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Okay I know i'm mahaaa late in posting my comments....so on ur behalf....I'm pulling my own ears and giving galis to myself....gadhi,kamini....well woh toh main hu hi😆....sorry....idiot,stupid..etc.etc.. ab bas ha main khud ko aur gaaliyan nahi de sakti😆....tujhe dena hai toh PM bhej dena😆...
We'll talk about the obvious Jerk in the end...😡
So Vicky first....he is slowly but steadily gaining the required knowledge of why his big brother has suddenly became so ruthless in his behavior...that too towards Geet specially....and Geet going more n more into her former shell....he's connecting the dots one by one and one more incident before his eyes and he'll know for sure what the hell is the problem lying there....and I want him to know that soon and take actions regarding solving them,since the two people involved aren't going to do so in near future
Oh the pain of unfulfilled love....its more painful than a rejection....Maan is trying to be rude to her and Geet is trying to avoid him...but do whatever they may,they can neither ignore each others' presence nor the affect of that on themselves.....the song u chose is so apt for their current miserable state that it moves the readers' hearts.....the pain of unfulfilled love
So Geet is taking help of Gurvinder in her quest for justice for her parents n herself....at least there is someone whom she allowed to support her through these times,if not Maan....I don't know why she played the farce on Maan of her marriage but well she is taking some genuine help,of that I'm glad.....
The past track was so very depressing....I was in half mind to skip it unable to read all that geet had to go through and maan's frantic attempts to reach her and her so-called family's disgusting performance in her case....but I went through the whole thing as I'm loyal to u kamini....true,just because u wrote this I had read that part....if any other writer I would have skipped it altogether,trust me....so I'm not gonna go into details of this part...it is depressing is all I can say about it...so u were again successful in evoking the required emotions in ur readers....👏👏
Now we'll come to that bas***d Arjun....that back-stabber...he first consloes Anu,then Daadi regarding Geet's safety,calls her and asks her not to tell Maan where the hell is she and what she's going through and now he came to see her as her prospected groom...the audacity of him😡😡😡
let me go and read the next update to find out why he did what he did....then the continuation of the comments will follow....till then Adieu....
Okay I know i'm mahaaa late in posting my comments....so on ur behalf....I'm pulling my own ears and giving galis to myself....gadhi,kamini....well woh toh main hu hi😆....sorry....idiot,stupid..etc.etc.. ab bas ha main khud ko aur gaaliyan nahi de sakti😆....tujhe dena hai toh PM bhej dena😆...
We'll talk about the obvious Jerk in the end...😡
So Vicky first....he is slowly but steadily gaining the required knowledge of why his big brother has suddenly became so ruthless in his behavior...that too towards Geet specially....and Geet going more n more into her former shell....he's connecting the dots one by one and one more incident before his eyes and he'll know for sure what the hell is the problem lying there....and I want him to know that soon and take actions regarding solving them,since the two people involved aren't going to do so in near future
Oh the pain of unfulfilled love....its more painful than a rejection....Maan is trying to be rude to her and Geet is trying to avoid him...but do whatever they may,they can neither ignore each others' presence nor the affect of that on themselves.....the song u chose is so apt for their current miserable state that it moves the readers' hearts.....the pain of unfulfilled love
So Geet is taking help of Gurvinder in her quest for justice for her parents n herself....at least there is someone whom she allowed to support her through these times,if not Maan....I don't know why she played the farce on Maan of her marriage but well she is taking some genuine help,of that I'm glad.....
The past track was so very depressing....I was in half mind to skip it unable to read all that geet had to go through and maan's frantic attempts to reach her and her so-called family's disgusting performance in her case....but I went through the whole thing as I'm loyal to u kamini....true,just because u wrote this I had read that part....if any other writer I would have skipped it altogether,trust me....so I'm not gonna go into details of this part...it is depressing is all I can say about it...so u were again successful in evoking the required emotions in ur readers....👏👏
Now we'll come to that bas***d Arjun....that back-stabber...he first consloes Anu,then Daadi regarding Geet's safety,calls her and asks her not to tell Maan where the hell is she and what she's going through and now he came to see her as her prospected groom...the audacity of him😡😡😡
let me go and read the next update to find out why he did what he did....then the continuation of the comments will follow....till then Adieu....
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