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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: 358674

liking it??? we r loving it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

very nice....
awesome 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ambikamuskaan

i really lyk the suspense behind armaans story............................................i think thats samrat ................i dnt noe y ....................only sam can call gunjan chasmish......................awesome update plz cn soon and thanx fr the pm......................

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thanx....
i will answer all ur questions.....but u have to wait......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice story i am actually loving it
do continue soonn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsurabhi94

very nice story i am actually loving it
do continue soonn
n do pm me

thanx surabhi
ya i will continue soon
and i will send u pm when i update😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4

Scene: morning time mayur house. It's Sunday so all sitting relaxed at the and watching tv. The door bell rings

N: gunjan zara dekhna kaun hai?

Gunjan goes to open the door, and as soon as she opens it.................a loud scream. Both mayur jumps up on their feet hearind the scream..................

M: nupur, yeh kyat ha..................

" yeh hum hai-----------------it's the whole gang standing at the door step. Adhani, benia and udj.(uday+cj)

Gunjan and mayur hugs adhani,benia,udj

guys here is the small description about our gang''.

raj 's dad accepts suhani as his would be daughter-in-law''.and they both got married'..after marriage they settled in London'..

Diya to now married to benji n have shifted to Canada two years back. It's because of benji. U people wont believe------------he has baged a job of handsome salary out there n dia, wel she is a fashion designer now running her own boutique in 1 of famous fashion street.

Baki bacha kaaun? Hamare uday miya. Jaise ki aap sab jante hai, unka to andaaz hi nirala hai. Aajkal wo amazon gaye hue hai..................dariye mat kuch khane k liye nhi, wo uhm...........uhm............... he is owner of a cool pub...... So................arey wo akele nhi uski wife bhi gayi hai uske saath..............bhul gaye kya are apni cj thin a.............ha ; she is his patni cum bussines partner. Wo kya hai na, pura paisa ghar mein hi ayenga aur biwi k joote bhi nhi parenge kisi aur ko chedne k jurm mein, aur to aur kaam k saat saat romance bhi ho jayega.

Everybody comes in. Nupur asks the servant to take their luggages inside.

G: waise tum logo........ek saat...................aur yahah''

Raj: yeh tum apne didi se kyun nhi puch leti

G: (surprised) di..............(n she turns to nupur)

N: wo..........maine tujhe batana bhul gayi, hum sab ek saat moreana jaa rahe hai. To maine socha kyun na sab ko yehi bula liya jay...............fir sab saat milke jayenge. Bada maza aayega!

G: par hum achanak moreana kyun jayenge? Sab kuch thik to hai na wahan? Di kahin bauji ko to..................

N: gunjan, gunjan.............................itni hyper mat ho, wahan sab kuch thik hai

G: to fir yahan jaane ka achanak plan.........................tumhe to pata hai na di yahan office mein itna sara kaam, upar se kuch naye projects bhi shuru hone wale hai.................to fir

B: hold on both of u...................gunjan nupur sahi kahe rhi thi, tum puri tarha pagal ho chuki ho kaam karte karte....................yaar teen din baad diwali shuru hone wala hai, abhi bhi tumhe kaam ki pari hai. Agar main galat nhi hu, then diwali ko har office close raheta hai. N we all will spend this holiday in moreana................rite guys

Everybody 2gethr"yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees"

G (slapin her forehead): oh main bilkul bhul gayi thi....................

D: kitna achcha lag raha hai na, hum sab ek saat

N: ha aur wo bhi purey teen saal baad......................................

As soon as gunji heard the last three words she lukd up surprisingly shocked................"teen saal!!!" she murmurs

N: gunjan , gunjan...................(shakin her)

G: ha.............ha di, kuch bol rhi ho

N: kahan kho gayi

U: lagta hai abhi se meri sis moreana pachuch gayi hai..........................

N: yaad hai mayank, last time hum sab ek saat diwali manaye the hamarey reception par, moreana mein

M: ha, fir kaam k silsiley mein kabhi ek saat nhi ho paye

Cj: no probs, ab fir se ek saat hai, ........................so firse dhum machayenge

Gunjan still looked a bit lost n was feelin uneasy................." tum log batein karon main abhi aayi kuch snacks aur chay leke"...................and she leave''.

They set in sofa and they started to share their life expierences'.

After sometime'the door bell rings again'..

Nupur:ab kon ho sakta hai'..mai dekti hu'

Gunjan :dii aap rukiye mai jake dekti hu...

Gunjan goes and opened the door..

Gunjan:armaan tum yaha'.

Armaan:ha yaar ghar mai bahat bore ho rahu'socha idher ajaav'.

Gunjan:acha kiya chalo'mai tumhe kisise milvatu hu'.she took him to the gang'...

She introduces armaan to everybody''they all soon become good friends''

Next day'...

It was armaan's b'day party at his place and guess what gunjan was his most special guest. It was ofcourse not the official party. Only the closest friend were their. Even gang was also invited.

The cake was cut and the lucky person to have the first piece was undoubtedly ms. Gunjan. Then there was couple dance. Every 1 was dancing mayur, adhani,benia,udj and gunar(gunjan+armaan). Basically gunjan first refused him but due to his request atlast she decided to dance with him'''first she is felling uncomfortable but armaan by his nature......... was going on cracking vogous meaningless jokes which made gunjan puffed out her lungs due to laughter. Gang and mayur while dancing was constantly watching them....................

Nupur: mayank kya tum bhi wohi soch rahe ho....................

M: (cuts off) jo main soch raha hu................and both luks at each others and smiles

N: itsn't it true, in dono ki Jodi kitni achchi lag rhi hai

M:aur dono ek dusre k saat khush bhi hai

N: pad kya lagta hai, do they both like each other

M: yes dey do, that very much visible. But do they love!!!!

N: (in a wicked tone) chinta mat karo, agar nhi bhi karte hai to koi fark nhi hum karwa denge.

Mayur goes to the gang''

Nupur:guys humme lagta hai ki armaan gunjan se pyaar karta hai'..

Mayank :tumlog dekh rehe ho voh dono kitne ache lagrahe hai.......

Nupur:ha guys............ tumlog ko kya lagta hai''..

Dia: oh, ofcourse babes..................tumne jo kaha hai absolutely true. It's high time now. gunjan should settle down wid somebody worthwhile. Jo uski kadar karein

Benji: aur use kabhi na rulaye, sirf khushiyan hi khushiyan de.......................aur na use chod kar bhag jaaye

On this comnt dia luks at benji and smiles. She thanks god for for having such a caring a nd loving husband like benji who loves her family even more than she does.

That's it for today I will continue soon'..

Next part in continuation of this part''..

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting 4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...

Bye

Take care

Edited by saidivya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
loved all ur updates
continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
awesome part.............................plz break the suspense soon...............................
luvd it alot
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
that was superb !!!!!!!!!
lovely part 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Luvly update
thanks for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Very Interesting Story Divya. 😊I really liked it. Loved the whole parts....👏Really curious about SAMRAT n his story. Add my name in your PM List. Very Good Job...Keep it up.Thanks for PM.

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