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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
nice part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
thank u guys
Edited by saidivya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sweetsurabhi94

nice part loved it
please do open the suspense soon
n do continue soon

thanxx
sure i will soon open the suspense
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Very nice Update Divya. NUPUR approached ARMAAN for GUNJAN...!😲 Its interesting...😉 Its very short Update...please,update soon.Thanks for PM.

thanxx
iam glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

nice part..cnt soon

thank u ambika
Edited by saidivya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
thanxxxxxxx😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ammykhan

nice part

loved it
continue soon
thx 4 the pm

thanx ammy
for such sweet comment😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Part :6

Pyaar ka intezaar

Finally the day of their journey come...........ful gang along wid gunjan went to the bus stop. All were excited as they are going to revive all the past memories.............however gunjan jaise kisi aur duniyan mein hi hai......................she neither looked sad nor happy. In it's place she looked nervous!!!

Gunjan pov:

Pata nahi aisa lag raha hai ki iss diwali mai kuch acha hone wala.........aisa lag raha hai ki iss diwali mai meri zindagi badalne wali hai.........pata nahi mujhe kya horaha hai..........i hope sab kuch theek ho.........

Nupur(shouting):gunjan tum vaha kya kar rahi hai.....bus agaya jaldi chalo

Gunjan:ha diii mai bus arahi hu.......

As soon as she entered the bus........aw.........armaan was sitting inside...........with a smile...........

Gunjan: armaan...........tum yaha.?????????

Armaan: (coming towards her, in a mysteriously romantic manner) ab kya karu, tumhe akele thodi chod sakta hu................ (he winked at her which made her even more uneasy)

They both sat togther along with benia,mayur,udj

Nupur pov:

Dekhna gunjan iss diwali mai tum hari puri zindagi badalne wali hai.........iss holidays ke baad.........mujhe yakeen hai mai wapas apni purani gunji ko dekhungi..........bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukhar hai ki tumhari zindagi mai armaan jaisa pyaar karne wala sathi mila hai..........

Scene: everybody arrives in moreana, bui , bauji were stanidg at the door to greet them.

On seeing armaan

bui: yeh log kaun hai?

N: wo yeh hamarey dost hai, inhone kabhi chote sheher ki tyohar nhi dekhi,....................bas isiliye

G: ha bui isiliye yeh hamarey saat aye hai...........................

Everybody is happy to see gunjan taking side of armaan

That day only at n8 after having dinner nupur meets bauji alone and talks about armaan. Well she don't say nething about samrat since he don't know nething about sajan's relationship. So, she just speaks about armaan's background .........................well icing of the cake is from the very first bauji too have felt an instant liking towards him.......

N: bauji, main kaheti hu is baar gunjan ki haath peeli kar dijiye ..................akhir kab tak wo aise akeli rahegi. Aap ne mere liye ladka chun li aur gunjan k liye?????????? Thik hai aap ne try nhi ki pad ek baar meri pasand ko parakh k dekhiye, armaan sach mein bahaut hi achcha ladka hai. Wo hamari gunjan ko khush rakh khega.........................

Bauji:par nupur tum gunjan se pucha ki usse ladka pasand hai ya nahi.

Nupur :aise kaise baath kar rahe hai bauji......aap tho jante haina gunjan ko jaisa aap kahenge.....voh vaisa hi karegi......woh aapki baath kabhi taali hai kya.....aur waise bhi mai aapse bus ye puch rahi hu aap ko ladka pasand hai ya nahi........

Bauji :waise ladka acha khandan ka hai...par

Nupur interepts....

Nupur :bus aur kuch nahi bauji.....agar aapko bhi pasand agaya tho gunjan kobhi pasand hoga

Nupur turned to go....when bauji called her

Bauji:nupur

Nupur:ha bauji

Bauji:nupur tum iske bare mai abhi kisiko math batana.......mai phele gunjan se baath karna chata hu........

Nupur:theek hai bauji jaise aap ki marzi

And she goes from there

Scene:Next day(night)

bauji enters gunajns room......

Gunjan:bauji aap'app kyu takleef ki.....mai hi ajathi.

Bauji:gunjan beta mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai

Gunjan:haa bauji boliye kya baath karna hai......

Bauji:beta mai chata hu ki tum aage badho.........kitne din tak tum aise hi akela rahegi..

Gunajn was not able to understand.........

Gunjan:matlab'.mujhe samaj nahi aaraha.......aap kya kehana chate hai

Bauji:beta mai chata hu ki tum shadi karlo......

Gunjan dumbfounded!!! She was shocked to hear these words.......that too from bauji

gunjan just looks at her bauji n widout uttering a single word stands to leave , but is eventually stooped

bauji:beta meri baath puri nahi huyi hai..

G: (turns back to him n replies very seriously)............bauji abhi bhi is saal ka diwali nhi aaya hai

N saying this she leaves, leaving behind bauji speechless, as if he had done some heinous grevious act.................which his daughter have reminded back once again....................................

Gunjan came to the terrace after the convo wid bauji. She was standing like a statue gazing the moon, lost in some trance......................"mere barein mein soch rhi ho"

Gunjan turns to find the silence breaker.....................it's none other but armaan standing wid the usual smile on his face and his chocolaty charm....................

Gunajn fakely smile and says

Gunjan: tum yahan is waqt, soye nhi?

armaan: tum bhi to nhi soye, jab meri friend jag rhi ho then how can i sleep

Gunjan: armaan plz, mujhe kuch der k liye akele chor do

armaan: (coming in front of her) apne friend se bhi share nhi karogi apni problems! Gunjan main tumhara friend hu,........................agar koi probs hai mujhe bolo main...........................

gunjan:aisa kuch nahi hai....bus isehi

armaan pov:

yahi acha samay hai gunjan ko apni dil ki baath bolne keliye.......boldo armaan tumhari dil ki baath....comeon armaan u can do it......(jaise hi bolne lagta hai..gunjan interepts)

gunjan:armaan kya tumhe kabhi kissi se pyaar hua???????

armaan: (wow dude tum kitne lucky ho.....voh toh bolnese phele hi samaj gayi)

gunjan:armaan bolona tum kisi se pyaar kiya????????

Armaan :ha ha kiya na

Gunjan :toh tumhe pata hi hogana pyaar ek ki baar hota hai....aur aur her voice breaks... shadi bhi ek baar hoti hai......

after saying these words She leaves aur bechara armaan wahi k wahi khara rahe jata hai......................"isey achanak kya hua? Why is she behaving so differently today?.....................(after some pause a naughty smile slowly n slowly comes widening his lips) ha gunjan tum sahi kaha pyaar ek hi baar hota hai........aur shadi bhi ek hi baar hota hai......aur mujhe yakeen hai ki voh pyaar aur hamsafar tum hi ho

Precap: diwaliiiiiii and entry of a special person😉

Well this much for today

I hope u liked it......pls res o do comment

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Take care

bye
Edited by saidivya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Luved it
vry gud update
thanks for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really nice
awesome😊

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