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Pooja

@ObodroKargosh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

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I still have to edit the 1st one...tcchh the match excitement is still there and I haven't done anything but watch highlights 😆
I'll edit that and this soon 😳

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okay read part 2

Komal - awesome VM 👏
brought back so many memories :D
and some memories that i don't want :(

I love how you showed Armaan and Ridz feelings towards this. How Armaan has always fought for his basket was seen. Ridz going through this :( I really wish she starts believing that she'll be okay. and I love what you wrote about will power. Its true, if a person has the will power to become alright, they will. Ridz needs to believe in herself and then there is nothing that will stop her from recovering.

Armaan <33 always so caring. uff that Shanky 😡 always ready to blame Armaan for everything!!!

the hospital scene was really touching...

this was really well written <33

Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 14 years ago

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crazyforkaran

@crazyforkaran

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

wow! ankita that was actually mindblowing!!

it was sad.. but very very well written i must say!!

i am guessing this is your first time in writing.. and this is super for the first time!!

just awesome!!

armaan is so lovable!

<333

i just cant stop loving him..

he is sooo.. perfect.

and riddhima's feeling are normal, anyone would feel and react like her!

the part was totally needed. i agree and it was good!

thanks for the pm..

hoping for a soon update just like this one...

love,

prarthana.

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Meghna

@Meghzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

This was so heartwrenching! you're an amazing writer, i so wish you were among the dmg creatives we would never had that stupid dmg2!

but yeah this was a beautifully written part, its heartbreaking to see them like this , at the same time, im amazed at how perfect armaan can be, im sure he will make her believe to not lose hope, and im sure theyll make it :) pleaseeeeeeee update the next part sooooooooon! xo

p.s.and a special mention to my kashveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, who had sense enough to encourage you to write :D takes me back to that day when i had to plead her to read ffs haha

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samiyah

@Samiyah258

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Well the most important thing first, even though you already know this! I am VERY happy that you've started writing a FF. I've said it a billion times but I really really mean it!

I loved this part it was soo cute <3 But the vm you posted is soo sad and emotional omgosh I had tears in my eyes watching the vm! Even though this part was depressing..but I guess this was needed so I won't say anything about it.

I like your FF a lot because it's very creative and different (in a good way! VERY GOOD WAY) lol and I can't even tell you how happy I am that you've started writing because like I said earlier I lovee the way you write…and the way you express everything in your FF it's just amazing.

You know I don't even have words to describe Armaan Malik. He is the sweetest and soo soo considerate. I love how he takes care of Riddhima, and I love the little moments they share with eachother. I'm extremely glad that they're finally together <3. I love how he knows every little detail about her...like what she's feeling at the moment, or how she's going to react or what she's going to do next! I love and admire the strong relationship and bond they share with eachother.

I'm looking forward to reading the next part! Update soonnnnnn ankuu but I know you will :)

Edited by Samiyah258 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Yaaayy Anku! (Is it alright If I call you that? 😳 Ankita is just too formal! 😆) Another update!

Seems like a long part, will read it asap and comment!! 😳

*Edited*

Part 1
OMG! The beginning of the FF is absolutely FLAWLESS!! Love your written expression and your use of language! I can tell I'm gonna be hooked onto this one!
Coming to the content of the part, I know its quite sad but tbh I'd love it if DMG went this way rather than introducing a third angle!

No doubt Armaan would support her in any condition that he is, making me love him even more! Its just so like Armaan to love her unconditionally no matter what the circumstances are and your FF brings that right out!

I love how he wakes her up and then teases her, typical AR (Which I love!)

Its interesting how you've maintained everything as normal until the end revealing her incapacity! I feel really bad for Riddhima and hope they overcome this ASAP!

Part 2
OMG! That VM is just heart-wrenching! Brings back so many bad memories! I'm so glad that AR finally got reunited! It just gave that sense of closure which was missing for ages! That doesn't mean I don't want AR again! Would love to see them all over again! Fingers crossed DMG comes back!
Now I have to go cheer myself up watching their reunion!

