MERI SANGINI - FF part 25 updated on 22nd APR

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mangona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#211

oh shit that maan but his pain was 2 much and iam not going 2 throw anything at u seriously it was gud but plz change the way geet looked maan and dev it soo bad

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febinyusuff

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Posted: 14 years ago

#212

loved the update..

but please .. please don't picture maan as a devil

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puth

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Posted: 14 years ago

#213

just caught up with this FF........it's brilliant dear.....
omg maan raped geet😡...i guess now geet will marry maan to take revenge and then fall in love with him............

brilliant FF dear.....please add me to your pm list......

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ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#214

ohmy.... m stunned. im...

I do have faith in you but damn.... this was... :(.. her Maanji ra... ;(

(I did not have the guts to read the last few paras after he braked the car) ;((

omg .. i just did....that was one horrific , blood curdling narration... the way she sensed something awry... got scared yet tried to maintain a normal thread of conversation... the way he made a desperate proposal , her disgust and then how things escalated from there--- by the time I had read 3 sentences I was gagging... the feeling so nauseating and scary..... brilliantly written... simply brilliant.

Edited by ninand - 14 years ago

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MsMovielover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#215

OMG i didnt expect this to happen...
waiting to see their reactions

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anaum91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#216

poor geet...Waiting fo d aftermath...cont soon

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jasraj123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#217

very well written about maan's pain. waiting for nxt update how geet will react. please don't make him rapist eventhough i never expect this from maan. but he did it.

nice work👏👏 please add me to pm list.

Edited by jasraj123 - 14 years ago

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---nishu---

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Posted: 14 years ago

#218

hey what if u move her out of car and after that may fear from strom and thunder she catch him than love making

situation out to be different in that way

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sakadafi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#219

Eagerly waiting for what comes next.......everyone's reaction.....continue soon....

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Posted: 14 years ago

#220

great update maan thinking of geet & geet thinking of dev the story turning interesting but scared of the precap not so good pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm thank yuuuuuuuuuuu sooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhh