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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
i think shes pregnant yaayyy
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great part
update
why is geet still so scared to be with Maan?
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just read all the parts!
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nice part...loved the honeymoon suite...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank...God...and really nice to see you again with your lovely update... Superb update... The prcap is really interesting...try to update soon... Maan and Geet in a honeymoon suite...I hope the suite proves sweet for them...
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LOVED IT...WAITING FOR SOMETHING TO HAPPEN...:P...:P...:p...WAITING DESPERATELY

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part...is geet unconscious...????continue soon...i wonder wat will happen tonite ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 53
nice part...
Meera is such a big planner...
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This is all from Maan's point of view as Geet is Unconscious.

Part 54

I walked in the room again smiling but nervous.How should i start this? I had no idea.I looked up and saw Geet lying on the bed with her eyes closed.She was probably tired but i wasn't going to let her sleep just yet,Not tonight.I sat next to her and kissed her forehead to wake her up.No response.I called her name softly.No response.I was beginning to get worried.I lifted her wrist but it fell back down.I tried to find a pulse but i couldn't.Then,I brushed my hand against her cheek,She was burning!! She had a fever,Thats why she was feeling cold!!! And the heat had probably rushed to her brain and she'd fainted.I had to act quick.I rang the doctor by looking through the phonebook then looked at Geet.When she woke up,I would be so angry.Can she not even look after herself?But please let her be Ok.Nothing serious. There was a knock on the door and i ran to get it.

Doctor:Maan,You?

Maan:Yes,But why are you here Angad?Anyway,Talk later first hurry and Come in,Shes fainted.I think she has a cold.

Doctor:Then Why call me? Youre experienced yourself.

Maan:I...I wasn't sure.Please check her quickly.

Whilst he checked her temperature,Pulse,Blood pressure, i paced around the room impatiently.How much longer would he take!!!

Doctor:Maan,Stop pacing!!!! It wont help!!! Youre still as impatient as ever,You know? Ok,I've checked...

Maan:Everything?

Doctor:Yes ,Everything and she's fine,Nothing to worry about.Well,not Fine fine but Ok.She has a cold and a temperature like you thought.She needs rest and by tomorrow,She'll be fine.

Maan:Are you sure?

Doctor: Yes but who is this? Atleast tell me that.

Maan:Oh Sorry,This is Geet,My Wife.

Doctor:Your wife? Wow Yaar,You went ahead of all of us!!!! When did you get married?

Maan:Today

Doctor:Oh,So thats why youre both so dressed up.Congrats Yaar,You've lost your freedom. Ok,I'll leave but you need to make sure you get some warm clothes on her or she'll get more Ill,Ok? And come and meet me sometime when Bhabhi is better.Bye.

Maan:Thanks so much.

I watched him leave and then closed the door.I was relived to know she was fine.But we didn't bring any clothes with us so what would i put on her? The hotel might have provided some clothes,Let me look.I looked and found a red suitcase lying on the floor,It must have been already kept here for us.I opened it and i was bewildered as i rummaged through the items.It was all silky,revealing items(if they could be called that,it was lingerie),There was barely anything to it.I blushed faintly thinking of what they had thought Geet might need this for.This must have been Meera's idea.What should i do now? She needed some warm clothes.It was late and i couldn't leave her alone.I COULD give her my clothes to wear but... What would i wear? That would be thought about after,For now,i had to get her changed into something warm.I began undressing,Feeling very awkward.I lifted her up gently and put my jacket on her then,i lied her down in the duvet.I put my hands under and began to unwrap her sari skirt without looking,then i put the pants on her.It was a struggle but i did it,I couldn't betray her trust by looking.I moved away to get up but she clinged to me.Gently,i released myself and looked around the rom for a towel to wrap around myself.Draped on the chair was a robe,i grabbed it and wrapped it around me.I went and sat on the bed and took her head in my arms gently and stroked the hair from her face.She was still hot,Was there no way to reduce the heat coming from her?I had an idea and went to the bathroom and filled a bowl with cold water.I got a towel and brought it out with me.I dabbed the towel in the water and placed it on her forehead,Dabbing it repeatedly,Trying to reduce the heat.It was working!!!!.

MEANWHILE IN INDIA,ANNIE'S HOUSE.3 AM.

I slept peacefully,Unaware of what was about to happen.That my life was going to change forever.But in my mind,There was always a doubt,a constant nagging.I always thought about Maan and Geet.Why weren't they back yet? Hadnt it been 2 days yet? What if they were...together? No,No,Geet couldn't do that to me.After becoming sick of hearing Maan's phone going straight to answerphone,i stopped ringing him,he would come soon.But this wait was lasting forever,How much longer would it take? Someone was knocking on my door,But who? At this time? I opened my door and saw my mother's face,tear-stained and full of hurt.She spoke and what she said destroyed me.My world began crashing around me and i ran out of the room,silent tears pouring down my face,Drenching me in them...

BACK TO NEW YORK...

I stayed by her side,All night,caring for her,looking after her.When she got too hot,I cooled her down with cold water and when she was cold,I hugged her and gave her my warmth.I didn't move from her side and made sure i stayed awake(Thanks to the coffee, room service brought every half hour)so i could give her whatever she needed.She didn't speak but did toss in her sleep and say my name.She leant on my hand and pulled it closer towards her.Finally sunlight began pouring in through the curtains,Telling me that morning had come but still,She slept,Her breathing heavy.I Got up and stretched.Boy,Was i tired!! I phoned room service and ordered breakfast,so that when she woke,she could eat.Meanwhile,I brushed my teeth and freshened up.I came out of the bathroom and saw her eyes open,look at her self and then close.Finally,She looked at me puzzled and i grinned at her .

END

Precap:Back to india...

Promo:Maan,Geet in the Airplane.

Geet:I cant wait to land,I can meet your family.

Maan:Finally,I can call you my wife.

ANNIE ON THE AIRPORT GROUND CRYING: Maan,Land quickly!!

THEY HUG.

VOICEOVER:THE HAPPINESS MAAN AND GEET ARE SO HAPPY ABOUT IS IT ACTUALLY THEIRS? OR WILL THIS NEW RELATIONSHIP HAVE TO BREAK?

Back to normal,Updates regularly😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...!
bur precap bit tensed...continue soon!!!!!!!!

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