Core of My Existence(AR Story)Nextthreadlink150 - Page 7

Originally posted by: siddhika_ksg

Ankuuuuuuuuuuuu I Love u for updating so quick :D

The part was really really gud :D Its so Like Armmaan-Riddhima...Armaan being all Protective and caring about riddhima, Loving her so unconditionally and being so so so patient with riddhima....and riddhima being so like riddhima, thinkin bout armaan's future and his life abover hers....the bottled up frustation that u showed riddhima has seems so real....U can imagine her state of mind being all helpless and guilty for ruining the life of the person she loves the most....The frustation that comes out in the form of anger is so very well justified as is the fact that she feels really insecure and also hw any act of pur love on part of Armaan, she feels that he is behaving with her as if she's a baby...I love hw u've potrayed everything so beautifully and the fact that it seems so so so REAL is really commendable.

Originally posted by: -kashvi-

AHA,I LOVE YOUUUUU *reserved*

EDITTTTTTTTTT..

Vokay,I don't really know what to say ...!!Mereko accha likhnaa nai aata,But I shall tryyyy😳

Ankitaaaaaaaaaa....YOU ARE AWESOME reyyy!!Like i said in my previous comment,The first update of yours,which um really didn't look like was actually ur FIRST time,was SO GOOD...and u wud just get better and better from there,and U DID AND HOW?Im speechless lol seriously,My dream has comeee trueeeeeee...!!I couldn't have asked for anything better than this and Im really not exaggerating when i say this!

Ah,Armaan Malik,I LOVEEEE HIM 😳MARRRRY MEEEE ROFLLL!!Hes so perfect man,and i knew you would do your best in portraying that perfectt aspect of him in this ff,cos i know ur one of the BIGGEST Armaan fans..and You would never disappoint!Ahhhh..Seriously his love for Riddhima is just unbelievable..!!He knows shes upset,she has given up,but he hasn't..he has faith in his love..his life and HE KNOWS they will pass this phase together...Just the two of them..they don't need anything else!Oh,and I loove LOVE how u mentioned this bit,"

he had fallen for her heart and not her physical appearance ,her physical imparity didn't make her a different person and didnt change his love for her "

Armaan was always always LIKE THAT,He fell in love with HER,not with her looks..and ur ff is just a proof of that man!You just made me fall in love with him againnnn,the way he handled her.he knew her well!He knew she didn't need sympathy or his words wouldn't really soothe her..so he just stood by her.hugged her just to let her know that hes always gonna be there for her..!AWWWWW man,I felt so bad for him when riddhima was rude to him,But i can't obviously blame her..shes going through a rough phase and anyone would behave that way..!And the BEST part is that Armaan realises that..and thats why hes so patient with her..he knows exactly what calms her down,even though none of his ways really helped her today.I really want him to tell her how he feels about her..!How he doesen't care about anything or anyone else except her,and that she isn't a burden on him..Like uv rightly stated..."shes a part of him..how can his own life be a burden on him" Awwwwww ❤️

And im gonna directly jump to the end now,My FAVOURITE part of this update,Armaan is sucha sweetheart man..and I LOVEEE how u described his actions and feelings when he sees her ..fast asleeep..So so REAL..i could completely visualize it man!The way he kisses her on her forehead and lays down beside her..With that hope in his heart that everything would become okay soooon,and how he wants to tell her that hes always gonna be around,come what may!

I LOVE YOUUU Ankuuu,I am SO SO GLAD you believed in yourself and finally started writing,and trust me every update of urs is a TREAT for me,and my frend Meghz haha,You don't know HOW desperately we had been waiting for this update of yours.Its something we always wished to see in dmg,and you are actually fulfilling our wishes by putting it in words..so nicely!

Muahhhh,and now...im definitely looking forward to the next update..I hope its soooooooon soooon,I know you won't disappoint🤗

Originally posted by: Preeti_285

I didnt get to comment last night coz I only saw it from phonee and my phone's a pain to log into and post on I-F from LOLL but YAYYYYYY ANKUUUUUU!!!!!!!!! Im so,so, so happy you've started to write. You're extremely talented and that showed in the first update itself. Loved how and what you wrote! Super sentiii and bought tears to my eyes :( but a bazillion times better (even a bazillion is a frikkin understatement) to what the creatives came up with! I can see this strengthening AR's relationship, unlike the 'creatives' story post shoot out lol. Love how you created suspense in that first update. Really looking forward to what happens next, gonna read next update toniiiight tehe <3

Originally posted by: armaania13

Anku - jaan --- 🤗❤️🤗
Love you girl!!!

