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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tere_liye_10

Hehe u say it like its bin a month LOL

I think its pretty quick😳
Nearly Done,The PMing takes The piss tho😕

Yeah I know sending the PMs takes ages
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet4everXxX

Yeah I know sending the PMs takes ages

Ufft i hate it
it really makes wanna never update agen
Khuda jaane Ke Main Fidaa Hoon😉
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tere_liye_10

Ufft i hate it

it really makes wanna never update agen
Khuda jaane Ke Main Fidaa Hoon😉

Lol, anyways I gotta go now. Will read your update 2morrow. Looking forward to it xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet4everXxX

Lol, anyways I gotta go now. Will read your update 2morrow. Looking forward to it xxx

See ya,yh its 11 here🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago

Important:Ermmm...Im Thinking To End 4 Ff's Of Mine And Only Continue With 2,Which I Will Also Draw To An End In The Next 7-8 Months.I Want Toend All My Ff's Before I Go Into My Gcse's And It Would Be Easier For That To Happen If I Only Had 2 Ff's.So Id Like To Continue Pyaar Ka Woh Pehla Ehsaas And Shaadi...Ya Khel? Only And End Suhaag Ki Nishaani,Gairat,Woh Lamhe Woh Baatein,Age Shouldnt Matter..Reasons? Well,Pykwpe Is My First Ff And Is Very Close To My Heart And If This Wasn't Loved By You All I Would Never Have Done Other Ff's.And Syk Is The One That Most People Like And I Like Writing It Too So... Pls Tell Me Wat U Think Of My Decision And If There Any Ff's You Want Me To Continue Pls Tell Me.Oh The FF'S I Close,Well I'll Continue Them When My GCSE's End.😳😉

Credit For The Red Bit Goes To Hetuu,Aka Sweetcoco The Queen Of Hotness And The Nicest Gal And Biggest DD Drooler Love You Loads Hetuu Jaan.Muaaahh!!! She Wrote It For Me On Request Cos She Rocks At Those Scenes. Oh And If You Guys Wanna Read A Super Hott Amazing Gurti FF,Chek This Out:http://gurti4eva.wordpress.com/

Oh And This Update Is Ermm Quite Hot So Be Careful!!!😳😳😳

Part 64

I Looked At Him,At His Face Crumpled With Frustration And Worry.He Was Still Thinking About what Had Happened And I Wanted Him To Forget that And Just Move On.I Would Never Forget What Happened But Would Try And Push It To The Back Of My Mind So We Could Start A new Life Together.I Slipped My Hand Through His And Smiled.

Geet:Maan,Whats The Plan By The Way? Or Are You Gunna Make Me Sleep On The Street?LOL

Maan:Ermmm...We'll Go To My House

I Cursed Under My Breath.When He Wanted To smile,He Wouldnt Stop And when i wanted him to,He Just Wouldnt.I Stopped Him And Took Him To A Bench And We Sat Down.I Placed My Hands On His Face And Smiled.

Geet:Maan Youre Still Thinking About What Happened Before Right?

He Looked Down And In His Eyes,I Saw Pure Anger.

Maan:Geet,I Let You Down.I Couldnt Fulfill My Promise That I Would Always Protect You.I Just Stood There Listening To Her Say All That And I Hate Myself For That.Why Didnt I Speak Up For You?

Geet:Oye!! Who Says You Let Me Down? Stupid.Maan,Your Silence Speaks More Than Your Words.Maan,Im Not Blind.I Saw Your Face When she Said That,You looked like you wanted to slap her.

Maan:It Was That Evident?

Geet:Yess,As Clear As Anything.But Im Glad You Didnt.Cos To Slap Her,You'd Have To Touch her And that Right Is Reserved Only For Me Got It? Maan,I Want You To Forget Everything Please And Just Move On.We'll Start A New Life Together.

He Wrapped His Arms Around Me And Hugged Me.

Maan:Where Theres Just You And Me.

Geet:Hmmm...That Sounds Nice

Maan:(laughs) I Was Hoping You'd Say That,Weve Got ALOT To do When We Get Home.

I Blushed And Looked Down,Just The Thought Of It Sent Butterflies Fluttering In My Stomach And I Smiled Shyly.Maan Lifted My Chin Up And Looked Into My Eyes.The Love And Passion That Reflected Back At Me Made Me Look Down And Blush Like Mad Again.

Maan:Geet?

Geet:Hmmm...Yeah?

Maan:You Look Really Cute When You Blush And You Test My Patience Again And Again.

