Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar

First Previous

Page

118

Next Last

Frequent Posters

krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1071

finally....... uff.... atlst they met...............

i hv tkn a sign of relief nw........

well hey knw nw there is no turning back for them

Quote

SOLACEofEYES

@SOLACEofEYES

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1072

Very nice part
finally they met
plz update soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sana

@Vintagepeach

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1073

owsome update..
loved it so much...

Quote

Geet Malhotra

@SapphireFlames

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1074

OK. just caught up. Juggling between the past and present, i'm sure is a difficult task. But u seem to accomplish it quite well. 😊

So, finally the much awaited part is up next. The encounter. I have waited for it since the time i started reading your FF. 😃

Both part 21 and 22 were beautifully written, each emotion captured in words very serenely. I could picture things in motion in front of my eyes, literally. Kudos for such brilliant writings.

Update soon. 😊

Quote

Huner

@Be.edgy

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1075

Yay! Finally you updated! OMG! I freaking LOVED IT!! ❤️
Throughout the beginning.. All the memories of his kept haunting her, giving the sign that he's here; giving the sign of his presense near her. simply WOW! 😃
Even Maan felt it as He saw all those flowers.. It reminded him of her!
And coming to flashback.. OMG! His words.. to take the promise from Geet to wait for him. All those dreams of getting married to his love are going to be shattered after only 2 months.. 😭
OK! I literally had a lump in my throat thinking about the separation.. I dont know If I'll be able to handle it once it happens.. 😭
Coming back to Present again.. The hotel scene! Their restlessness, their urge to have just one sight of one another!! IT's like beyond Wow!! LOVED that scene! ⭐️
OMG!! The ending.. THEY MET!! Ofoooo How will I be able to wait for the next part Sonia..
OMG! What If he missunderstands her!!? How will his reaction be!!? What if HE says something to her!!? She has just started to live in present.. OMG!
MILLIONS questions are going around in my head.. And I'm just DYING for your next update!!
I desperately wanna read the next one..
PLEASE Soni.. Plzz update soon..
And OPPS! I forgot!! What an update!! Beautifully written Sonia.. Just Superb!!! 👏

Edited by Teenage.dream - 14 years ago

Quote

punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#1076

res (at school so can't read it now!!) lol

Quote

puth

@puth

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1077

lovely update Sonia.......
finally maaneet met.....but gal you stopped at the cliffhanger we have been waiting for😭

Quote

Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1078

Yaar i waited for a whole week for ur update it s nice no words its excelent. Waitin for next update

Quote

sakadafi

@sakadafi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1079

And they meet!!!! Let's see what the confrontation brings forth....I expect there'll be one or will she simply run???? hmmm 😍

Quote

maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1080

Ohhhhhh my master of emotions is back.....yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 😃

as always u have kept a perfect combo of happiness and sorrow with the past and present...

ok...we shall talk about the past first cause that's my favourite part....

firstly...the sunset was so so simple yet perfect...u probably know my weakness for sunsets due to Blind Love but this scene was just...perfect...i don't know how to explain but it was my fav scene in the entire update...

and second fav was when he proposed...oh..i loved it...

and then the scene with Nt when Maan walks in and tells her off...seriously..i was grinning like a fool.....

now coming to the present...

i loved the way they could feel a connection...u know how they felt a change in the atmosphere even though they didn't know the other was there....

i was so disappointed when geet fainted and she couldn't meet Maan...and i was like Sonia is so dead if they don't meet...

but they did meet....i love Vicky for that...

OMGGGG...did i tell u how excited i am about the next part?? i can't wait...

p.s i am not pulling ur leg...i chose the name : master of emotions very seriously.......but i won't use it if u don't like it...

Quote

1 ... 106 107 108 109 110 ... 118

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1008 page no 21

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3 (90%)

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼

NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to Shibani aka oh_nakhrewaali P R O L O G U E The whole house was decorated like a bride. The lights were shimmering,...

Expand ▼

SuVeer/RUhaani SS ~ Wedding Bells (ch 5 updated)

This is my first work on SuVeer/RUhaani, I hope you all will like it. The prompt is given by Koeli, thank you so much for that. I have narrated...

Expand ▼

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".

Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar - Page 108

Related Topics

Explore Topics