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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

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You are updating now.
Wow you must be crazy.
How can you write at such hours.
It is 2.50 AM right.
Forget typing I cant even open my eyes.
That's what makes you such a great writer.
You are superb awesome greatest.

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Preethi

@Preethi-Premi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Considering the kind of play boy Maan is in this FF, i agree to the fact that it will take time for him to realise his "LOVE" persay.

Still i am unable to digets the fact that he let another woman enter his room and use the bed that he shared with Geet. It stays in my throat, i am not able to swallow it. Him being aroused or what ever, I feel the slaps she gave him is just not enough.

End of day, I want only Maneet. Any other man or woman is fine to bring in the jealousy element. But once they are commited to each other i just cant stand another person between them. It leaves a bad taste in the mouth. I love your TM Deewangi Pyar ka ehsaas and almost all your FFs more than anything mainly because you put the thrid person right in their place. They never come between Maneet..

Loved the way you handled the situation between meera and maan. And the reaction from Maneet was just awesome Muski. Maan being so angry on self and not having a proper answer to Geet... And Geet being the perfect wife.... *sighs* what to say! Please update soon....