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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Anjali_12

Loved the update..plzz pm me too...plzz continue soon..

thanxx anjali
i will pm u😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ambikamuskaan

saidiya srry if u r hurt bt i think this ff is the same as one of the ff i read named waada...................its just the same if i m nt wrong...srry if gt hurt bt i just expressed my opinion....... i ws confused so i thot of sharing it wid u........

ambika

hey its ok u r not hurted me😊
actually waada is not a ff its a oneshot
so i thought to continue the journey of sajan
and it will be differnt from waada os
dont forgot here armaan is present😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: princess_sara

Hey hey hey..
i m sorry main comment nai kar paii..
but now i m doing
Welllll the concept is veryyy beautifullllll
reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy amazingggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
d write more...
and plzzz yaar samrat ki bhi jaldi se entry kardo...
can't wait to read moreeeeee
jaldi updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee karooooooooooo

luv ur fanfiction

sara

thanxx sara
for ur beautiful comment😊
haa tumhari wish puri hogi samrat ka entry jaldi hone wali hai😉
thanxx once again...i am glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Nice concept. Liked it a lot. Waiting for sam's entry. I had read WAADA and very eager to know what happens next. Do cont soon. And ADD ME TO UR PM LIST. Plz pm me when ever u update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: gnaneswari

Nice concept. Liked it a lot. Waiting for sam's entry. I had read WAADA and very eager to know what happens next. Do cont soon. And ADD ME TO UR PM LIST. Plz pm me when ever u update.

thanxxx
ya i will add in my pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Hiiii guys here goes part 7

This is a long update........i hope u enjoy the update

It was morning of diwali........mayur aur baaki gang plan karte hai'armaan aur gunjan ko akele chod ne keliye.........so inke plan ke hisaab se un dano ko bahaar bejte hai......

When they are walking in the road......suddenly a big car stops in front of them'.both were surprised.....

Suddenly they sees mr.tiwari.......riddhima and some of their collegues are coming out of their car..

Gunajn:tiwari sir.........riddhima......aap sab yaha??

Tiwari:well gunjan hum tumhara family ko invite karne ke liye aaye hai........

armaan:invite......kis keliye sir???

Tiwari:voh kya haina gunjan kal humme phone aaya hai ki......sg company ka jo owner hai .....vo wapas India aane wale hai........so unki wapasi aane ki kushi mai hum party de rahe.......toh socha kyuna hum bhi morena jaye......tumhara family ko invitation mil jaye ga......sath hi sath tyohar dekh neko miljaye ga.......kyu sahi kiya naa

Gunjan(smiling):sir aap sab ne bahat acha kiya'chaliye sir ghar chalet hai.......

And they goes to their home.........She introduced them to each n everybody.....................all were happy. The most was gunjan. Itne dino baad gunjan ko itna khush dekhkar nupur ko thodi rahat mili,....................

afternoon nupur goes to gunjans room.........

N: gunjan

G: ha di, are tum bahar kyun khari ho andar aao na................

Nupur comes and sits beside her: tune kya socha hai?

G: kis barein mein?

N: wo.......................armaan k...................

Gunjan:armaan?? Armaan kya hai diiii

Nupur:gunjan hum soch rahe hai ki tumhara shadi armaan ke saath karde........

Gunjan:diii iska matlab.......after some pause she understood the plan of the whole gang.........

Nupur:gunjan dekh armaan tumse bahat pyaar karta hai.....aur

Gunajn cuts her.......

G: di plz, mujhe us barein mein koi baat nhi karni hai.................agar aapko koi aur baat karni hai to thik hai, nhi toh mujhe padne dijiye.....

N: (bursts out) kyun nhi karegi bol, aakhir kab tak us bewafa k barein mein sochti rahegi...................tu kyun nhi samajhti gunjan agar use aana hota to wo itne salon mein aa chukka hota...........wo tujhe nhi chahat hai, aura b tub hi uske barein mein sochna bandh karde

G: diii bahat kaam bakhi hai....plss aap kaam kijiye....

Nupur goes out but turns bck: gunjan aaj diwali hai, sochkar aayi thi is baar diwale mai........tumhari zindagi mai nayi suruvat hogi.....

