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Posted: 19 years ago
adi must have a surprise waiting for natasha 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
hmmmmmm....could have made it her b-day, but then i would have to wait till midnight...

part 31...

Natasha gasped...the beach was surrounded by red roses, and right in the middle was a table set with candle light dinner....from a far distance she could hear violins playing, the sound was so peaceful, she felt that even the waves were swaying to the music...

adi turned round to face her, he took a red rose and gifted it to her....

adi: happy birthday Natasha(thanx kajal 😛 )...

Natasha took the rose and smiled....

N: adi, aaj meri birthday nahi hai....

he gave a big grin...

adi: meri bhi nahi....challe....

she laughed and followed him to the table....

adi: thumhe kise neh bathaya keh thum both kubsoorat ho?

N: hah, ajay neh mujhe both bhar kaha.... 😆

adi: (to himself) haiiii....jab jhooth bolthi hai, thab bhi kithne pyaari lagthi hai....

adi: ummm....dance?....

Natasha looked around her....

N: yaha?!

adi: come on....plzzzzzzzz....

she smiled and took his hand...

the violins started playing a bit louder as he put his arm around her waist.....at first they waltzed around the beach, then he held her at arms length and as he twisted her back in she 'crashed' into him (aww man....sounds like a car on the motorway 😆 ....this is meant to be romantic btw)....her hands landed on his chest and they looked into each others eyes(get it? 😉)...slowly adi put both his arms round her waist so their faces were less than an inch apart....she closed her eyes and rested her head on his shoulder....

adi: Natasha, ajay?

N: kaun ajay?.....uh, i mean....

adi lifted her face and gave a smile....

adi: shhhh...disha ne mujhe sab kuch batha diya...ajay picture se bhaar, aur adi andar....

Natasha blushed....suddenly it started raining....(filmi style 😉)

Natasha looked up and was about to run for cover when adi grabbed her hand...

adi: kaha jar rahi ho?

N: adi!!! barish ho rahi hai....

adi: tho...uss din bhi thum barish meh nach rahi thi....

Natasha blushed even more and looked down....slowly adi brought her closer, and when their faces were almost touching, he moved to the side and kissed her neck(can't go straight out on the lips 😉 😆 ....

k...thats enough now...not very good at romance so forgive me.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
OH Man!!!!! too good!!! 👏


please cont soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nibbles


k...thats enough now...not very good at romance so forgive me.....



what do you mean you are not good at romance? that was awesome!!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nibbles



Natasha blushed even more and looked down....slowly adi brought her closer, and when their faces were almost touching, he moved to the side and kissed her neck(can't go straight out on the lips 😉 😆 ....

😆

👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
hopefeully in the next scene it will b str8 on the lips 😉

haha

great part!!! 👏 😉 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwww...thanks for your comments guys....soz i couldn't update yesterday....

part 32...

Saighal house...

Gargi was on her mobile, walkign backwards and forwards....

G: hah....make sure ke woh muje kal thak miljaye...ok...

the doorbell went, and to her irrtitation none of the servants went to open it...

G: (muttering under her breath while limping to the door)sare kamchor hai...patha nahi kiske pese lethe hai....

she opened the door and was shocked to see......Disha and Dk!!!!!!!!

G: (giving them a dirty look) bekhariyo ke liye koi jaaga nahi hai...

Disha smiled...

Dish: phir thum humare ghar meh kya kar rahi ho....

Gargi laughed...

G: eh sonny, sambalo apni pathne ko....lagta hai ke sarak par rethe rethe iska deemak phir gaya hai....

"yeh sach bhol rahi hai"

Gargi turned round and was surprised to see ved and rano standing behind her, holding a file....

ved: mom....yeh ghar brother kah hai....

G: WHAT?!

FLASHBACK...ved walked into the living room (what do they call it in India? 😕) and saw that Gargi was sitting there watching T.V....

ved: mom....

she looked up,

G: bolo betha....

ved: om....woh...um, yeh papers sign karwane the...

G: kya hai yeh?

ved: mom, aap ko mujh par barossa nahi hai...

Gargi smiled,

G: parao...

without reading it she signed the papers(this is what i luv about indian soaps....they never read before signing 😆)...

ved smiled, thanked gargi, and left...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

Gargi can't beleive whats happening....DK and Disha smile at her and walk into the house...they both go upto the murti of bappa and thank him while Gargi looks on with a dazed face....

thats it for now guys....pretty boring, but don't worry....got something good prepared for Natasha and adi😛....
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Posted: 19 years ago
cant wait til da adi n natasha part! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
only one comment!!!!...oh well, best get on with it....

