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Posted: 14 years ago
Read both the updates❤️

U are a fab writer yaar👏


Juz loved them to the core!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting ... wen r u going to update ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
soory guys, i know ive been totally lazy not updating.. mums got me trying to do all the housework everyday..
here comes the next part..
sorry for any typos n plz tell me wat u think as im trying to speed up there relationship!
part 20

His eyes now closed and his lips carefully reached down, and the peice of wood was taken out. Geet flinched slighty at the pain and the thought of his perfect lips touching her skin.

After spitting out the splinter out of his mouth and onto the side, maan looked back at geet. He could see so much passion and thoughts going through her eyes.. she was thinking the exact same as him. ab caisa hai? geet became tearful at the thought of how caring this man was. She let out a painful smile and hugged a pleasantly shocked maan again. Her arms were enveloped around her broad shoulders and her cheek was nuzzled beneath his warm, cozy neck. After sniffling a little, geet began talking softly, sir aap citne ache ho.. mera itna keyaal rakhte ho, thank you soo much! maan smiled at her simple wording, then they slowly broke out of the hug and geet continued.. agar aap nhi hote vaha pe, main to gir ce ma.. maan interrupted her, not letting her finish, he placed his long, sexy finger onto her rosy lips and said, geet... shhh.. aise mat bolo i will always be here for you geet was mesimrised by his words, his voice. She sat there listening to his sweet words and looked at him lovingly. She didnt know what she was feeling, it was strange, a nice kinda strange.. she liked it.

After a few minutes maan took geet back to the hotel and told her to go and rest for a while, she obeyed. He and adhi sorted out everything else that was pending within 1.5 hours.

It was now already 7.30pm, maan told adhi to go and eat as they had all missed lunch and they were famished. The he thought to himself whether geet had eaten, so he went to her room. After knocking on the door and waiting, just as he was about to turn to leave, geet opened the door. He looked infront to see geet standing, now even beautifuller than before. Her hair was slightly messy and she was rubbing her eyes lightly.. she looked uber hot. He could tell she had been resting.

sir aap? umm. haan, main sochraha tha ... ce.. geet saw he was hesitant in speaking, ji sir boliye? tumne cuch kaaya? she nodded her head slightly to say no.. or aapne? he too shook his head. Geet smiled and said, sir mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai... umm.. aap mere saath kayenge? a huge grin was about to explode onto maans mouth, but he had to play his cool, so he kept it in and nodded.

neeche restaurant mei chale? geet became a little hesitant and replied, nai sir.. mera dhill nhi carra neeche jaane celiye kyu? voh sir, dheko mujhe.. mai mere night suit main hoon.. naale im too tired to go get dressed and sort my hair out geet made a cutsa baby face and maan smiled at her childish behaviour. he approved and asked, tho fir kahaa jaae hai? oopar nhi oder car sakte kaana? ofcourse. after agreeing they would eat in the hotel room, geet allowed maan in and told him to sit, after telling him what she'd like for her food, she went to go get fresh in the washroom.

Maan sat there looking at her room. Her jhumke were placed on her dressing table along with her assorted bangles. he smiled at the sight.

Some of her duppatte were visible too.. there was a green one trailing of her dressing chair.

He thought to himself that how a person could make something in one day seem like it was meant to be for her.. the whole room reflected her beauty, yet simplicity as for the way it was presented. He smiled in her thought.

The food had been ordered and as geet was stepping out of the washroom, there was a knock at the door. Their food had been delivered. Maan brought the food in whilst geet made room on the window couch for them to sit on as they ate.

After taking their plates, they seated themselves on either side of the couch. Maan sat quite formally whilst geet slipped her feet out of her shoes and sat crosslegged on the velvet surface.

Whilst eating, nothing much was being said, maan was concerntrating on his plate full of pasta whilst geet got messy with her curry and rice.

so geet... hmm? geet replied with a mouth full of rice. tum vaha lovers point pe car kya rhi thi? voh.. main goomne gyi thi nhi mera matlab tum vahaa fence dhe doosre side pe cya car rhi thi? us rabbit co closer view dhe rahi thi cya? hahaha maan laughed at his silly remark whilst geet made a scowling face. nahi ji. voh rabbit fence ce doosre side pe chalegya tha so maine socheya ce iss se phla ce voh gir jae main use pakkar leti hoon. lekin.. lekin.. lekin voh .. voh neeche dhekce ... acha.. to tumme heights se dar lagta hai? geet nodded innocently vah geet! tum bi na! apni jaan co khatre vich paace, tum voh rabbit co bachaarhi thi! wow maan laughed at the thought and geet smiled too.

After dinner, maan told geet to rest and told her he was there for her if she needed anything. She thanked him for everything and led him to the door. goodnight sir good night geet, take care. smiling, geet nodded and closed the door after him. There was a strange feeling occuring inside geet.. she couldnt stop smiling.

All night only maans images were visible in geets dreams. Sweet dreams.

plz leave comments... ill be updating soon, hopefully!
chupchupsi xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOOONNNGGG
time it has been, a month now I think... where have u been???
I was so sad that this FF is not being updated anymore.
Please phir se ghayab mat hojana or at least let us know next time when u plan to abandon us for so long...
Sweet update. am waiting for more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
maan is opening up to her and also he is teasing her...like it...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you for update awesome part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mina420

LOOONNNGGG
time it has been, a month now I think... where have u been???
I was so sad that this FF is not being updated anymore.
Please phir se ghayab mat hojana or at least let us know next time when u plan to abandon us for so long...
Sweet update. am waiting for more...

sooo sorry!
i know its been exactly one month today that i last updated 😆
ive been very busy lately which is why i couldnt update...
im working on the next update at the mo..
hopefully it will be posted soon (saturday the latest!)
and thanx for posting ur comments.. very much appreciated! 😛😊
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
how ur exam going
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update. Too cute.

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