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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
wow thats an awsome one yaar ...loved it so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
awwwwwwww
iloved it
and yes plz do take your time but do cont
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Hey i started to read ur ff...
Its amazing..
And i love the story.. Its very beautiful ff.. And thank u so much foq the pms. I m sorry i couldnt comment. Was busy busy....
Love
rukh.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
🤢🤢...Kiss scene n rain scene...☺️..really luved it...omg...geet is wondering wearing it....rem...maan is there..😲..it will spoil his surprise on wedding day.......contiue soon..waiting eagerly ...!!

rohini

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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
awesome update dear
loved it...poor geet doesn't even remember she is the one who brought that dress..
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
loved it...it was too cute....good thing they sorted out their problems
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loved the rain part.....the dress looks nice....maan is sure to faint.....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 51

I sat on the bed,Worried.Suddenly,The Duvet began to move!!!!

Geet:Argghhh!!!! Mouse! Mouse!!!

I was pushed back on the bed by force and a hand was placed on my mouth.Oh,It was Maan.I'd forgotten about him.

Maan:What are you doing? Its me!!!

Geet:I forgot,Sorry!!!

Now that i looked at her closely,She was uncomfortable and i could tell why.she was in her bridal outfit that she didn't like.She felt exposed.But she looked stunning,mindblowing.I felt like touching her but i knew she didn't want me to.She kept fidgeting so i picked her up and stood up.

Maan:You look amazing,Dont worry!!!

Geet:No,I don't! Im not wearing anything!!

Maan:You are and im already out of my senses.Think what will happen when you come fully dressed,with jewellery,Makeup.Have some pity on me.

Geet:Youre just trying to make me feel better

Maan:No,I would never lie to you.Now get changed and come down.

SCENE CHANGE.GEET GOES DOWN.

Auntie:Geet,Hurry!!! Have Breakfast and go!!!

Geet:I'll just have an apple,Im not hungry,I wont be able to eat!!

Meera:Is it the nerves?

Geet:Yes,Urgghhh!!!

Meera:Have you got your TOTM yet?

Geet:My what?

Meera:You Know,Your red bus.

Geet:Why would i want a red bus? Speak normally.

I burst out laughing.I couldn't stop myself.She was so innocent.

Meera:See,Even he knows.

Geet:Knows what?

Meera:Have you got PMT?

Geet:Huh?

I pulled Geet towards me and whispered softly so no-one could hear:Geet,She means have you had your period? PMT is post menstrual trauma,Your hormones change after your period and you said you were nervous so...

I blushed with embarrassment.I wanted to sink in the floor and die.I didn't know THAT? MAAN had to explain it to me? Why Did Meera even ASK?

Geet:Maan,Can you please close your ears?

Maan:Sure

I stuck my fingers in my ears obediently and waited.

Geet:Yes,I have.Last week.I finished 2 days ago.Anything Else?

Meera:THATS why youre Nervous.

I felt like screaming at her.

Geet:No,Its Not.Im nervous because of the wedding and my god damn outfit.Why didn't you stop me?

Meera:I did.But you didn't listen

Geet:Next time,Remind me youre right and i'm wrong

Meera:Ok.Now come on.

Geet:Let me get changed.Im in my JimJams.

Meera:JimJams? LOL! You don't need to anyway,You'll get changed there and come back so...

Geet:Im NOT walking through New York Wearing a top that says'Im Cuddly and Lovable.Come and get Me.'No Way!!!!

Meera:well,u shudnt have worn my clothes on then last night.

Geet:Ohh Come On.We'll get Uncle to drop us.

Maan:Can i listen now?

Geet:Oops sorry,I forgot.

I ran out of the door but stopped to peck him on the cheek.He smiled.

SCENE CHANGE.3 O CLOCK.

We were running late.The beautician had spent ages doing my hair and in the end,shed just straightened it.I bet Maan was waiting for me.We rushed in and saw everyone waiting.There were other couples there aswell but we were the only ones dressed up.I felt awkward.Maan just gazed at me longingly.I knew what he was thinking and i looked down and blushed.

Maan:You look amazing!!

Geet:You Too!!

He was dressed in a black coat and pants with a white shirt underneath(Pee Loon Sequence).He looked ravishing.A man appeared and called out our Names.We were to go inside.We needed atleast 3 witnesses but we had more,About 20.We walked in holding hands.There was really no point of all the effort,all we did was sign a paper.In 10 minutes,We were done.We walked out as Mr and Mrs Maan Singh Khurana.How nice it felt!!! We arrived back home and it felt different,weird,like them 10 minutes we'd been away for had changed everything.Everything looked the same but felt different.Everything smelled the same but had a different essence to it.We sat down and everyone was quiet.

Meera:So,Are you happy?

Geet:Yes Why?

Meera:Just asking.Ok,someone speak,its really awkward.

Maan:Its nice weather outside.

I looked at him in exasperation.Was that all he could think of? How creative!!!

Geet:Not about the weather!!!!

Adi:Geet Sis,Why are you dressed like this? Are we going to a party?

Maan:No,We've just been.

Adi:Oh youre looking very pretty,Geet Sis.

Geet:You Too.Just like Robert Pattinson in Twilight.

Adi:Robyn Patters? Who's that girl? Do i look like a girl to you?

Geet:Never mind.

I felt pain in my chest and coughed.My chest sounded hollow.

Maan:Are you ok?

Geet:Yes just had some chest pain.

Maan:Should i call a doctor?

Geet:No,i'll go and lie down.I'll be fine then.#

Maan:Ok

I got up and walked up the stairs.When i reached the top though,I faced a dilemma.Which room should i go in? Mine Or His? I really didn't know what to do.I just stood there staring at the doors.When the pain started to increase,I chose the easiest option,My room.Yes,Maan might be hurt but i could explain to him afterwards.Anyway,It would be easier than listening to Meeras Taunts.I lied on the bed,Kicked off my shoes and slept,Dreaming of Maan,Our Future and What it would hold.

END

Precap:Suhaag Raat Or Not?😉

Pls Comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
loved it .... yippeee they are married .. i hope they stay happy happy

Geet:Im NOT walking through New York Wearing a top that says'Im Cuddly and Lovable.Come and get Me.'No Way!!!! .. this was the best line ever 🤣

pain in the chest??? abhee ye kia hua?

btw me first .. yippeeee

continue soon

love
Sana


Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
nice one...wow maneet married... wht abt the SR??? continue soon

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