Part 33..

Disha was in her room sorting everything in the cupboard out when she felt two hands go round her waist...she smiled...

DK: disha...kithni mothi hogaye ho thum...

Disha turned round and smacked him on his arm...

Dish: DK!!! mh pregnant hu!

Dk: tho kya hua?...thum sirf saath mahine pregnant ho, aur abi se ithne mothi!....meh tho ketha hu ke thum ice-cream kahna band kardo...warna pregnancy ke baath meh thumhe kese utahuu ga?

Disha just gives DK a stare and turns round woth her arms crossed....he realises that shes angry, so he puts his arms round her again....

DK: sorry jaanu...meh tho sirf mazak kar raha tha....

she shrugs him off and walks a few steps....when suddenly she clutches her stomach and doubles up screaming!!!

DK: (running up to her) Disha...Disha..thum teek tho ho?....kya karooo...doctor ko bhualo?...koi medicine?...

Dish: (holding onto his hand really tightly) nahi...i...

DK:haan, haan...bolo...

Dish: ice-cream....

DK: teek hai..meh abhi ice...Disha!!!

Disha started laughing really loudly, but stopped at DK's serious face...

Dish: i'm sorry DK, meh tho sirf mazaak khar rahi thi...

DK came close to her and hugged her really tightly...

DK: phir esa mazaak kabhi math karna....agar thumhe kuch hogaya na Disha, tho meh marjaoga....

Disha just closed her eyes and hugged him tighter...

*****

some time later in the living room.....

Natasha and adi came and found the two couples (Rano, Ved, DK and Disha) sitting round and talking.....she smield and walked upto both her sisters and hugged them....

N: congrats!!!...ab aap ko apna ghar bhawas milgaya....

DK: nhai....yeh sab tho thumare waja se hua he....yeh sab tho thumara plan tha....ab baas Kanaka mujhe bhawas miljaye...

Natasha and looked at each other and smiled, and then she took out some papers from her bag...

N: yeh lijiye...

DK: yeh kya hai?...

N: jiju!...parke tho dekhiye....

DK looked at the papers, at first he was confused and then his face broke into a smile....

DK: yeh....yeh tho Kanaka ke papers hai!...

Natasha smiled....

N: aur saath me bhosle house, aur Diamonds forever bhi...

everyone looked at her and immediately started asking her on how she got everything back from vas...

N: bas, bas....ithne sawal poochna band kijiye....aapko bas ithna janne ke zarrorat hai ke aap ko sab kuch bawas milgaya hai aur ab woh vasudha aap ko phir kabhi thang nahi kare ghi....

everyone still had their suspicions, but they went straight out their minds when they saw Gragi coming up to them with a bag!!!!!

ved: mom...yeh bag?

Gargi looked around at all of them...

G: hum yaha se jaar rahe he, bhawas America...

ved: par....

G: nahi vedant....ab hum yaha nahi reh sakthe....

before anyone could say or do anything, she walked out with her luggage...

*****

this is a month later....dishas just started her eighth month....DK has managed to sort out all the mess with kanaka....everyone knows about adi and Natasha....Natasha has completely taken over the company which they started to destroy vas with, and know its running really well...

in Natashas cabin - Natasha is looking over the accounts with the manager....

N: mujhe kuch samaj nahi ar ra ha....humare ithne expenses kyu hai?

she looks at all the withdrawals and is shocked to find adis name....

N: yeh adi ne kithne pese liye, aur kyun?

M: ma'am, uno neh 2 lakh nikale...

N: 2 lakh?! kyun?

M: yeh nahi bathaya.....

Natasha is confused as to why he took so much money, he picks up her mobile and punches in his number....

N: hello, adi?

adi: hi sweetheart....kesi ho?

N: adi...pehle mujhe yeh bathao keh thum kaha ho...mujhe thumse kuch zaroori bath karni hai....

adi:uh....meh ho meeting meh hu...thum ik kaam karro, hotel paradise meh ajao, jab thak thum yaha ponchoo ghi, thab thak meri meeting katham hojaye ghi, ok?...bye...

N; par adi...

before she could say anything he disconnected his phone...she sighed, picked up her handbag and left....

****

at hotel paradise....

adi was standing in the reception waiting for Natasha when he felt two hand cover his eyes....he smiled, grabbed her arm, swung her around and quickly hugger ger tightly....

adi: i missed you sweetheart...

adi was smiling and still hugging her....he twas facing the entrance and was shocked to see.....

lol....i've written so much.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
nibbles that was really awesome, write soon. 😃 👏

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