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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Ankita! I just caught up with your FF. And i want to ask you one thing! why were you hiding this talent of yours for so long? You write like a pro!
About your story.. its touching.. my heart twists reading their plight. And especially Armaan's.. coz he's walking a tight rope.. he cant be sympathetic, he cant be too protective, but he has to take care of her all the same.. and take in all her tantrums.. but i dont blame Riddhima either.. it is natural for her to feel like that.. now i wonder how Armaan is going to motivate her and instill that will in her which will probably make her ok.. I know it'll will be quite a task.. and it'll make an awesome read i am sure..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu -- when is the next update???
Desperate!!!! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zephyrr

Hey Ankita! I just caught up with your FF. And i want to ask you one thing! why were you hiding this talent of yours for so long? You write like a pro!

About your story.. its touching.. my heart twists reading their plight. And especially Armaan's.. coz he's walking a tight rope.. he cant be sympathetic, he cant be too protective, but he has to take care of her all the same.. and take in all her tantrums.. but i dont blame Riddhima either.. it is natural for her to feel like that.. now i wonder how Armaan is going to motivate her and instill that will in her which will probably make her ok.. I know it'll will be quite a task.. and it'll make an awesome read i am sure..


Hey Rachna 😃
Thanks a ton for your comment ! You write so well and this coming from you it means a lot !
And yeah I never really got the inspiration and plus ,exams just didnt allow me too ,but now I have some time at hand so am writing !!
My ff is obviously going to show how they they are the reason of each others existence and thus how they come out stronger and together through each ordeal .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaania13

Ankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu -- when is the next update???
Desperate!!!! 🤗


Kaviii dii 😃
Havent got to write much :(
Will update tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ankita.M


Hey Rachna 😃
Thanks a ton for your comment ! You write so well and this coming from you it means a lot !
And yeah I never really got the inspiration and plus ,exams just didnt allow me too ,but now I have some time at hand so am writing !!
My ff is obviously going to show how they they are the reason of each others existence and thus how they come out stronger and together through each ordeal .



Honestly, this FF is one of the most Intense FFs I have ever read!!
Thats what makes it even more special, apart from the fact that its my Anku who is writing it!!

Just wanted to say, I love what you plan on portraying -- highlighted in red above in your comment!
Dont want them to go thru any more separation/misunderstandings etc, arising out of Ridz insecurities etc, even tho I fully empathize with what she is going thru!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited on pg 7! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey amazing part....I really love your writing...the way you express their feelings is very well written....I could actually imagine AR/Kajen doing those scenes....really love this different concept...seeing how Armaan is taking care of her and Riddhima feeling insecure because of her physical weakness...really loved this part...it was really good
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nandini 😳 I saw ur like I want a comment tooooo 😒
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Posted: 14 years ago
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EDITED :
Ankuuuuuuu -🤗
AH! What do I say now? I mean I'm so SPEECHLESS :|
I never expected you to come out with such finesse in the second part itself!
This part has completely blowed me away with its lucidity.
And you know when you read this, you can actually feel as if all this is happening right infront of your eyes.
I wouldnt call this part 'sad and depressing' because its not, rather its realistic.
The situations Armaan-Riddhima are facing is difficult, its a testing time for them now and all that this part states is bound happen.Its something you cannot avoid given the circumstances.
I feel both for Armaan-Riddhima here because both are in extremely difficult positions that challenges one's emotional, physical and mental stability.
There's Armaan in a very delicate situation, where he has to make sure he doesnt make Riddhima feel as if she's a burden on him, and do everything at the right time and in right doses.He cant under-do or over-do it.
And there's Riddhima, who's battling with her ownself each minute, each moment.
She knows Armaan loves her to no-extent and will do anything for them to be together and happy, but she cant let him overlook his own needs and happiness.
The part very well describes Armaan-Riddhima's relationship.
It depicts how they both have unconditional love for each other but yet how circumstances sometimes rule over and you have no choice but to bow at them.
But that's what Armaan-Riddhima are - Their love for each other always triumphs over all odds.Its just a matter of time, that's it.
So, anything more?
YES! - ILY Anku!
And all the best for the remaining parts :)
P.S : That VM suits your part so well!
P.P.S : I hope Nandini comments here.But at the same time I wish she doesnt see me here! LOL! Does that make sense? Because I still have pending comments on her FF.I hope I'll be spared!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2 MADE ME CRYYY so much ANKU! :( :| It was so well written and so emotional... Armaan's so perfect, SO ARMAAN <3 I love him:( and I feel so bad for Riddhima :( :( i can totally understand her frustration and how she doesn't want to feel like a burden on Armaan...arghh! The moment she fell in the kitchen got me soo upset :'(

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