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Posted: 14 years ago
@sana , sorry dear, bahut mood off hain ,kal accha scene update karungi.
btw jyoti updated a beautiful scene read it.
@shruti kya muskan off line
oh god, aab kya
mein iha update ke liye wait kar rehi thi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

@sana , sorry dear, bahut mood off hain ,kal accha scene update karungi.
btw jyoti updated a beautiful scene read it.
@shruti kya muskan off line
oh god, aab kya
mein iha update ke liye wait kar rehi thi

yes dear
and I am waiting for her since last 1 hr 47 mins
its 1:22 am here
so am going to sleep now🥱
am hurt and 😲ed
she never does that
OK
I will take leave
Good Night
TC
bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
was feeling sad so wrote this mini..no.no..micro mini😆 scene...hope u like it...enjoy...

the night wind had something in it...like something special...like someone was near....someone special ...looking for her...
then suddenly the phone rang...
she began to wonder who will it be calling her at this time...
then she saw a pvt number flashing....
she instantly knew who it will be...
she said-- now u remember me...
he said -- sorry jaan...got busy...
she said -- maan....aisa kab tak chalega...u r always busy...no time for me...
maan -- my misti...mera har time to tumhara hai...
misti -- ye to bas bolne ki baat hai...
maan -- smiling -- accha bolo kya baat hai...mujhe yaad kar rahi thi..
misti -- nahi padosi ko..
maan -- geet...
geet -- aur nahi to kya...aap to kabhi door hi nahi hote to kaise yaad karungi...
maan -- knew what she was meaning to say but still he wanted to tease her -- matlab...
geet -- ooff...hoo...babaji ab main inka kya karun....pyar ki baatein bhi nahi samajhte...
maan -- babaji se baad me baat karna...pehle mere Q ka answer do..
geet - maan aap bhi naa...agar aap mere dil se door jaayenge tab hi to main aapko yaad karungi...
maan -- kya baat hai mrs khurana ...aaj bahut romantic ho rahin hai aap...
geet -- dhatt...aap bhi naa...waise aapko pata hai naa kal kya hai...
maan -- kal 4th april hai (this is the date when geet 1st aired)
geet -- wo to mujhe bhi pata hai...
maan -- kyun kuch aur bhi hai kya...
geet -- now getting angry -- nahin kuch nahi hai...n she cut the call...
maan knew exactly what was the next day..
here geet cursing him -- babaji ye maan bhi naa.....kal hamari first anniversary hai....n inko yaad bhi nahin.....
jab inko kuch farak nahi padta....to phir main bhi kyun sochun...chaddo...
suddenly light were gone off of the whole house....
geet got scared...she was always scared of the dark...,
she decided to go n check downstairs...since every1 was fast asleep....it was nearly 12 in the night...
geet -- koi hai.....geet tu bhi kya bol rahi hai...apne hi ghar me puch rahi hai ki koi hai kya.....tu bhi naa jhalli hai...
suddenly a pair of hands gripped her...one her mouth n another her waist...n someone said in her ears...HAAPY ANNIVERSARY MY MISTI...
she couldnt believe it...maan was there....she immediately turned n hugged him...n said -- AAPKO BHI....
suddenly the whole living room was lit...n it was decorated with her fav red roses n all the family members were there saying happy anniversay....
sh ecouldnt believe it...
geet -- aapko yaad tha...
maan -- tumhe kya laga...ki main apni zindagi ka sabse khubsurat pal bhul jaaonga...never....not even death...
she closed his mouth n said nodded in a no...
family -- agar aapka romance ho gaya ho to cake to cut kar lijiye...
every1 was laughing n geet was trying hard not to blush...
they enjoed the rest of the night...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

yes dear
and I am waiting for her since last 1 hr 47 mins
its 1:22 am here
so am going to sleep now🥱
am hurt and 😲ed
she never does that
OK
I will take leave
Good Night
TC
bye


ok shruti
Good night
tc
see u tomorrow
bye
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


ok shruti
Good night
tc
see u tomorrow
bye



gud nit dear....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
r u even updating or ....... u jst left the title updating......😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
Been waiting for age yaar x meri behen rehem ki jiya
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Posted: 14 years ago
di . . . i am sleepy . . pweej update quicky quicky😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

SPECIALLY TO LIGHTEN THE SAD DAY TODAY
~deewangi~
part 81

Rano stood there still watching him quietly. She knew the hidden truth behind his every sentence, every answer. Her heart bleed even more as she knew wat Maan felt. She could read Maan inside out she considered him more than her son. She loved him, cared for him, understood him, she won't be ashamed to say, she knew him more than she knew Geet her own daughter.

