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~deewangi~
part 82

He asked in at most concern she didn't answer .. because she couldn't..and he began to withdraw from her body. Janoo she moaned pulling him closer.. u can never hurt me.. I love u love u a lot. .
He kissed her lovingly.. he fell on her reaching their closeness..

KHURANA MANSION

rimi was really scared after the whole kidnapping. She didn't expect brij to stoop such low levels. He actually kidnapped her & tortured her. She was terrified. She wanted to finish all this at the earliest & go far far away from all this. She had to put on act to get the whole property & money. Give every thing to Brij take her share & just finish of with all this. She now feared Brij, more than anything else. She couldn't sleep the whole night worrying.

Rimi had lost hope of seducing Maan, personally she didn't want to do it either. She was used being with men, all kind of.. she could easily make out when a lustful eyes fall on her. But she knew from day one she never appealed to him. But that was strange. The kind of reputation he had, he was supposed to be a playboy, then why he never found her attractive. Strangely he treated her with respect may because of the name she carried. That was something that moved her.. if he respects the name so much.. then... playing cheap with that name was some where hurting her, not that she was a person of high moral, but seducing Maan on geets name.. she rather move to handa hawali & take the whole property.

Next day Rano, noticed her restlessness & stress.
Rano - kya baat hain beta?
Rimi - mama mujhe yanha nahi rahna
Rano - aise kaise hum yanha se jaa sakten hain
rimi - Maan ke saat aise rahna..mama it hurts, she broke down crying..
Rano was not able to bear her pain. Rimi went to her room to pack their luggage.


Khurana Construction

Maan & Geet were in office. She couldn't stop drooling over him even now. She pretended to work but her whole concentration was on him. The more she saw him, the more she would giggle like a teenager. He knew it all, he just pretended not to notice, silently enjoying her drooling. They were so lost in each other, nothing else mattered. They didn't want logic, they didn't want reason to be happy, they didn't bother to answer to anyone. Her giggle, his silent smile, her looking at him & blushing, his constant reassurance she was fine, safe around him. He wouldn't spare a chance to kiss her.. when no one would be seeing. A small peck here & there. Cutely she would turn red when they would be alone, expecting him.. to be naughty already.

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They had the client meteing with Rahul again. Maan was irritated. He snapped at small small things. The whole staff was on high alert. When the meeting began
rahul gave on of the lop sided smile as Geet entered the cabin
Maan yelled at Geet - yeh kaun se file le kar aayen ho?.
Sasha was taken a back. Geet dipped her head & went to her cabin, she didn't come back instead send another file with the peon.
After the meeting sasha walked angrily to Geet cabin & smashed the file on the table.
Sasha - mk is heartless
Geet giggled - yes he heartless...
Maan just went pass her cabin. He didn't like it... how could she say that. He was hurt, those words pierced his heart like a needle. He clinched his fist & went to his cabin.
Geet smiled & looked at sasha - yes he is heartless.. kyun ki unka dil tho mere pass hain.
Sasha - pata nahi how u take it so lightly.
Geet held both her arms & turned her around - kyun ki main unki deewani hoon
sasha hit her forehead - sach main ho
Maan went off from the office abruptly. He went to the outhouse & began to practice his martial art. He worked out until his body couldn't take it anymore & still more. He screamed in pain..
Rano came to see him... he hugged her & brokeing down...
Maan - kya main heartless hoon?
Her voice stuck in her throat in a lump.. hearing him totally broken.
Maan - mama bolo na kya main heartless hoon?
She cupped is face & shook her head
he hugged her - phir usne aise kyun kaha
he moved away & hit his fist on the fall in anger - KYUN?
Rano - kisne beta
Maan - mera dil ne!!!
Rano knew he was not speaking about rimi.. may be someone else. She calmed him, sitting next to him & patting his back.

Later in the evening Rano wanted to know wat exactly was happening in maan's life. She went to the Maaneet's flat & opened the door with the spare key she had. The flat looked like home now, felt the warmth, she couldn't deny she felt like this only when Geet used to do up the place with all her love. Rano looked around ..& walked in curiously. She heard some vessels sound from the kitchen. She saw her standing & washing vessels..facing her back.
Geet - aap aagayen?
Rano was quiet
Geet - aise achanak se khanha challen gayen the? Kitna gussa hoten ho?
Rano yelled - agar woh gussa hoten hain, tho tum usse heartless kahogi? Tum hoti kaun ho, usse yeh sab kahne wali, usska dil dotne wali? Kyun aayen ho tum humari zindagi main? Ek taraf tumne meri beti ki zindgai barbad kar di..aur ek taraf Maan ka dil chalni kar thi ho..aakhir tume kya chahiyan??..
Geet knew it was Rano.. she immediately turned to say mama... Geet didn't understand why Rano said all that.. Rano looked at in shock.. Rano's eyes widen .. she couldn't say a word against her after seeing her.. even her heart began feel wat Maan's felt seeing her.. every thing about that cute little doll was Geet. For once she would have thought rimi is.. someone else.. but this girl.. she was surely Geet. But now nothing made sense.
Rano - tum kaun ho ? She asked in pain.. pain of turmoil, mother;s hearts ache.. the pain of saying those harsh words to her.. those eyes.. the pain only a mother could understand.. the strange paradox..
Geet ..main..main..tears welled down her eyes..
Rano couldn't bear this strange feeling towards her.. she just left from there.. now she understood why Maan seemed so helpless. When a mothers heart could feel she was Geet.. then Maan couldn't be blamed at all.

PRECAP
Geet missing
-PREV PART 81 NEXT PART 83-
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Brilliant part. loved it.
maan mis took geet word's . he missed the next sentence and think different.
loved geet- sasah bonding.
rimi and her drama. brij and dirty game.
both of them will dead when maan knw about their work
maan's pain shook rano and she went to meet geet.
without seeing anything see spoke harsh things but reality hit her when she seen geet.
now mother's heart react like maan's heart react.
but precap is scary.
hope geet will safe and sound and maan will find her.
I feared about brij . hope he will not see her .
pls update soon.
one more update.
cannot stay in peace after read the precap
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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finally

but what can Rano do every thing proves Rimi is Geet
this brain is lot stronger then heart
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank u for d update............................wow atleast Rano has seen geet now....................i hope she will get under d thick of thinggs 2 reveal who is d real geet.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ab ayega maza! Now maan will go real crazy! I know i know! Please update soon! Please Muski! Dont delay 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome👏............yeh maan bhi na puri baat toh sun leta........ so im guessing Rano didnt recognize her daughter(i meant her heart did but mind not accepting it think) tht why geet is missing..... poor geet 😭..........thanks for update 😛
Edited by komlika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
u r such a awesome writer
great update👏
continue soon😊

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