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Hey guys! hws u all. y aI knw i knw i deserve lots of Jootas chappals nd scolding from u all for delaying for months. bt wat to do Guys i got stuck up in my exams. first d Graduation one, Den my CA ones nd den MBA entrance nd after dat Project after Project from Office. derefore Sorry. i m holding my ears nw pls Forgive me. Guess wat m updating my FF nw. SO be happy nw. just give me few mins.

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So Guys here's d PART 33 of my FF. Hope u all enjoyed it. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it. thanx to all my Greedy Readers who waited paitently for my update. luv u all guys

PART 33:

Geet couldn't able to sleep whole night. Sleep seems to be miles away from her. Everytime she closed her Eyes she Remembers her Confession to Maan then their First Kiss which makes her Blush more nd More. She smiles while thinking of the moment she spend with Maan. She picks out her cellphone nd was about to dial Maan's Number she heard d Opening of Knob of the Door which brings her back to her senses.

Geet: I think Shilpa nd Savy has came nd if they see me like dis dey would definitely make fun of me. I Better Pretend to sleep. When dey both will see me like dis they will also go to sleep nd den I'll talk to Maan.

She said nd quickly puts d Blanket over her nd closes her eyes pretending to sleep but her cellphone is still in her hand she just prays to God dat it wouldn't Ring. Meanwhile Savy ns Shilpa Enters d Room. Both Saw Geet Sleeping nd gets confused as Geet never sleeps before talking to Shilpa.

Shilpa: Hw come Di Sleeps so early Today. I mean she slept without talking to me. She didn't even asked me about my Date with Armaan.

Savy: Really?

Shilpa: ya she never did that

Savy: that's Really very unusual

In d meantime Geet puts her cellphone on Vibrating Mode so that if in case it rings den nobody could hear it. While she was doing This Savy notices some moves in d Blanket. She smirks as she came to know that Geet was just Pretending to be in sleep. She whispers something in Shilpa's Ears to which Shilpa gives a surprising look. Dey both smirks nd decided to tease Geet. Both sat on Geet's bed nd started talking to each other.

Savy: Shilpa, Do u know today Geet confesses her Feelings towards Maan.

Shilpa: Really? How do u know? Did Di told u?

Savy(makes a Face): No Yaar, Actually I met Maan while I m cuming towards our Room. He was very Happy nd wen I asked about d reason den he told me dis.

Shilpa: Wow! M so happy for both of dem.

Geet (under her breath): Ye Maan Bhi na, kya zarurat thi abhi batane ki kal subah tak ka wait nahi kar sakta tha.

Both Shilpa nd Savy notices it nmd dey continued their plan.

Savy: nd u knw wat Shilpa, Maan is telling dat he knews dat dis will happen very soon

Shilpa: Really? how?

Savy(quiet loudly): I too asked d same, to which he was saying dat charm of MSK always work. No girl can resist herself for longer

Shilpa: hhhmmm dats true

While Geet opened her Jaw in frustration like she always do in d show

Geet: oh! To ye baat hai. Milne do aisi khabar loongi ki sari akal thikane aa jayegi. Dusht Daanav

Savy: nd u knw wat, he was also saying dat wen no girl in dis world can resist herself in front of his Charm den hw can Geet? Sooner or Later Geet had to give in. Afterall he is MSK nd MSK gets wat he wants

Shilpa: Ooo! Did Jiju said all dis?

Savy: Ya u think I m lyieng. Nd u knw wat else he was saying, he was saying dat...

Geet couldn't take it anymore nw, she didn't let Savera complete her sentence nd quickly gets out from d blanket, both Savy nd Shilpa notices d frustating expression on her face

Geet: Aur kya bola usne? Aur kitna boast kiya usne apne aap ko

Savy(Pretends to get surprised): Are Geet! Tum to so rahi thi na? to achanak kaise uth gayi?

Geet: Bhaad me gayi meri neend, tum pehle mujhe yeh batao ki maan mere bare me aur kya bol raha tha?

Shilpa: Di wo...

Savy (intervenes): no Shilpa, its ok we should tell geet d whole truth she should knw dat wat Maan thinks about her. (den to Geet) Geet Maan was saying... That he loves u a lot nd no other girl in dis world can take ur place in his heart

Geet got all her anger vanished nd she smiles sweetly

Geet: Really?

Both Shilpa nd Savy nodes in yes. Geet felt Happy nd blushed den she notices both Savy nd Shilpa's faces who were looking at her nd den she realized that it was dere plan to trap her. She smiled nervously to dem

Shilpa: but Di u haven't told us yet? U were sleeping na den hw come u r able to listen our conversation?

Geet: Wo... main... Actually...