Anyways to the part, gotta say another awesome part filled with emotional sentiments!

My heart breaks reading Riddhima's condition (which shows you've done an awesome job cuz I'm not an emotional person AT ALL! Lol) I'm not gonna say I understand how she feels cuz I don't but it seriously is gutting to see her in this condition! Its mutual for her to feel that she's being a burden on Armaan by being dependent on him, hopefully she gets well soon!

Again your description of Armaan's selfless love makes me love him all the more! I don't feel sorry for him cuz that would just be undermining his pure love that you have portrayed!

Yes, this part was indeed shocking but I'm sure there will be happy moments as well!! Forward your story at your own pace and I'm sure we'll be loving it even more!

*I guess the comment has become long na?? Lol, hope you enjoy reading it though it might not be interesting! Lol 😆

Edited by lil_mizz_shawty - 14 years ago

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DulceTentacion.

@DulceTentacion.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

OMG Anku! I'm so Glad that you have started writing! Because you are an AMAZING writer! How can you say that you dont write well....PSSSHHT...! Silly.... Me know like =)

Thanks for the PM! =D

Now...Coming to the FF...i just read the first 2 chapters....This FF is very different and has alot of emotions attached to it. I love how you have described the situation...how you have portrayed AR feelings...it deffinitely gets you grasped into the story. I love your style of writing. You are immensely talented Anku - thought i should tell you LOL.

Waiting for the Next Udate !

Dont forget to PM me ! <3 =)

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Noma

@Nomaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

AHHHH ANKUUUU! You just made me soo emotional man! indnvnkidfvnkcxkjn i am speechless :|

OMG OMG! IDK what to sayy LOL.....chapter 2 was just so damn good man! i loved how you portray AR's feelings! i can actually picture KaJen in my head while reading this part! like how she's in the room crying and how he's cheering her up! OMGG! and then when she yelled at Armaan to get out! OMGGGG! i was like AWWWW! and then when Armaan was thinking about the past and when he had tears! i was getting a little teary too pssht :| LOL...this was a nice part! oh and thanks for the PM hunn! i cant wait for chapter 3!!! ahhh! ILY! <333

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sanju

@Sanju_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

wowwwwwwwwwwww ankuuuu...you are such an amazing writer..the way you have explained Armaan as well as Riddhima's feelings is so heart-touching...Armaan....aaahhhh what shall I say about him? his love for Riddhima, his basket is just untouchable....I can understand Riddhima...she loves Armaan so much that she would think about Armaan at first and that's exactly what she has been doing...thinking about him and hating her fate for not giving Armaan the happiness he deserves together with her...AR and their love are beautiful and you have kept their beauty intact through your amazing story and writing....I completely understand that the parts are gonna be sad....they are beautifully sad though and I loved how you added some funny comments from Armaan like the praise and insult line...lo.l...that is so typical of Armaan..

in short, I completely and absolutely loved the update...Please update asap and thank you so much for the PM.

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ssh57

@ssh57

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

hi ankita,
good going. they are facing hard times and its very sad but when they overcome it, it will be so much more joyful.love, shardha

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siddhika

@siddhika_ksg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Meghzz
This was so heartwrenching! you're an amazing writer, i so wish you were among the dmg creatives we would never had that stupid dmg2!
but yeah this was a beautifully written part, its heartbreaking to see them like this , at the same time, im amazed at how perfect armaan can be, im sure he will make her believe to not lose hope, and im sure theyll make it :) pleaseeeeeeee update the next part sooooooooon! xo

p.s.and a special mention to my kashveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, who had sense enough to encourage you to write :D takes me back to that day when i had to plead her to read ffs haha

I completely agree with ^^ kaaaaaaaaaassssshhhh u were in the creative team and got us this story instead if a huge blunder > DMG season 2 🤢