She goes out.......................................................................................

It was the evening time wen all were sitting at the roof top.............this time gunjan too

nupur:yaar tumlog kitne boring......kuch karte bhi nahi.......making puppy face

mayank:haa guys kuch khelte hai....ya phir naach gana....kuch to karte hai......

benji:guys ek idea!!!!!

Udj:kya??

Benji:kyu na gunjan ek gana gaye....

Nupur:yaar maitho bhul hi gayi......gunjan plss yek gana gavona....baht din hogaye tumhara avaaz sinke...plsss

Armaan was confused he don't noe about gunjan singing talent....as she stopped singing....after samrat left.....

Armaan:tum log kya keh rahe hai.....gunjan gati bhi hai...

Cj:tumhe nahi pata.... gunjan bahat acha gaati hai..usse tho talent parade mai 1st price bhi mila tha.....

Armaan:acha....toh gunajn plss gavo na plss.....

All of them:plsssssss gunajn plsssssss

She gets totally irritated......

Gunjan(irritated):acha acha theek hai.....plss tumlog mujhe irritate karna bandh karo....

Uday:acha acha theeek hai.......gana shuru karo

Gunjan closes her eyes and start singing

Suna suna lamha lamha (this song is from Krishna cottage)

Soona Soona Lamha Lamha(she closes her eyes and thinks about samrat)
Meri Rahein Tanha Tanha
Aakar Mujhe Tum Tham Lo
Manzil Teri Dekhe Rasta
Mud Ke Zara Ab Dekh Lo
Aisa Milan Phir Ho Na Ho
Sab Kuch Mera Tum Hi To Ho
Bapanah Pyaar Hai Aaja(
she opens her eyes and goes to the edge of the terrace and by seeing moon she sings this lines)
Tera Intezaar Hai Aaja
O Bapanah Pyaar Hai Aaja
Tera Intezaar Hai Aaja
Soona Soona Lamha Lamha
Meri Rahein Tanha Tanha


Bichhde Bhi Ham Jo Kabhi Raston Main(she visualized about their 1st meet )
To Sang Sang Rahungi Sada
Kadmon Ki Aawaaz Sun Ke Chalungi
Tumhe Dhoond Loongi Sada
Bhooli Mohabbat Ki Yeh Khushbuye Hain
Hawaon Main Phaili Hui
Chhu Kar Mujhe Aaj Mahsoon Kar Lo
Vo Yadein Meri Unchhui
Aisa Milan Phir Ho Na Ho
Sab Kuch Mera Tum Hi To Ho
Bapanah Pyaar Hai Aaja(she remembers how samrat helped in talent parade and their dance in valentines day)
Tera Intezaar Hai Aaja
O Bapanah Pyaar Hai Aaja
Tera Intezaar Hai Aaja
Soona Soona Lamha Lamha
Meri Rahein Tanha Tanha

Aaa.. Aaa..
Vadon Ke Dhagon Main Hum Tum Bandhe Hain(she remimbers their 1st date in samrat"s farm house)
Zara Dor Tum Tham Lo
Bahon Main Aise Pighal Jane Do Mujhko
Aise Mera Naam Lo
Main Vo Shama Hoon Jo Roshan Tumhe Karke
Khud To Pighal Jaungi
Subah Ka Sooraj Tumhare Liye Hai
Main Hoon Raat Dhal Jaungi
Aisa Milan Phir Ho Na Ho
Sab Kuch Mera Tum Hi To Ho
Bapanah Pyaar Hai Aaja(she remembered how samrat proposed her on the road in front of everybody...... smiles remembering it)
Tera Intezaar Hai Aaja
O Bapanah Pyaar Hai Aaja
Tera Intezaar Hai Aaja
Soona Soona Lamha Lamha(she has tears in her eyes but quickly wipes it)
Meri Rahein Tanha Tanha
Mud Ke Zara Ab Dekh Lo
Aisa Milan Phir Ho Na Ho
Sab Kuch Mera Tum Hi To Ho
Bapanah Pyaar Hai Aaja
Tera Intezaar Hai Aaja
O Bapanah Pyaar Hai Aaja
Tera Intezaar Hai Aaja
Soona Soona Lamha Lamha(and again closes eyes....this time she sings slowly)
Meri Rahein Tanha Tanha

After finishing the song all were dumbfolded.....they don't noe how to react.....after some pause they started clapping

Gang was very happy.......especially armaan....he thinks this song is dedicated to him.......