Where were you hiding this aspect of yourself for so long???? I didnt even know you wrote, till you told me a couple of days ago!!!
And What a Start to this FF!!!! Honestly, I am Speechless!!!! I read and re-read this part about 4-5 times, and I still dont know how to put in words, what I feel about your writing!
I read the comments posted by the others, and I concur wholeheartedly with what each one has written!!

Love the fact that the story takes off from where our DMG ended for us on 21st Sept 2009!!
The love that you have portrayed between AR is just the kinds that you read about in stories and what we wanted to see in DMG, and more often, what you really want in your own life!! Especially Armaan!

Loved the intensity in their emotions!!! You brought that out beautifully! And this is just the first part!
Leaves us desperate for more!!!

Theres so much I want to say, but have already conveyed that to you on FB!!

I love you like my own little sis, and now I am now a bigger fan of your writing and so if that is inspiration enough --- reading comments from all your friends and readers, DONT STOP WRITING!!!


Love you jaan!!!
Kavi

Originally posted by: crazyforkaran

wow! ankita that was actually mindblowing!!

it was sad.. but very very well written i must say!!

i am guessing this is your first time in writing.. and this is super for the first time!!

just awesome!!

armaan is so lovable!

<333

i just cant stop loving him..

he is sooo.. perfect.

and riddhima's feeling are normal, anyone would feel and react like her!

the part was totally needed. i agree and it was good!

thanks for the pm..

hoping for a soon update just like this one...

love,

prarthana.

Originally posted by: Meghzz

This was so heartwrenching! you're an amazing writer, i so wish you were among the dmg creatives we would never had that stupid dmg2!

but yeah this was a beautifully written part, its heartbreaking to see them like this , at the same time, im amazed at how perfect armaan can be, im sure he will make her believe to not lose hope, and im sure theyll make it :) pleaseeeeeeee update the next part sooooooooon! xo

p.s.and a special mention to my kashveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, who had sense enough to encourage you to write :D takes me back to that day when i had to plead her to read ffs haha

Originally posted by: Samiyah258

Well the most important thing first, even though you already know this! I am VERY happy that you've started writing a FF. I've said it a billion times but I really really mean it!

I loved this part it was soo cute <3 But the vm you posted is soo sad and emotional omgosh I had tears in my eyes watching the vm! Even though this part was depressing..but I guess this was needed so I won't say anything about it.

I like your FF a lot because it's very creative and different (in a good way! VERY GOOD WAY) lol and I can't even tell you how happy I am that you've started writing because like I said earlier I lovee the way you write'and the way you express everything in your FF it's just amazing.

You know I don't even have words to describe Armaan Malik. He is the sweetest and soo soo considerate. I love how he takes care of Riddhima, and I love the little moments they share with eachother. I'm extremely glad that they're finally together <3. I love how he knows every little detail about her...like what she's feeling at the moment, or how she's going to react or what she's going to do next! I love and admire the strong relationship and bond they share with eachother.

I'm looking forward to reading the next part! Update soonnnnnn ankuu but I know you will :)

Originally posted by: lil_mizz_shawty

Yaaayy Anku! (Is it alright If I call you that? 😳 Ankita is just too formal! 😆) Another update!

Seems like a long part, will read it asap and comment!! 😳

Originally posted by: _minaz_

OMG Anku! I'm so Glad that you have started writing! Because you are an AMAZING writer! How can you say that you dont write well....PSSSHHT...! Silly.... Me know like =)

Thanks for the PM! =D

Now...Coming to the FF...i just read the first 2 chapters....This FF is very different and has alot of emotions attached to it. I love how you have described the situation...how you have portrayed AR feelings...it deffinitely gets you grasped into the story. I love your style of writing. You are immensely talented Anku - thought i should tell you LOL.

Waiting for the Next Udate !

Dont forget to PM me ! <3 =)

Originally posted by: NomaLuvsKSG

AHHHH ANKUUUU! You just made me soo emotional man! indnvnkidfvnkcxkjn i am speechless :|

OMG OMG! IDK what to sayy LOL.....chapter 2 was just so damn good man! i loved how you portray AR's feelings! i can actually picture KaJen in my head while reading this part! like how she's in the room crying and how he's cheering her up! OMGG! and then when she yelled at Armaan to get out! OMGGGG! i was like AWWWW! and then when Armaan was thinking about the past and when he had tears! i was getting a little teary too pssht :| LOL...this was a nice part! oh and thanks for the PM hunn! i cant wait for chapter 3!!! ahhh! ILY! <333