Ripped Apart ~3~ (Maaneet) part 25 updated - 13apr - Page 52

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Okay.....thus they met......and the world stood still....devoid of all emotions......all the love that they once shared.....

Each in their own world,their own pain n turmoil.....one trying to replace the pain with anger while the other trying to avoid it altogether and run away from the vicinity.....how fate play games with love.....we can see it here....he thinks she is here for some ulterior motive...he even went down the memory lane and accused her of deceit for her past ministrations too...all the times they had spent together in the past,he's trying to find some evil meaning to them also in order to lessen his pain further,to remove the burden of guilt from his shoulders....so much blind he became in his rage n pain that he is unable to see he is tainting the pure love they once shared,the divine relationship they once cherished so lovingly..... the man is destroying his love with his own hands now......

And she lost in the thoughts of her tortured past,which is the cause of her painful present,couldn't find the courage to face him n tell him the truth of what actually happened and blamed it on him for not coming after her to know the truth.....for believing everything she herself made him see n believe....she immersed herself in her past moments where she spent the last few happy times with him,teasing him,dreaming about him,cherishing him and then after that fateful call,on her way to meet her dying parents which came as a shock of her life.....seeing her father die before her very eyes and knowing her mother left her even before that......the memories still bringing tears to her eyes....tears comined with her helplessness over the current situation that consists him......

where he took comfort in his work out she took comfort in her past and her Maasi's love so that they can prepare themselves to face each other yet again,not as soul mates but as poles apart...!!!

And he started the game in his style,throwing her a big challenge and catching her off guard but she is also his protege once,his love,his pride still....how can she back off.....she took it up and completed it with her head held high....she will let him do whatever he wants but she can't let him trample on her self-respect due to his arrogance....he know she can handle his challenge....the girl who is so capable of handling Maan Singh Khurana can handle anything else that comes in her way,so what's a mere presentation is??yet he wanted to warn her of the rock filled path ahead that he laid out for her in the wake of his misthoughts about her ulterior motives of joining his company yet again.....she tried to tell him the truth,he snubbed her efforts yet again stating all that happened between them in the past is a mistake.....stating he regrets her in the first place.....and thus effectively ending her world and by that her strength.....now from where she'll bring the strength to face her life??to face this world??to again face him??In order to cover up his own weakness regarding her he robbed her of all her strength today.....leaving her irreparably weak.....

where will their life go after this point.....I can't fathom.....as I never thought he would say that he regrets her.....but yet I can't blame him alone for whatever he said to her......

This is one of the heaviest emotional updates you came up with till now Soni.....and I'm really proud to be called your friend today......to hold at least a little bit of importance in your life today.....HATS OFF TO YOU.....this update even changed the way I usually comment.....this is the first time I'm commenting so heavily n emotionally on an update.....I myself felt the difference when I was writing....

Really Proud Of You Than I Can Actually Say.....



There is aashu..the haathi kamini

Soni..the gadhi kamini
[don't take offence,ghoda nahi mila toh gadha le aayi😆]

jiu..the pink kamini
[dunno what its called,Piglet may be😆]

eshu..the remaninig kamini
[dunno what it is that aashu is lifting up😆]

So how's that...???🤣







eesha tum tho sonia se bhi badi kamini nikali rulladiyana mujhe
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww...sorry Rakhi sweety...I didn't intend to make u cry......what I wrote came straight from my heart....not one word from my mind.....I wrote what I felt .....🤗sorry yet again....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Aww...sorry Rakhi sweety...I didn't intend to make u cry......what I wrote came straight from my heart....not one word from my mind.....I wrote what I felt .....🤗sorry yet again....



Nahi yaar itna emotions kaha se layee tu

already soni tension de rahi hai ke vo update mein rulagiyee i know that gg to happen but she better make the 25 update ready before she post 24th as if she delays in that we are gg to give her cold treat and taste of her own medicine.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

i m warning b4 hand na😆

but its painful to even type too😭


However painful it may come out to be.....I know it'll be beautiful in its own way.....because its the beauty of your writing Jaan...so don't worry and update....I'm also waiting to see the story ahead....😊....If u find it difficult to type...just concentrate on it as a piece of work not as your story and get done with it...then u can sit and cry with us....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heermeher



Nahi yaar itna emotions kaha se layee tu

already soni tension de rahi hai ke vo update mein rulagiyee i know that gg to happen but she better make the 25 update ready before she post 24th as if she delays in that we are gg to give her cold treat and taste of her own medicine.


