Ripped Apart ~2~ (Maaneet) part 22 updated - 28Mar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1081

That was Awsome but continue soon with the next part :)

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1082

awesome update

they finally meet

hope they don't he just does not walk away in anger or she act professional or run away

con't soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1083

OMG! OMG! OMG!!! This was so good!!!

I loved loved loved the beginning and the past....uff kya proposal tha...absolutely beautiful!!!

And they meet, well almost....but looking forward to the next update....fireworks for sure!!!!!!!! This is looking so good!!!!

Vicky...the sweetheart totally love him!

And maan...he's so sad and I don't like it.... standing by the cliff and all depressed remembering her....so glad he saw her!!!!

Loved it....please update soon!

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1084

i hope ur feeling better
wow love how maaneet

scene each other

poor geet didnt follow

her instinct when she

got vickrant is vicky

anu she is real a loyal

friend to geet uff what

wrong with arjun when

yu love someone yu can

go any length to help ur

lover happy but him he

snap at her

poor geet wanted to avoid maan

but to bad they saw each other

face to face but me wonder

why was vicky lough

super fabulous update

my dear real damn good

writer pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn

thanks pm

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raman1921

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1085

Loved it cannot wait to read the next update what will be mann reaction towards her please update soon...

Raman

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undisclosed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1086

you did it again....you are weaving this story between past and present so beautifuly....am i reading this right?...arjun and nt are partners?...or did i misinterpret his comment to nt?...i cannot wait for the next one now...maan and geet are face to face now...that is it i need to remind myself to breath...update soon please!

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zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1087

oh finally they met...and you stopped writing just in time

lovely update, update soonpls

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1088

Oh nooooooo... I hate cliff hanger.... I thought so many thng to mention in comment while reading this part but now i forgot everythng!!!! Anyways we r reading past wid everybdy flashbk but HP part i don't want to read in fb i want Maan nd vicky to fing out geet past i want maan to do sm hard work yaar.... Ofcourse won't tell him dat easily.....

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pop77

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1089

Sonia why stop again when Maan she her..Wow Maan propose her..I hope She still wearing chain..
I am thinking when Vicky stop her he ask about her health.tell her that why she come to work..He offer her to drop her home...when she said no..Maan tell her to OK we will drop you..
Maan wants to know more about her..

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1090

the starting of the update was superb..

loved geet's letter...

loved the way u stated geet's state of mind there..

i really hope arjun understands anu's pain...how can she be quiet when two of her favourite people are sad...

loved vicky wen he addressed himself as late vikrant singh khurana...😆

bechari geet ko bahut bada shock laga aur behosh bhi ho gayi...😆

loved the way u described the inner turmoil of both maan n geet...

loved every bit of the flashback...esp when maan comes n scolds naintara...

it was hilarious when anu told geet to avoid crash landing...

n maan's proposal was magical..loved every bit of it..their convo was too good

n as i was eagerly waiting for maaneet meeting...u ended the update...again a cliffhanger..

have a bit mercy on me yaar...atleast tell when will you update next part...i will be eagerly waiting for that one...plz sonia not a cliffhanger again..

anyways awesome update as usual..loved it to the core..eagerly waiting to read the next one..😊

Edited by millie_maaneet - 14 years ago