youre going to have to,Im sorry but you should have paid attention!!!Now get changed back and come down.Then you've got an appointment at the beauticians so hurry.

I sat on the bed after she left,wondering how i'd made such a big mistake? How could i wear this?

END

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Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago

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