MERI SANGINI - FF part 25 updated on 22nd APR

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

"what's Maanji doing?..Oh,maybe something is wrong with the car..........Babaji, na jaane kyun dil khabra raha hai......lagta hai kuch galat hone wala hai.........Maanji aur meri raksha karna.. please..." ,she prayed feeling restless.... Little did she know..........

love this lines like she new something bad coming to her cant wait to know aftermath what i'll MSK do then love it tanya dont cry i still have faith in yu the story turning interesting i'll wait how it unfold later wonder what i'll happen to dev how his family react cant wait to know all this fabulous update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn thanks pm thank yuuuuuuuuuuuuu sooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

wow great part

did not expect maan to do that

aftermath will not be good

maan may have just lost her forever

con't soon!

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kkaavvyyaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

now,,that was some bold move he has made,,,,,,,,,,hp they get married soonnnnnnn

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Tanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
hey what if u move her out of car and after that may fear from strom and thunder she catch him than love making
situation out to be different in that way

Thanks for the suggestion dear, but don't you think that's way too cliched?? In my story,Maan has to work real hard,I mean "Real Hard"..to win over his Mishti! Please keep reading..I promise not to disappoint you😊

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ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
hey what if u move her out of car and after that may fear from strom and thunder she catch him than love making
situation out to be different in that way

no offence... but that was cold blooded rape by Maan.... please don't treat it soo frivolously... I don't have words for the crime he committed...😒

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BluntlySpeaking

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

no matter how much pain he was in, he had no right to rape this innocent girl who has unconditionally loved him and looked upto him thru out her life...this was barbarious....worse than a stranger raping her...here the man she idolises took away her innocence...completely unforgivable

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Tanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: maanujaanu
hey not fair u portrayed maan as a bad guy
how can he think soo low

felt srry for Geet

I've not portrayed Maan as a bad guy..He's basically a good guy at heart. See, every person, including you and me,have different shades in our characters. Circumstances bring out these shades in us. He has always been good...a good son, a role model for the kids,a loving husband and a doting father........ Do you think,he'd ever harm his Mishti, if he was in his right sense? I'm not glorifying rape here,just because Maan is the wrong doer..Let me blame the circumstances

1: He was drunk

2: He's no God,just a normal hot blooded young man with normal desires and urges.

3: No physical intimacy for nearly 5 years.

4: Being alone with the woman ,he has been desiring for quite some time.

5: His insecurities..fear of losing her forever since he believes her to be his only hope to live a life full of love and happiness.

Guess,all these factors together forced him to cross his boundaries.....Let's see how every body reacts to this abominable act...Keep reading😊

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Tanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: indepgal
no matter how much pain he was in, he had no right to rape this innocent girl who has unconditionally loved him and looked upto him thru out her life...this was barbarious....worse than a stranger raping her...here the man she idolises took away her innocence...completely unforgivable

You're absolutely right...Let's see what's in store for him...Thanks for your comments😊

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Tanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: ninand
ohmy.... m stunned. im...

I do have faith in you but damn.... this was... :(.. her Maanji ra... ;(

(I did not have the guts to read the last few paras after he braked the car) ;((

omg .. i just did....that was one horrific , blood curdling narration... the way she sensed something awry... got scared yet tried to maintain a normal thread of conversation... the way he made a desperate proposal , her disgust and then how things escalated from there--- by the time I had read 3 sentences I was gagging... the feeling so nauseating and scary..... brilliantly written... simply brilliant.

Thank you so much for the lovely comments 😊 You've written exactly the emotions I felt while conceiving that scene in my mind.

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#230

i wont count that as a rape... its clearly the timing... everything just clashed. lovely update. & lovely twist. i am egarly waiting for the next one & geets reaction. it won't be easy. could clearly see that.

my prediction- geet will break her marriage & won't say a single word to the family.

lovely update.

when are u updating next?

xxx

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