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Posted: 14 years ago
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maan such sweet heart for solving the problem great update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn thanks pm thank yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Really really luved this update...n luv this maan a lot...😍...Can't waiti for the next update...!!update soon..!!

Rohini

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww Maan the ultimate problem solver..loved their understanding
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awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...................... I loved the way ....they understand each other...............no condition.......only love....................update sooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn This is for you Sarah⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏 you are a great writer⭐️⭐️
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nice part...glad that geet is happy...update soon
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wow u nearly scared me by the promo but thank god nothing of that sort happened or else i would have killed u
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Thanks For All The Amazing Comments And Support!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆😆👏
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Part 49

ITS THE AFTERNOON,4 OCLOCK.

Phew!! What a day!!! It was only 4 o clock but i was completely shattered.Meera had kept me busy in the preparations for tonight all day.Sometimes,It was decorating the Hall or sometimes arranging for the food,new jobs kept popping up.I was sure she was just doing it to annoy me.Finally,i had some free time to myself .All i wanted to do was sleep,I closed my eyes and prepared to drift off into my dream world.Hmmmm...how nice this felt!!! A few minutes later,I felt someones cold hands stroke my cheek,I don't know why but i thought i should keep my eyes shut so i did.The same person then kissed my forehead and began crying.That person was Maan.Why was he crying? What was wrong?I couldn't even ask him,i knew he didn't want me to find out.If he did,he wouldn't have come whilst i was sleeping.And i had to respect his decision.But His tears cut through me,Tore me apart.I yearned to comfort him,To wrap my arms around him and hug him,To ask him what was wrong and help him sort it out,like he'd done with me.But i couldn't.And that hurt the most.What sort of compulsion was this? I was helpless,i couldn't DO anything,i just had to lie here and pretend to sleep.Pretend i couldn't hear him cry,Pretend i couldn't feel his tears falling on my hand,Pretend i was unaffected,that nothing had happened. Suddenly,his sobs stopped and he began to speak.But his voice just added to the pain i felt,It cracked and expressesd his hurt even more.

Maan:Geet,Im sorry.Im sorry.

Sorry for what? He held my hand and kissed it.

Maan:Im taking you away from your family,I know.Im taking you away from your loved ones.I know you don't want to go and its hurting you.But youre not saying anything because of me,Because you love me and will do anything for me.But youre hurting inside,I can tell.And im sorry but i cant change my decision either.I love you too much to wait.But i'll never forgive myself for this either.Whenever you miss your family,I'll remember what i did to you and the pain you had to go through,and are still going through.Im sorry Geet,Im sorry.

He kissed my forehead again and got up to leave.He turned and a tear rolled down my cheek.He left and closed the door.I opened my eyes and finally let the tears pour out,I didn't even try to stop them,i just let them fall,taking with them all the emotions running through me;Pain,Hurt,Sadness.I sat there shaking and sobbing until my tears ran dry,None were left to fall.I'd always underestimated him,Taken him for granted,Believed he was less than he actually was.He was much more.He was sad because he felt guilty for taking me away from my loved ones but what he didn't know was that i'd been prepared for this.I'd known since childhood that one day,i'd have to leave my house and go to someone elses,I'd have to forget my family and accept that person's family as my own.I didn't agree with it but... So why was he so guilty? Why did he think i was upset about it? No,I had to clear his misunderstanding,before he worried too much,before it could cause him more pain! I got up and was about to go and find him when Meera came and stopped me.Urgghhh!!! Not Now!!!! I had to go!!!

Geet:Meera!!!! Please Let me go!!! I have to talk to Maan!!

Meera:You Have to?

Geet:Not Now!! Its urgent!

Meera:Well,You cant talk to him anyway,He's going out

Geet:Out?With Who?

Meera:Uncle and Adi to get some last minute things.

Geet:What?

MAAN IS STOOD IN THE HALLWAY LISTENING.

Geet:I Really needed to talk to him,Its urgent!!!

Geet needs to talk to me? It sounds really urgent or why would she be insisting so much?

Maan:Uncle,I was thinking i've got a headache and i don't want to be ill tonight so should i stay at home and rest? If its Ok?

Uncle:Sure,Go and rest.We'll leave.Come,Adi.

I'll go and see Geet straight away!!!! But Meera?

Maan:Meera?

Meera:Mention the devil...

Geet:Shut up

Maan was still here? Good,I could talk to him!

Maan:Your mums calling you,She needs your help!

Meera:Why cant Geet do it? Its her wedding!!

Thank God,She'd gone.Now we were alone.

I walked over to the door and locked it.We had to talk in Private,There was no room for anyone else between us,No third Person.

Geet:I need to talk to you

Maan:Whats wrong?

Geet:Before,When you came into my room.... I heard everything.

I looked at him,Trying to understand what he was feeling.But his eyes were unreadable,Blank.No Pain,No Shock,Nothing.

Maan:Oh

Geet:And you've got it all wrong!! Im not upset about leaving everyone,Not at all!I always knew i'd have to do this one day.And anyway,Why would i be sad about leaving that spoiled brat Meera?

I laughed,hoping to get a response out of him.But he didn't laugh.

Maan:So youre ok?

Geet:Yes,Im happy.And now i want you to be happy,

Maan:Your happiness is my happiness.

Geet:SMILE!!!!

I hugged him,Relaxing.I was at peace now.

Meera:Liar!!!!

I should have known it was shortlived.I'd had no time to myself so why now?

Maan:I lied to Meera

Geet:Never mind

I opened the door and saw her looking furious

Geet:Meera,Can you get me ready Quickly for the mehendi?Youre so good at it!!!

Meera:Errmmm...OK? I'll be back in a sec

Geet:See,Maan,Thats how u handle Meera

Maan:I'll remember for next time

Meera:What?

Maan:Nothing,Im just going.Enjoy,Geet HANDA!!!

Geet:I will Maan KHURANA

Meera:Ok,Whats with all the Handa and Khurana?

Maan:Nothing,Bye!!!

SCENE CHANGE.7 O CLOCK.GEET COMES DOWN DRESSED IN SIMPLE RED SALWAR SUIT,LOOKING STUNNING.

Auntie:You look amazing!!!!

Geet:Its All Meera

Meera:Come sit.Lets Start.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DamYhR_P1yY[/YOUTUBE]

THE VM STARTS IN THE PRESENT THEN THE HORSE BIT WHERE MAAN COMES IS HER DREAM

My eyes filled with Tears.I hadn't expected that.I had never thought i would be sad or cry.I had really changed these past months and i hadn't even realised.The tears fell and Meera and Auntie came up to me and hugged me.

Meera:Dont cry,Smile.Be happy,Its a good thing.Youre getting new happiness

Auntie:And to get new things,You have to let go of old things.

I smiled tearfully.She was right.My life would change tomorrow.

Meera:Now go and sort yourself out.

I got up and left,I was in a daze thinking about all the changes.Someone pulled me and pinned me to the wall.Maan.How did i know?

Geet:Maan,Let me go!!! Everyones here!!

Maan:So,Im fulfilling a ritual?

Geet:Oh really?

Maan:Yes,i have to find my name in your mehendi.

Geet:Clever Clogs,You do that on the...

I stopped,Too shy to continue

Maan:On the?

Geet:Suhaag Raat

Maan:And when will i do it?

Geet:Not now.On our...Our Suhaag raat.

I blushed and ran away smiling and happy.I loved him so much!!!!

END

Precap:Wedding Romance!!! PLS COMMENT 😆😆 VM CREDIT:MissIndepent786😳
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
me first

loved the update ... aww Maan was crying coz she will be leaving her family ... he's such a sweet heart ...

btw just one question .. why isnt Geet's parents are there for her wedding?


continue soon

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awesome update.. maan n geet truly love each other..
jus a question.. aint geet's mum gna b at d wedding?
neways lovely update n upload d nxt part as soon as u can.. :D

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