Savy: Ya geet we r listening

Geet: Wo actually... main... haan... Wo I got disturbed in sleep wid ur conversations nd datsy listened wat u were saying

Shilpa: Really Di? Bt we r talking so Softly. Aren't we Savy?

Savy: Ya ofcourse.

Geet make a poor face not able to think any strong reason wen savy throws pillow on her nd Shilpa too accompanied her.

Savy(Laughing): u lier u weren't sleeping u were jst pretending so dat we cannot ask u about ur meeting wid maan isn't it?

Geet: no Guys... u were all thinking wrong

Shilpa: nw stop it Di, we saw u ok

Geet: so u guys were saying dis intentionally?

Savy: Yup!!!!

Geet: I wont leave u both

She said nd started throwing pillows on both of dem in defence of which dey both started running nd throwing cushions on her. It seems like all 3 were student of 1st standard fighting nd messing all things

Savy (all of a sudden): Arey Maan! U are here?

Geet stops in her tracks nd looks towards d door nd found it closed she den gives an angry look to both of dem nd started laughing nd den hug each other. It seems like dey were seeing each other after so many years. Just den Shilpa notices somethinmg flashing on bed. It was Geet's cell.

Shilpa: Di ur cell

Geet quickly picks it up nd saw Maan's name flashing over dere, nd she quickly answers d call.

Geet: Hello!

Maan: Hello Geet! Where were u? I have been calling u from last 15 minutes

Geet: wo.. my cell was at silent mode

Maan: ok... So thinking of me?

Geet couldn't talk freely to maan because of Savy nd Shilpa she just says yes nd no

Geet: no

Maan: lier!

Geet: m not lyieng

Maan: Geet, I can catch ur lie even if m nt wid u ok so stp lyieng.

Geet just smiles

Maan: nw tell me u were thinking of me na?

Geet: ya

Maan: even I was thinking of u. u knw wenevr I close my eyes ur face comes in front of my eyes nd moment we spend together. Geet I really cant tell wat I m feeling rite nw. Do u feel d same?

Geet: ya

Maan: u knw wat m missing u badly.

Geet: hhmmm me too.

Maan: I LOVE YOU

Geet: same here

Maan nw gets irritate wid her yes, no, hhmmm

Maan: Geet wats wrong wid u? u are talking to me like its d first tym u r talking to me. U dnt want to talk?

Geet: no nothing like dat.

Maan: Den?

Geet: ya Shilpa nd savy r here only

Maan: oh! So dis is d reason

Geet: Hhmmm

Maan: ye dono kabab me haddiyan saara romance kharab kar deti hai. Bt dnt worry kal ye dono haddiyan humara romance kharab nahi karengi. Bcoz tomorrow dere will be only u nd me? U remember na

Geet(Blushes): ya, I do

Maan: chalo! Nw I m hanging up otherwise dey will tease u more. Bye gud nite nd I LOVE U.

Geet: bye nd same to u.

She cuts d call nd quickly texts him "I LOVE U MY MAANU JAANU GUD NITE". To which Maan replies wid a smiley 😊😳.

Next morning wen Geet came out from d Shower she notices Savy packing her bags. She gets confused nd decided to ask her

Geet: Savy, wats all dis? Y r u packing ur bags?

Savy: oh Geet, m leaving in 2 hrs for Mumbai nd from dere back to London

Geet frowned nd thinks dat she might feel bad due to her rude behaviour towards savy from last few days

Geet: Savy, I m so sorry, I knw I was very rude to u frm last few days, but I...

Savy: Geet Geet Geet relax! Who says that m going because of u? Geet it was all planned I had to go to London nd it was nt because of u

Geet: but Savy we all were going to Mumbai tomorrow den y r u going today?

Savy: Geet I have to go, aur waise bhi jis Kaam ke liye main aayi thi wo poora ho gaya to mujhe to ab jaana hoga na. u nd maan r together nw.

Geet gets confused

Savy: Geet Maan has told me wat has happened between u two nd derefore I decided to cum to India to unite u both nd see I have done my Job Perfectly. Aur dekho na main to ek Love Story set karne aayi thi aur Do Luv stories ko track pe laake ja rahi hoon.Ek tumhari aur Maan ki aur Doosri Apni bewakoof Bhai ki. Kisi ko uska Pyaar mil jaye isse zyada khushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai.

Geet: Savy, can I ask u sumthing?

Savy: ofcourse Geet

Geet: u were in luv wid Maan na?

Savy (smiles): ya I was bt nt nw. Geet, Maan nd Bro were childhood friends nd Maan has always treat me as Armaan's Sis. He had never ver thought of me beyond friends nd I realize dat he can never ever think of me in dat way. Nd nw I too realize dat it was just an infactuation. Nd m happy dat he's my very gud friend.

