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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

lovely work jinil.
loved loved loved all the three..;D
you wrote it beautifully..
do continue soon...

love Mel..

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

My Jini!!!

Even I missed you like hell!

Initially I was surprised n wondered at the change of the user name but realised it can only be Jini

I was so busy! I'm so sorry! The thing is we rushed thru our portion n I finished my 11th in 6 months n now I'm in 12th while my other frnds are busy writing their 11th finals😆

The reason why I was so inactive

Cholly!

N I loved the treat! For me it was a 5 update treat!

Loved the MG wala too 😉 My new obsession you see 😆

Thanks for the PM!

Love you loads

Take care,

Ashu di

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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

gosh Jinil amazing work 👏 r u sure u r 14? 😆 kidding... really loved ur write-ups....will comment abt each one separately......

Unimaginable - the pain of ppl affected by natural calamities is really something others cld barely understand and u have very well written a shot abt it ...my heart really sank reading it... kudos 😊

My Awaited Saviour - nice one...its like what one wants in her ideal man 😳

Together Once Again - oh the kash one...for me its like a sneak peek in their future...amazing 😳

You Were Always There- omg Jinil...i had tears...no seriously... arsh love is something truly different... nice shot :)

and thanks for the PM....

Edited by m4manju - 14 years ago

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halimah/hima/limah

@pr1ncess12

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

amazing loved it

awesome

pr1ncess12 xxxx

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

jinziiii tenu ki ho gaya siii??

inniiiiii cute ladki iniiiii serious baatein kar rahi hai?

hahah :)

but it was soooooooo cute ;)

i think you should update faster though na jaan?

HAHA :)

Love,

Kriya <33

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nightstar

@nightstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

damn..the frst thng i read in the morning is such a melancholi thing...hey jinil plz dont give sad endings darling..i hate them...so wrtte a happy one..il commment then...tcz..

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: stargaze94
reserved!😃

editied:

about update on page 3: gosh that was amazing!!! and truly feeling bad for those in japan.
coming to your part ... goodness! the way you portrayed shilpa's emotions was marvelous!
and of course, the later bit whereby there was a happy ending was equally fabulous!
but i have one question kash and arsh have two separate story lines is it??


about update on page 2: you are 14! are you kidding me? you write such mature stories ... i am having a hard time believing you are merely 14!
it was a very sad update but i still liked it very much! life doesn't always have happy endings and that is what you wanted to show ... although i feel bad for shilpa, i am happy that armaan realised his love for his shona!😃


thanks for the pm and once again ... you are an amazing writer! you writing style has honestly intrigued me! good job and keep it up!😊

Hey Darling!!

Sorry I noe ur comment is screwed up there but its coz imma typing from my iPod so ig nore mistajes too.

Really??? Is it that hard to believe imma fourteen!! immaa mean i LOOK older but you havent even seen me!! My daddy says I am mature but need to be more mature!! Lo!! See the way I write is totally different from how I talk! Oh and yeah ArSh are from the show Dill Mill Gayye while when we use Karan and Shilpa we mean them in person not portraying any role. Where KaSh geniunely love each other while ArSh is KaSh playing characters!!

Imma really glad you like me writin style bbsz!! I am really appriciating your comments as they always bring a smile to me face!! I love ya!! Oh and Can I have your name?? Its kind of weird calling you stargaze94!!

Jinszzyy!!