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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

nice ones jinzi 😳 thanks for the PM.....will comment paragraph wise ....

For Just a Smile - aww such a cute one.... i imagined kash there 😳

Creamy Latte -cute one 😃

Friendship- hmm lovely lines used....nice one 😊

nice work Jinil...keep it up

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Urvi

@-screwed.UP-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

all of them are simply- awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thnx for the pm

do cont soon wtih ur work

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

I'm seriously not at all surprised by the way u wrote.....i told u long ago that ur writings are worth waiting 4 ri8?

and see i was soooo ri8

u wrote awesomely well......all the emotions,feelings etc were so beautifully portrayed that i seriously wonder if u r really 14?

But then age doesn't really matter when u write......and seeing ur writing i'm wondering if u r in love as well😊

thanx 4 the pm and keep writing...

love shreya

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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

somebody is on writing spree ;P Not that I mind..lol.keep them coming.. ;D
out of the three, I loved the creamy latte most..
I Just LOVED THIS LINE

"She is my biggest and deadliest addiction. Coffee… I am sure no one cares. I just need her.."

after reading such stuff, I have doubt about your age..Jinil aaj sach bata hi de.. lol...
awesome work girl..waiting for more..
thanks for the Pm

love Mel..

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Euphoria.

@Euphoria.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

jinszyyyyy!!!!! 😃

hehe sorry am just a litlle high right now! 😆 and sorry for not replying earlier.

goodness yes it is difficult for me to believe that you are 14 really! and hehe i know that kash refers to karan and shilpa (am a kashian too 😆) i was asking it in terms of the story 😆

well coming to your update all 3 were fantastic and i loved all 3 in different ways!

first one reminded me of a hopeless romantic guy waiting for his dream girl to call

the second one was extremely cute as well. i especially loved the bit where he says that if there was anything better than coffee then it was her ... awwww 😳

and the last one was actually my favourite ... i loved loved loved it to bits! 😳 it is something that happens to many couples who start off as best friends! i loved that bit where he makes up to her ... that was such an awwww moment 😳

honestly i have not come across a writer like you! really ... i love your style really really! it is soooo unique and fabulous! keep it up and i am jealous of you! wish i was somewhere near you in terms of writing but unfortunately i am not 😆 and yeah i am anu, sorry for not introducing myself earlier 😳 i won't say update soon because you have been updating regularly (another reason for me to love your ff) 😆 and thanks for the pm!

Edited by stargaze94 - 14 years ago

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samaira jain

@samaira39

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

ooooohhhhhh i simply loved this one dear........too good👏

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RUBA SIDDIQUI

@RUBA-SIDDIQUI

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

hey dear
amazing updates
liked it
thnx 4 the pm

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: stargaze94
jinszyyyyy!!!!! 😃
hehe sorry am just a litlle high right now! 😆 and sorry for not replying earlier.
goodness yes it is difficult for me to believe that you are 14 really! and hehe i know that kash refers to karan and shilpa (am a kashian too 😆) i was asking it in terms of the story 😆

well coming to your update all 3 were fantastic and i loved all 3 in different ways!

first one reminded me of a hopeless romantic guy waiting for his dream girl to call
the second one was extremely cute as well. i especially loved the bit where he says that if there was anything better than coffee then it was her ... awwww 😳
and the last one was actually my favourite ... i loved loved loved it to bits! 😳 it is something that happens to many couples who start off as best friends! i loved that bit where he makes up to her ... that was such an awwww moment 😳

honestly i have not come across a writer like you! really ... i love your style really really! it is soooo unique and fabulous! keep it up and i am jealous of you! wish i was somewhere near you in terms of writing but unfortunately i am not 😆 and yeah i am anu, sorry for not introducing myself earlier 😳 i won't say update soon because you have been updating regularly (another reason for me to love your ff) 😆 and thanks for the pm!

Heey Anu! (now that I noe ur name)

Thankx so much bbsz! See I may be 14 and write like a 35 year old but imma still a kid at heart. lol! N dude how old are you? If youre older I should be calling you di not bbsz. lol!

Yes the first one was the hopelessly romantic types, and the second was also the fun one. I personally love the second one because I love coffee and dream to meet the man who will be my greatest addiction. Imma glad you liked the last one. I would've changed the title from something so boring from Frienship but then I was like nah, just keep it simple.

You make me feel so good about my self. Really i am not so good as you say i am. N no need to be jealous if you read the pieces when I was 11 you would be like YUCK this is so gross, coz when I go read my one shots from back then I'd be like eww was this really me??

lol

N yeah I am trying to update regularily but Imma not sure if itll last because It is march break and then from monday imma back to school, i have a tought semester.

SO i want to write as much as I can for the remainder of time

N thnnx once again it really helps!!

Jinszyyy!!

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: m4manju
nice ones jinzi 😳 thanks for the PM.....will comment paragraph wise ....
For Just a Smile - aww such a cute one.... i imagined kash there 😳
Creamy Latte -cute one 😃
Friendship- hmm lovely lines used....nice one 😊
nice work Jinil...keep it up

Heeyy Manjju!!

Thanxx so much!!

I tend to imagine KaSh too after all they are my first love!!