A drop of tear fell from Geet's eye

Savy: u knw wat Geet, wenever I talk to Maan he always mention u. Geet is like dis, Geet is like dat, today she fights wid me, today we have gone to beach. Geet Geet nd only Geet. Den I realize hw madly he's in luv wid u so wen he told me abt d problem between u two den I couldn't resist myself from helping u both. Main to yahan us ladki se milne aayi thi Jisne Maan ko itna badal diya. I have never seen Maan talking about any girl nt even in college therefore wen he told abt u den I was curious to see u. nd so m here.

Geet quickly hugs Savy nd dey both share a warm hug. After few minutes dey broke from hug

Geet: u knw wat Savy, u r too sweet. U were a blessing as a friend. Maan is really Lucky to have u as a friend.

Savy: no m lucky to have him as a friend.Dey both laugh

Geet: Wo to hain but dnt worry u too will get ur Maan Soon

Savy(sadly): I doubt that Geet

Geet: but y?

Savy: Geet, m going to tell u sumthing but promise dat u wont tell it to anyone

Geet: I Promise

Savy: Geet m suffering from Brain Tumor

Geet gets shocked she don't know wat to say hw to react she was just speechless. Savy notices it nd tries to lighten d atmosphere

Savy: Relax its on it initial stage.

Geet: but Savy... Dis... r u going thru any treatment?

Savy: ya Geet nd Doc. Says dat it is cureable I just have to go thru an operation but my operation is risky. It could result into memory loss or maybe brain hamerage

Geet: Did Armaan know abt it?

Savy: No, only Mom nd Dad knows abt it. I haven't told bro yet

Geet: but y Savy? U shld tell him. He's nt only ur brither but also a Doctor. U should not hide it from him.

Savy: Geet I know dis. But I knw bro also. Geet, he cant bear dis. He loves me a lot. He cant see me in dis state. Geet, I had already seen him going thru a very bad phase. Den Shilpa came to his lyf nd I again saw him smiling, living his life. Nd nw if I told dis to him he wont b able to tolerate dis. Moreover he'll lost his happiness wid shilpa nd dis I dnt want

Geet: but Savera...

Savt: Geet, I said na its at initial stage, may be nothing can happen nd I'll get long lyf after dat. Geet promise me u wont tell dis to anyone.

Geet(in tears): I wont. But I'll really pray to Babaji dat u become fit nd fine aur dekhna u'll attend my marriage.

Savy: For sure. Acha nw let me pack

Geet: Savy, meri ek baat manogi

Savy: ofcourse Geet

Geet: pls dnt go today. I need u today.today is my date wid Maan nd I want to look best 4 him. I m very nervous nd I need my best friend wid me. Pls for me stay today

Savy: nw u said me best friend den hw can I refuse. I'll be dere 4 u today nd u'll look perfect. I promise Maan will definitely blown away after seeing u.

Geet: thanx Savy

Savy said nothing but smiles.

In d evening Savy nd Shilpa r helping Geet to get ready. Geet wanted to be a surprise package for Maan today therefore she choses d Dress in which she look breathtaking. Shilpa nd Savy helped Geet in Make-up nd other accessories. Finally by 7 PM Geet is ready. Maan nd Armaan both has set Maan's date at Maan's Beach house. Maan knws dat hw much Geet loves Beach. Therefore he decided to set up his date over dere. All d arrangements were Geet's Favourite. Nd after dat he too goes to get ready.

At 7:30 a Car cumes to pick Geet. As soon as Geet enters d car she saw a Bouquet of flowers. It was her fav. Orchids. A note was written over dere

"TO THE GIRL WHO CAME TO MY LYF AS A STRANGER BUT NW SHE BECAME MY LYF. WHO ADDED D FRAGNANCE OF HER LOVE IN MY LIFELESS LIFE. I LOVE U"

She both smiled nd blushed reading dat. She didn't realize she reaches to the Beach house until driver told her. She steps out checks herself nd slowly moves towards house. She was conscious as she dnt knw hw Maan will react to her new look. But she tried to keep herself calm. She takes a Deep Breath nd steps in. As soon as she enters her eyes gets wide after seeing d arrangement. She couldn't believe dat Maan has done dis. Everything was so perfect nd amazing. She adores everything curtains, flowers, candles everything. She knew dat Maan can go to any extent to make dis date perfect. But where is Maan? She looked around herself everywhere but couldn't able to locate him.

Geet: Maan where r u?

She said nd notices a spot light at d distance. She smiles knowing who it was.

Precap:

Maneet's moments






ok So dats it guys! Sorry for Leaving u all at Cliffhanger nd delaying d update but will defo update it by tomorrow or day after tomorrow. My Boss is cuming so will PM every1 later. Press d like Button if u all Like nd nd do Leave ur Comment/criticism.


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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago

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