Core of My Existence(AR Story)Nextthreadlink150 - Page 8

Originally posted by: KaJenYaianSanju

wowwwwwwwwwwww ankuuuu...you are such an amazing writer..the way you have explained Armaan as well as Riddhima's feelings is so heart-touching...Armaan....aaahhhh what shall I say about him? his love for Riddhima, his basket is just untouchable....I can understand Riddhima...she loves Armaan so much that she would think about Armaan at first and that's exactly what she has been doing...thinking about him and hating her fate for not giving Armaan the happiness he deserves together with her...AR and their love are beautiful and you have kept their beauty intact through your amazing story and writing....I completely understand that the parts are gonna be sad....they are beautifully sad though and I loved how you added some funny comments from Armaan like the praise and insult line...lo.l...that is so typical of Armaan..

in short, I completely and absolutely loved the update...Please update asap and thank you so much for the PM.

Originally posted by: ssh57

hi ankita,
good going. they are facing hard times and its very sad but when they overcome it, it will be so much more joyful.love, shardha

Res! Lambaaaaa comment dena hai!! ;)

awesome update
gr8 part
liked it
continue soon
add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: Dmg8594

Res! Lambaaaaa comment dena hai!! ;)

*Edited*

Hey Ankita!

Firstly, I'm glad you began an FF! Because I was running out of things to read firstly, and second, I haven't come across such an amazing story in a very long time! 😕

The concept is really nice, and honestly, I've been dying for someone to write an FF where Riddhima is severely injured and not Armaan, and there's no existence of idiots like Yuvi and Sid and all (no offence to people who like DMG S02!)

Anyway, the story seems interesting, and I can visualize AR really well through your words! I want to see how AR battle this out and reach stability in their lives in their usual ways...😉

I just didn't understand one thing...The past stuff...Where Armaan had the memory loss...Was it because of that car accident he had had long time ago, or was it because of him hitting the glass table in the shootout? I just didn't quiet understand that part about the past, if you could solve this doubt for me! 😊

And needless to say, please PM me when you update next!

Keep it up! 👍🏼

Wow, the plot is very good, different and unique and so is your writing.
The way you described their burdened emotions is very serene.
The insecurities of Riddhima due to her physical weakness and Armaan's need to make her understand his love for her... everything is expressed very soothingly.

Nice one.
pm me as well, when you update it.

ps: i was wondering about the past part as Shrutika, but got it clarified through ur comment above.

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Hey Shru <3

Am glad you read and delighted to see your comment !!

When Armaan gained consciousness after the accident (which is the 21st september) incident,he had his memory back ,and since he was unwell and in a daze then he didnt realise what had happened from the time he left for Kasauli till the attack it was like two different phases ,so he remembered or could connect the two only after he was told by his friends.

My story just picked from the day DMG 1 ended so he lost his memory due to the car accident like how it was in DMG 😃

And your right ,I dont want to really remember the existance of DMG 2 myself except ofcourse the phase when they got together