aww....now please don't do that....you know she always updates in time.....only if she face some difficulty she refrains from her word.....she'll surely update the 25th part soon after the 24th...she herself can't handle the suspense regarding her readers' reactions on the updates....so she'll update it soon...just don't threaten her....bechari waise hi emotional update slikh rahi hai.....kahi likhthe likhthe khud rone na lag jaaye....I'll hate that.....so I assure you she'll update the next part also real soon.....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am here phinally....😆
This update has to be most emotional one I ever read...and you did it beautifully.. the anger, anguish, even the hidden love...all there...
I loved how Maan noticed that she isn't wearing anything that indicates that she is married..will he wonder why? I didn't think ki uska dimaag yeh notice karega but when it comes to Geet, he notices everything...😳 I wonder when he will notice, she is still wearing his chain. it is going to be a shocker for him...fireworks... He is so mad at her and he throws challeneges at her in his own style, letting her know his intenstions. loved how she took comfort n strength by touching his chain quietly. Maan is her soulmate, even if he is far away. sometimes when we love soemone, even their little support, however indirect it is, brings us peace. I loved that particular scene to pieces..very well done. He knew she could handle the presentation, she handled MSK pretty well, to yeh to uske baaye haath ka kaam hai...😳
Maan is hurting and so he hurts her back....calling their love a mistake. Their time spent, their memories and all that connects them. She is numb when she hears it.. ofcourse she knows he is hurting but she never thought he would label her a fraud and their connection a mistake. Both of them are at fault in their own way so I am not going to take sides. Geet didn;t tell him the whole truth and Maan didn;t try to find out. He just accepted what was thrown at face value. Bas itna hi bharosa tha apne pyaar par? Didn;t Geet think that maybe the truth would set him free of all his misery? so according to me both r wrong and now since Maan has managed to hurt her so bad...she is going to retaliate... I really REALLY wish she does. I would love to see her have some backbone and stop crying. Let him realize what he said was wrong even if it was in a spur of a moment. Hurting your love is a big no no... I want him to suffer... coz Geet has already suffered a lot. A LOT. she lost her parents and then her love. He had his family, his work...who did she have? nobody...just memories... and he had no right to taint those by saying that it was a mistake..
Ok I maybe an odd one out but the point where i cried like a baby was when Geet meets her dying father and then goes to see her mum but sees the word "morgue" I bawled like a baby...and even now i am crying while typing... reason? coz I couldn't be there when my dad took his last breath. I was 8000 miles away from him!! I never got to see him for one last time and i wonder what must I have gone through if i was there...what my family went through at that time....So that part overshadowed a little of Maan's pain and I feel more for Geet... but still not taking sides...(I didn't want to make u upset...sorry if i did with my raam katha)
A lovely and my fav update.......
lub ju 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

sweets i m trying... get the tissues if i manage to finish it today

i m ready with a bucket . . . BTW pweej tell me its abt the past . . . n not present
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

i m ready with a bucket . . . BTW pweej tell me its abt the past . . . n not present


well looking at both the tracks....both will make u cry only right now....so never mind if its present track or past one....
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Posted: 14 years ago
are you updating today sonia??
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

Muskiii🤗

oye u making it sound as if i m intending a homicide here😕😆... no i m not a terrorist and i m not a serial killer too... honestly, sachchi... i respnsible Indian citizen...identity proof bhejoon?😆
ab kya karu... the story has reached tht point na... things have to spill out... do u not remember the first update? needed to tell u na why Geet was so lost and upset😆
yes i did cry while writing the update... and so i took several breaks... or else my mom would have thought... gayi meri beti... jo thode bohut hopes the woh bhi donw the drain😆😆
muski u turning violent😆... tht was like deriving sinister pleasure😆... but kya kare he deserved it
Maan's bheja in NY🤣... my sweetie pie ur comments are cracking me up big time🤣... yup woh udhar bhool ke aa gaya Vicky will be more of Anu's bro... thoda dimag use karega woh... so chill😳... you r right.. past main... Geet will be on hot seat doing Sach ka Saamna😆
Oh he'll repent... don't worry abt that😆 apna dabba khali kar phir😆

Hi di🤗 i ahve always been voilent ............ nothing new in that.......... dont u remember my comment where i suggested to lock people like that manager in a tiny cabin n all that ............
don't talk about Sach ka samna....... i remember getting blasted at by mom....... i was just flipping channnels and my phone rang so i did not realise what the hell was screening and i started chatting with my frnd over phone..........just as i cut the call mom came in my room and saw the show airing and just to make matter even worse for me the question being asked was not at all decent and well u know the most natural thing that happened after that .....since then i litrally locked the channel star plus till the show remained on air....... i wasnt watching it ...... yet i got blasted .......so i hate that show.......
BTW i see someone gonna update tonight so i better not come online........i am not crying three days before my exam.............😆
so i will be back on monday and you better miss me di🤗
bye.......

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