Armaan:omg gunjan......tumhara avaaz kitna acha hai.......tumne mujhe kabhi bataya kyu nahi..ki tum gati bhi ho

Gunjan:voh voh bus asehi.......kabhi mauka nahi mila........

Suddenly the lights off.......sumbody start singing zara sa dil mai de zagah tu....(this song is from jannat) and slideshow begins.....

Zara Si dil mein de jagah tu(pics of gunjan first day in excel)
zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa(
pics of gunjan studying seriously in library)

Mein chahun tujhko
Meri jaan bepaanah(gunajn pic of talent parade)
Fida hoon tujhpe
Meri jaan bepaanaha(
pic of gunjan hugging nupur)

wooow O oo O O

Zara Si dil mein de jagah tu
zara sa apna le bana(pics of whole gang hugging)
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa(
gunjan pics of smiling)

Mein tere mein tere
Kadmon mein rakh du yeh jahan(gunjan pics with kids)

Mera ishq deewangi(gunjan pics hugging uday)

Hai nahi hai nahi(pics of mayur and gunjan in their marriage)
Ashiq koi mujhsa tera
Tu mere liye bandage(gunjan pics with suhani)

Mein chahun tujhko(gunjan pics with her bauji)
Meri jaan bepaanah
Fida hoon tujhpe
Meri jaan bepaanaha

Zara Si dil mein de jagah tu(gunajn smilimg with flowers in her hands)
zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa

wooow O oo O O

Throughout the song the lights on the terrace was dimed n there was a focus light on gunjan, ......................while others were trying to figure out what was hapennig, gunjan stood there enjoying the song....................

Zara Si dil mein de jagah tuzara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa

wooow O oo O O .................... all looked at the sky where they found only four words:

I love u chashmish

Shocked to see this.........................everybody, else gunjan. She saw it, n closed her eyes ....................tears drenched her cheeks, however nobody saw that as they all were engrossed in this mesmerizing style of proposing...........................

Suddenly nupz spoke: by god armaan, mujhe pata nhi that um itne romantic ho.......................yeh sab tumhi ne kiya hai na....... ye slide show aur aur ye aasmaan mai likhna.......

Armaan:well nupur thanks for the complement......par mai ye sab nahi kiya.....aur vaise bhi.......mai thodi na excel college mai padta tha.......

Mayank:toh phir ye sab kisne kiya..........

After sometime lights got on......

Everybody gets shocked.............................how come he is here? The only question coming in everybody's mind. And gunjan, she is smilimg seeing him......

And he is none other than our samrat

Samrat comes and stoods in front of everybody.......gunjan is very happy seeing him.....

Armaan:hey dude tum yaha kya kar rahe ho....

By saying this he hugs him..

Benji:tum samrat ko jante hoo.

Armaan:ha ye mera best friend hai.......he came to completed his final year in USA........btw tumlog isse kaise jante ho

Diya:wo......wo...... actually

But b4 diya could say nething nupur bursts..............: ab yahan kya lene aaye ho tum Mr. Samrat shergill?

Bolo fir se kyun aaye ho hamare zindegi mein , kay wo kuch kam tha jot um karke gaye the. Jo si baar kasar puri karne k liye wapas aa gaye

He got completed shocked by sudden brust out of nupur

S: nupur tum mujhe galat samajh rhi ho

N: achcha , to ab tum sikhaoge k galat kya aur aur kya sahi.....................(closing her hands as if begging) samrat main tumhare samne haat jodke vinti karti hu plz yahan se chale jao , chale jao hum sab ki zindegi se aur khas kar................................meri bahen gunjan ki zindegi se

Before she could say further mayank stopped her......

samrat could not speak a single word. He simply walked away. As he was getting down the stairs he saw bauji downstairs staring at him. He just looked n surpassed without uttering a single word.........

on the other hand gunjan started to go behind samrat when nupur stopped her by holding her hand tightly......

