FF - Deep Secrets ... a MaAnEeT story! - Page 9

loved the update

and pls write romantic stuff 😉😳

Originally posted by: Mina420

well I know this is mean but how abt Maan gets the news that someone fell from the lover's point cliff and the watchman tells him that he send Geet there... He misunderstands that she fell, when she is around him all along. He things he is imagining her but she is really there. He might be able to tell her things that he wouldn't normally say... just an idea

part 18...

Originally posted by: chupchupsi

part 18...

Meanwhile... back in the hotel, maan had called adhi to his room...

ji sir? adhi abhi main bahar jaata hoo, im going to pick up some documents and etc. for the deal ji sir, ok agar coi problem hogi call me. ji sir. maan too left. adhi thought to himself "haaa ab to araam se sopaunga, geet bi gayi or maan sir bi!.. oh! main to maan sir co bataana bhoolgya ce geet vi bahar gyi hai! .. oh coi baat nhi, wat maan sir doesnt know wont hurt him! heehee"

After about 45 minutes, maan had finished his paper work and was about to head off back to the hotel, when he thought that the others should just meet him in a nearby restaurant. He called adhi haan adhi, tum or geet 1/2 hour vich red hut restaurant vich au, hum yahaa lunch car lenge.. or file lecar ao but.bbb..but ssir cya hai adhi?! sir geet yahaa nhi hai.. what do you mean? cahaa hai voh?! sssir.. voh bahar gyi,,.. ghoomne kya?! caha gyi hai voh?? pppata nhi.. ssir what? main usse phone cardeta hoon.. meanwhile you go ask if the reception know where she is! before adhi could reply maan had aggressivly cut the call.. he was very unhappy and angry.. "save yourself geeet" ahi thought to himself...

Maan tried calling geet, but it seemed to be switched off.. maans gussa was getting worse. Suddenly adhi called. bolo voh sir maine poocha, voh doorman cehra tha ce geet loves point pe gyi hai before he could once agin complete his sentence maan cut the call and aggressively drove to lovers point.

Geet had now walked slowly to the highest point and was admiring the beauty of nature. The sky too had little splashes of pink .. love thought geet.. "aah so sweet" suddenly she spotted the most cutest rabbit hopping its way on te grass "aaaww" thought geet, she smiled at the adorable creature haye! citna piyara hai! she stood there watching it. Her gaze was interrupted by the sweet singing and chirping of the robins, she smiled at them too. A few minutes easily passed by.

She turned her glowing face back to the snow white rabbit. aare! voh cahaa gya? her eyes were searching immensly for the rabbit. Gradually she spotted it by other people passing by pointing at the rabbit saying, arre.. voh dheko bechara rabbit, marjayega.. dheko voh girne vaala hai geet looked towards the rabbit, they were right! it had somehow gone passed the wooden fencing and a few more steps forward would make it fall an awfully dreadful death as the height was so incredibly high.

Arre! coi usse bachao! marjaega! geet shouted at the passing by people, but none were stepping forward. She bravely stepped towards the rabbit, getting closer to the fence. She forced herself to not look down at the breath-takingly dangerous view. Geet carefully climbed and stepped over the fence, totally focused on the rabbit.

She placed her feet one by one onto the uneven ground. She tried not to focus on the gasps of the people watching her, probably thinking she was crazy. Slowly bending down she reached out for the scared little creature and carefully held it with one hand and the other held the fence.

geet! suddenly hearing her name being called out, geet opened her eyes and her gaze fell onto the sight below her. She gasped in terror...

Everything looked so tiny and scary. Geet couldnt move.

hey guys.. bit of a cliff hanger going on...

next: will geet fall, slip or will a hot, dark, handsome hero save the damsel in distress? :P

plz comment xxx

Ok so far so good but better he DOESN'T save her. Yaar har baar maan geet ko baccha leta hain. Make it interesting by making Geet fall down. Then you have more things you can write about ratehr than when he saves her.
Keep going and PM me when u update next. ...plz update soon.

Loved the updates till now dear..

Waitin fr more😉

loved it

love the part..hope maan will save her..

awesome great update ...love to read more .You can write great passionate scenes love to read

awesome ... superb thnx 4 d pm ...

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