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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
loved both the parts...

awesome...

maan came n called her...n poor she got scared n froze there only...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Awesome... precap looks gr8.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
awesome ... superb ...

loved both d parts 17 n 18 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Nice update! Mr. Tall, Dark, and Handsome to the rescue! lol :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95

nice update

thnx 4 pm

continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Ah! guess you love to make us feel the mystrey 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
sonia i am no liking u
u have kert us in cliff hanger
welcome back
i was trying to send u pm but it was not working
how r u n hor was ur exame
how r siblings going
hope every thing is fine
part 17 n 18 were too good
if maan will not save her i will not read further
n u can co with ur intimate scens n 18 + also
without it story will not work
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
loved both the updates...
well geet did gud by informing adhi but yeh bulakkad ne maan ko nahin bataya...
oh the damsel in distress herself wants to help another life...
agar maan ne chillaya nahin hotha toh shayad woh kudh bahar aa jathi...
ab hamhare hero ko herogiri dhikane ka mauka mila hain...
i am sure he is going to blast her and she is going to blast him in return...
wud love to c more romantic moments bw maaneet
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: raj_202

sonia i am no liking u

u have kert us in cliff hanger
welcome back
i was trying to send u pm but it was not working
how r u n hor was ur exame
how r siblings going
hope every thing is fine
part 17 n 18 were too good
if maan will not save her i will not read further
n u can co with ur intimate scens n 18 + also
without it story will not work

haha.. yes i do like keeping u in the dark! 😆
my exams are going well thanku.. just one more to go n im free 😛
the siblings are as always annoying 😉 but im used o that 😆
hahaha as for maan saving her.. well well we'll have to see about that! 😉
hope ur fine too 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 19...

geet! suddenly hearing her name being called out, geet opened her eyes and her gaze fell onto the sight below her. She gasped in terror...

Birds Eye View Machu Picchu

Everything looked so tiny and scary. Geet couldnt move.

geet! yeh cya paagalpan hai?! hearing maans voice again just increased her panic and her heartbeat. She began breathing heavily, but she had lost control.

Then a hand reached her shoulder and shook her carefully and gently. geet, yaha au geet didnt respond. geet? tumne suna nhi? maine kha yaha ao geet shook her head lightly. Geet yeh cya paagalpan hai? its so dangerous. give me your hand. almost in a whisper geet replied, i cant move. maan saw her grip on the fence tighten. He saw she was frightened.

He bent over slightly towards her and carefully took the frightened little life out of her hand and places it onto the ground safely.

Then he quickly stepped over the fence and stood close to geet and held her by the arm. She was still staring down and the horrificly, amazingly, dangerous sght below her. geet, again she didnt respond, maan shook her slighty by the arm, still not letting go of her. geet, vahaa mat dheko, mujhe dheko geets eyes shut tightly, maan brought out his other strong easing hand andgently cupped on of her cheeks in his hand and said again, much more subtly and caringly, geet, aankhein kolo, mujhe dheko... cuch nhi hoga tumhe her eyes shut even tighter geet please... trust me. hearing this geets eyes slowly opened and she looked into maans very reassuring eyes.

Taking his hand away from her face, he brought it down to hold tightly - but gently- onto her waist. He held her close to his strong, manly body. Her breath automatically slowed down as she was in his arms.. feeling safe.

He guided her back over the fence, still not loosening his grip on her.

Geet tum teek ho? geet looked into his worried face and without any further thought, she stepped forward into a big hug. Maan took her into his arms and cuddled her. Her cheek rested on his chiseled chest as she whispered thank you it brought shivers down his body. and he let out a sigh.

Soon after, geet broke out of the hug and looked down onto the ground, slightly embarassed. Maan brought his arm onto her shoulder and brought her to sit on a nearby bench.

They sat in silence for a few mere seconds, when a little ouch escaped from geets lips. Maan looked at her straightaway and asked her what was wrong. Geet looked down to her wrist. Maan followed her gaze and saw that a piece of wood had pierced her wrist. Without a second thought, maan took her hand carefully and geets confused gaze followed him. As he kept in a deep eyelock with her beautiful hazel eyes, his head came down and his lips were inches away from her wrist. His eyes now closed and his lips carefully reached down, and the peice of wood was taken out. Geet flinched slighty at the pain and his perfect lips touching her skin.

hey guys!... hope yous like it.. also added sum pics.. hope it worked?
precap: maan and geet dinner... somewhere posh? or something regular?
pls leave any comments ... much appreciated!
chupchupsi xxx

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