Geet:Well Lets Go Home so I Dont Test It Anymore

Maan:Hmmm...Ill Have To Take You Up On That.Come On.

A Few Minutes Later,We Arrived At A Grand House That Oozed Royalty.I Looked At Maan In Shock

Geet:THIS Is Your House?

Maan:Ermmm Yeah.Why? Dont You Like It?

Geet:Like It? Gawwd its So Big Maan,Im Scared

Maan:(laughs)Scared? Why?

Geet:I Might get Lost

Maan:Yes But I'llAlways Find You.Come On,Lets Go in.

We Walked In And I Looked Around,The walls were painted Pale white,A Colour that made the place look more regal.

Maan:Mum!! Mum Are You Here?

Geet:Maan Dont.Im Scared.

Maan:Geet,She Wont Say Anything.Dont Worry,You'll Like Her

A Servant Came Running And Maan Smiled

Maan:Nakool Baba,Still Running Around? Arrey Why don't you rest?

Nakool:Im Fine sir,I Like Serving You

Maan:Accha.Is Mom Here?

Nakool:No Theyve gone out to a dance.

Maan:They'll Be back late then.Nakool Kaka u go and rest,its late ok?

Nakool:Sir Whos this Girl?

Maan:Nakul This Is My Wife Geet

I Smiled At Nakool.

Nakool:What? Your Wife? Kab?Kaha?Ur Mum?

Maan:Nakool Calm Down.Last week,In New York And Mom knows

Nakool:Accha.Welcome Madam Geet.

Geet:Why Are you calling me madam? Aap mujhse barey ho na? I Shalll Call You Nakool Chachu.

Nakool:Teek hai.If you need anything,tell me.

Geet:I Have hands and feet right? Why trouble you? Ill get it myself don't worry

Nakool:Pata Nahi where you found such a nice and unique Girl Maan Babu.Accha Im Going.

Maan And Geet:Byee

Maan:And Its Time For Us To Go Upstairs too.

Geet:Really?

Maan:If We Dont Then Im Going to die a slow,painful death

Geet:Youre So Filmy.Come On.

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His heart was pounding in his chest, making his head throb. Butterflies flitted in his stomach as his eyes beheld her magnificent beauty. A woman he had done nothing but think of since the day she walked into his life. Was it a coincidence? Of all the people and places in the world, was it chance that led to her existence into his life? He had been wrong; it had been wrong; it felt wrong to stay away from her for so long. He slipped his hand into hers'a simple gesture that filled them with nerves. Her big, hazel majesty eyes looked into his sexy smoldering ones'and then both of them smiled at each other. He gazed into her eyes and read her will, and then, he tilted her chin slightly as he brought his lips to hers. He pulled her into a light embrace as their lips met with passion. Their arms engulfed each other tightly as their tongues swirled ferociously. The world didn't exist in that moment of joy'it was just Maan and his Geet. He broke the kiss and stared deep into her face'his lips explored all parts of her skin. Then he kissed her on the forehead and guided her to the privacy of their bedroom. There was no need for words as they stepped inside and he locked the door.

Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon
Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai

Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se
Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua
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Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

The tension increased as they gazed into each other's eyes. Maan laid her gently down on the bed and she gasped slightly as she felt his hand sliding up and down her leg and thigh. He whispered into her ear and kissed her earlobe as she leaned forward and clasped her hand onto his neck. Geet pulled him closer to her and he felt the curves of her breasts. Her foot rose into the air and she placed onto of his leg. He kissed her neck and made his was down to her chest and cleavage. Geet blushed as she felt his erect manhood poking her through his pants. She melted into his arms as his lips touched all the parts of her body. They bodies touched, they hips grinded together, they tongues entwined. The world was lost to them; they were alone in their bubble of passion and pleasure. He slipped his hand underneath her top, sliding it up across her belly till he could feel the material of her bra brushing his fingertips. He hesitated, it had been a long time since he had done this and suddenly wasn't so sure of himself. She sensed his doubt and kissed him hard on the lips'moving his hand up with her own to cup your bra covered breasts.

Maan pulled her up to a sitting position and between kisses, started grasping each other's clothes, gripping the fabric. He removed her top, and his eyes almost popped out of his skull at how mesmerizing she looked. She simply blushed at his reaction and helped him unbutton his shirt. Leaning forward, she kissed his rock-solid bare chest, running her fingers over his muscles. Geet's hands dropped to his belt and she undid it for him. He pulled off his pants'leaving her eyes wide in shock as the size of his monstrous bulge. He tenderly pushed her against the bed sheets. He jerked the bra and panties off of her and chucked them across the floor. Her heart pounded as he pressed their naked bodies together. Finally, Maan held her firm, perfect breasts in his hand and she let out a little moan as his fingers rubbed her hardening nipples. Maan pressed his lips to her cheek, her neck, her shoulder as her hands explored the skin on his back. He brought his lips to her nipples and swirled them with his tongue. He teased her as she squirmed with arousal'silently begging for more.

Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Kadam Ke
Main Nishanon Pe
Chalun Rukun Ishaare Pe
Tu Kahe To Khwabon Ka Bana Ke
Main Bahana Sa
Mila Karun Sirhaane Pe
Ho Tum Pe Dil Ki Baatein Seekhi
Tum Se Hi Yeh Raahein Seekhi
Tum Pe Mar Ke Main To Jee Gaaya


Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Maan brought his eyes back to meet hers and she kissed her forehead, nose and lip'sending him shivers down his spine. He went wild him passion and began kissing every part of her body'ever inch of skin. Her body grew tense from his touch and as he kissed the inner parts of her thighs she gripped the bed tightly. She let out a low groan as he sucked and licked on her navel. Geet ran her fingers through his thick locks. His breathing quickened as her groans grew louder. He then, positioned himself between her legs, and her heart beat got faster. He could feel her trembling with anticipation. A small cry escaped her lips as he pressed his manhood into her and her fingers threaded into his hair. She let out a longer moan as he worked in and out of her, getting deeper and deeper. She bit her bottom lip and rolled her head back as his entered length disappeared inside of her. She wrapped her legs tightly around his, grabbing him and pulling him into a hug, allowing Maan to kiss her neck. After a pause he started to slide back and forth. It was slow, powerful and deep. He could hear her astonished gasps as he filled her each time. Geet whispered for more, wanting Maan to go faster. Her mouth formed a little 'O', as pleasure flowed through. He growled a little as she dug her small fingers into his back, and gave his neck a bite. Her hips thrust up to meet his and they were soon panting and moaning together. He got faster and faster causing her to cry out in ecstasy, which only grew his enthusiasm. With a final loud groan, her back arched as she came. Her body trembled as she climaxed and he continued to push into her through her climax. He shot into her and they got collapsed in each other's arms'trying to catch their breath.

Dil Kahe Ke Aaj To Chupa Lo Tum
Panahon Mein
Ke Daar Hai Tum Ko Kha Doonga
Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko
Na Nazar Laga
Ke Daar Hai Mein To Ro Doonga

O Karti Hoon Sau Vaade Tum Se
Baandhe Dil Ke Dhaage Tum Se
Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kya Hua

Geet pressed her lips to his, and whispered how amazing it felt. With a naughty smile, she rolled him over without and pressed her tiny hands to his chest . And then started to rise and fall on his manhood. She got faster and faster, and he leaned forward and seized the chance to kiss her again. They were both hot and heavy, groaning louder and louder. He took control, holding her hips with his strong hands and driving his manhood deep inside her.

She hissed into his ear ,"Oh my God".

That set him on fire, driving him wild, as the tension build.

"Yes... yesss! Right there! Deeper...deeper...deeperrr!" She screamed as he pounded into her with a sudden explosion. They both came together in perfect union. They shivered and twitched in each other's arms, as their skin tingled. Geet collapsed beside him, gasping breathlessly. Maan enfolded her in his arms, and held her close to his body, his heart beating heavily. There was no need for words. He kissed her again lightly, before they fell asleep in each other's arms. He rose early the next day to see his sleeping beauty even though he spent all night dreaming about her. He intertwined his fingers with her, and told the heavens how lucky he was to have such an angel.

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon
Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai

END

Precap:

Maan:Geet Lets Make Love Again

Geet:Hmmm...Come On Maan

We Heard A Knock on the door and i dived under the duvet.

Mum:Maan? Can I Come In Darling?

Geet And Maan:Oh Shit!!

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Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I'm the 1st to like it ad hopefully the first to read it!!!!!!


The idea was just perfect!!! I still have to read the previous updates!! Bt Sara jaan!!! You're fantastic with the concept and all!!!

YAY!!! Amazing job!! and a dancing winnie the pooh b/c DD loves him loads!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
res LOVED IT >>>>>>> plz cont the 2 u hv thought to cont ...all ur ffs are marvolous... but my fav are those 2 😃

Edited by hopehot - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED IT >>>>>>> plz cont the 2 u hv thought to cont ...all ur ffs are marvolous... but my fav are those 2 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar ur update was cool and to answer ur question dont end so soon this plzzz
thanx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update ...the love making was mind blowing😳
continue soon

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