gunjan(crying):diii plss mujhe jaane dijiye....mujhe samrat se baath karna hai.......plss diiii

nupur(angrily):gunjan tum kahi nahi jaaye gi.....wo tumhara layak nahi hai.....

gunjan(requesting):plss dii mujhe jaane dijiye......mujhe usse sirf ek baar baath karne dijiye........

nupur:gunjan maine mana kiya na.....

gunjan lost her temper....and by force she pushes nupur

gunjan:diii bas bahat hogaya......mujhe aur nahi rokh sakte.......aur mera zindagi hai....aur aapko koyi hak nahi hai mujhe rokh ne keliye........by saying this she runs to downstairs

on the other hand nupur was shocked to hear these words from gunjan and runs to the room......mayank and others follows her........

Samrat gadi mai beth nekeliye jaise hi darwaza khola koi peeche se kaha, "mujhe bina saat liye tum kahan jaa rahe hai"

Samrat turned .......................it was gunjan standing beside the door.......

saJan was looking at each other there eyes not at all blinking, as if time have stopped for them then n there.

after sometime Samrat slowly n slowly raised his arms, opened it.......

Gunjan didn't waisted a single more second and ran to him, hugging him wid all her strength. She felt complete today at last finding her rite place in samrat's arms, the place she was hankering for since ages, the only place which is her personal, so personal that no body can dare to dream of it in the dream...................she relaxed her face on his shoulder.

After sometime they break their hug......

Gunjan:samrat plss mujhe yaha se....le chalo.....mujhe yaha nahi rehna..pls samrat mujhe yaha se lechalo plss.......she has drops in her eyes.....

Samrat cupped her face.........

Samrat:gunjan shant hojaav.....aapne aap ko control karo......suna gunjan mai abhi yahase tumhe nahi lezasakta.......phele humme sabko samjana hoga...usske baad......aur mujhe tumhe sab ke samne apna na hai.....aur ek baath tumne nupur ke sath bahat rudely baath kiya.....ha gunjan maine sabkuch suna...tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha....tumhai usse maffi mangni hogi.....

Gunjan(surprised):samrat....... diii apke sath kitana rudely behave kiya phir bhi.....

Samrat:gunajn...nupur meri dost hai....aur phir uski bhi koyi galti nahi.....wo kuch bhi nahi janti hai........ye toh jahirsi bath hai usski jagah pe koyibhi hato tho aise hi behave karta....

Gunjan:toh samrat sab ko sach bate hai......aur phir mujhe yaha se lechalo......

Again cupping her face

Samrat(softly) ;maine kaha na gunjan mai sabke samne tumhe apna na chata hu.....par ye time sahi nahi hai'mai phir tumhe lene vapas ayunga......zaroor ayunga......kya tumhe mere upper bharosa nahi hai.....

Gunjan:kudh se bhi zyada tumhare upper bharosa hai.....

Samart:toh theek hai....mai abhi jaata hu........mai tumhe lene wapas zarur avinga.........

By saying this he again hugs her

After hug he turns to go when...........

Bauji:samrat.........

He turns back.........

Bauji comes near samrat and folded his hands.........

Bauji:samrat beta mujhe maaf kardo......mai aap dono ke sath bahat bada guna kiya

Samrat:plss bauji aap aise math boliye....aap mujhse bade hai'.

Buaji:beta abhi mai sabko sach sach bata ta hu.....and he started to go when samrat called him

Samrat:bauji

He turns back

Samrat:abhi nahi bauji.....mai vapas ayunga......phir sabko sach sach batauanga.........tab tak aap ke paas mera amanat rakhta hu........

After saying this he sits in the car......by seeing his chashmish once again.....he goes from there......

gunjan stood at the door for a long time after his car vanished out of sight....

Ok guys that it for today......I hope u liked it

Plss comment

Take care

Bye

Luv u divya

Edited by saidivya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
awesome update😊
Edited by kins103 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Luvd the update
thanks for the pm
cont asap
luv kritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
awesome update just loved it reallyyyyy
very nice
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Awesome update. Ur way of writing is different from waada. I liked it. Why sam hasn't took her with him? I'm confused. I have added u in my buddy list. Hope u got my request. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm. And keep pming me.

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