Maan read rano eyes, he knew she was disappointed. He looked away & went to the outhouse. He began working out, he punched & turned around to kick, he was getting angry now. He didn't like wat was happening in the mansion. He didn't regret anything, he rather felt thanking his love for everything, for being there for him, unconditionally like always. To his surprise he was not hurt, no pain.. he was angry really angry. His phone rang... he didn't know whose number it was, he didn't want to answer it. His phone rang again. He picked up at once - HELLO
Geet - itna gussa main kyun ho?
He sighed in relief immdediately in a different world - umm
Geet - mujhe missy ho rahi hain
Maan - har waqt tumhare aage pechen nahi ghoomten rah sakta
she innocently - kyun?
He almost laughed at her question throwing his head back.. he was used to her innocent sweet sweet things which filled his life.
Maan - aa rahan hoon. He said in a rude tone
She smiled & cut the call.
Rano stood at the door & kept looking at him, she couldn't believe wat she heard & wat she saw. She was seeing him happy. Maan turned to see her, he was relaxed, like nothing happened, like nothing bothered him, he had almost forgotten about rimi
Rano - unka phone aya tha
Maan - kiska?
Then he realized wat he just said
Rano dipped her head - kidnappers ka
Maan - umm
before Rano could say anything adhi came from behind - sir 10crs
Rano looked at Maan & then adhi.

Rano almost broke down with emotions & left from there, she was sad.. she felt bad, because some where she knew, he had drifted far away.
Maan - do as wat they say
adhi - umm
Maan - don't worry police will give u complete protection.
Adhi - sir

Later in the evening, adhi returned with rimi. She ran & hugged Rano & cried. She had some bruise on her hand & some on her forehead. Daadi called for the dr.
rimi - mama Maan??
Rano dipped her head & hugged her.
Rimi - woh mujhe se naraz hain kya mama?
Rano didn't know wat to tell her.
Rimi - unhe meri parwah nahi
adhi coldly added - parvah hain tabhi tho he paid 10crs to the kidnapper. Unki matahen pe ek sikhas bhi nahi aayen
rimi shook Rano - phir woh yanha kyun nahi hain?
Daadi - usse kuch kaam aagaya hoga
rimi ran to her room crying.
Dr came & checked her, gave her some painkiller & dressed her wounds. After the dr left, Rano came in with turmeric milk. She sobbed & had her the milk.
Rimi - mama agar woh shaadi nahi karna chahten tho, hum aapne ghar chalten hain, mujhe yanha nahi rahna, assen, unki behruki nahi sahi jathi
Rano hugged her.. still unsure of the situation.
MAANEET FLAT
Maan walked into the kitchen, Geet immediately jumped hiding something behind. He looked at her with questioning eyes. She shook her head & threw the paper away.
He turned his head in anger - tumhe kya zarorat thi usse dehkne ki?
She hugged from behind - mujhe koi pharak nahi padtha
he leaned backwards on her.. her palm slipped towards his shoulder pressing him closer. He held her hand. She softly kissed his back. He shrugged helplessly.
Geet - itni si baat ke liyen itna pareshan ho rahen the
he turned & cupped her face - I can't see u hurt
His feeling was almost out of control, his passion for her overwhelming him, almost to the point of him losing his normal caution. All he could think of was her happiness, because her happiness was his. As Maan's eyes locked on to Geet chocolate brown eyes she couldn't help her breathing becoming harder. He was holding her firmly against his hard body, she could feel his muscles bunch as he too began to breath heavy. Now his hand caressed the side of her breath and traced circles around the swell. She closed her eyes at the touch, her n**** puckered and hardened.
Maan - open ur eyes
she looked at him with dazed eyes, he wanted to be doubly sure that she was not hurt... he dipped to kiss her neck, sucked the sweet salty skin, he nibbled at the flesh as he realized her eyes where only filled with love.
His fingers explored, rubbed and teased her, nerve endings came alive with his touch, and she felt his lips on her skin adding to the pleasure as they made their way to the bed room parting their barriers. She shivered knowing there was more to come. Maan increased the pressure on her curves, his finger were pleasing her the way only he seemed to know how. Her n***** were even tighter than before if it was possible, his finger tips still traced around them.
She smiled longing for him. Seeing that smile gave him that little extra self control he needed. He claimed her mouth and her arms wrapped around him, running over the muscles on his back, her nails trailing as she moved across his skin. He moaned at the sensation, lifting Geet under her buttocks he lifted her above his hips and the thick head of his p**** entered. Geet moaned, he gasped and released their kiss, throwing his head back. Eyes still closed, he claimed her mouth again, nipping her lower lip and tasting her with his tongue. I can't hurt u he claimed her. she closed her eyes, so tightly she could feel her forehead wrinkle with the pressure.
Maan - Am I hurting you?
He asked in at most concern she didn't answer .. because she couldn't..and he began to withdraw from her body. Janoo she moaned pulling him closer.. u can never hurt me.. I love u love u a lot. .He kissed her lovingly.. he fell on her reaching their closeness..


PRECAP
Rano meet geet

~PREV PART 80 NEXT PART 82~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yayy me first!!! 😃 😃 😃
Luvly update---trying 2 get ova da sad epii😭😭
Y is dat rimi overreacting---she shud know by now dat Maan h8s da sight ov her
Rano is really stupid--doesnt a mothers heart know her daughter
Maaneet wer hott---even though Maan doesn't know her reality he can't see her hurt Awww
Glad dat adi spoke up 4 Maan wen rimi was askin
Nice precap--Wonda how Geets going 2 feel seeing her mum afta 11 yrs
Cont soon Xx...

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago

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