Love You Forever sajan ss updated pg 40 1/18/2012 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys thanks for the lovely comments....i want to clear that sajan are not married to different people. they were married but for some reason they got separated.... .i was thinking of a name for this ss and I'm stuck between two names zindagi ke rahe and pass ya juda we will always love eachother..pls help me with the name and pls give some suggestions...i hope u will like this next update.

when payal got home she put pari to sleep and then went to gunjan.
P; pata hai di aj na pari aur mere naye dost bane hai. do chote cute boys. jab main pari ko park le ke gaye the tab unho ne pari ko dekha aur baghe chale aiye pari ke saat kehlne. un dono ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha ke jaise voh pari ke bade bhai hai aur pari to unke saat bohot kuch thi. jab un dono ke papa kehnle lage ke ab ghar chal na hai to voh zid karne lage ke pari ke saat aur kehlna hai. par unke papa ne yeh keh kar mana liya ke kal fir park main aye ge aur voh dono ne mujhe se promise liya hai ke main kal pari ke saat par ao...aur pari ko unke papa ke saath bohot kush thi. jaise ke voh pari ke papa hai.
when gunjan heard that a tear escaped her eyes. and payal saw that.
P; di ap pls ro mat sab bohot jaldi teek ho jae ga. ab main khana bana ne chalti hoon. kuin ki agar malhotra ko pata chal gaya ke main yaha aye hoon to bohot badi problem ho jaie gi. bye and then kisses her forehead main baad main babas ati hoon.

then she starts to cook food and while she was coming malhotra comes. and goes straight to gunjans room.

M; arre gunjan tum yaha akheli kyun ho. arre main to bhul gaya hi gaya ke yeh to mera kiya huwa hai. and then starts to laugh. bechari gunjan tumhe koi milne bhi nahi ata meri sivay. arre gunjan tum hamesha leti kyun rehti hoon bore nahi hoti leti leti. chalo main tumhe bheta deta hoon.
then he makes gunjan sit by making her lean on the headboard of the bed. after that he gives gunjan another injection.
M: acha main khana ka ke ata hoon fir tumhe bapas leta do ga. see u later gunjan

then he goes and sits on the sofa where payal serves him food. but by mistake payal put too much salt and pepper. this made him mad. so he went upto payal and poured the hot food on her left hand. payal yelled in pain and her left hand got burned.
M: agae se dhyan rakh na ke khane main zada lun aur mirchi na ho. warna main left hand nahi jalao ga ishe bohot bura ho ga.
then he goes to gunjan and makes her lie down and he leaves

Payal was crying while putting cream on her burned hand. when she was done she was think that she will take revenge soon. and that then malhotra will not be able to do anything.

on the other hand samrat was thinking about pari. he was wondering shy he felt that pari was his own and how did he connect with her soo fast. then karan and angad came in.
A; papa
S;........
K; papa
S.....
A: papa kuch soch rahe ho ge
K; ha hum chal ke unhe choka te hai
A: ha chalo

they go and hug samrat. at first he got startled but then when he saw that it was karan and angad. he hugged them back.
S: tum dono yaha kya kar rahe hoon. sowe kyun nahi.
K; papa kya hum aj ap ke saath so sakte hai
S: ha
A: thanks papa
S: chalo
then samrat sits in the middle while karan and angad are on the ends with there heads in samrats lap. samrat starts to crease there heads
A; papa pari bohot cute hai na
S; ha bohot pyari hai
K; papa pata hai jab maine pari ko dekha tha tub mujhe na koi wierd feeling huwi thi
S: acha kaise feeling
A: jaise voh humari apni hai
S: acha pata hai muhe bhi vohi feeling huwe thi
K;aur payal didi bohot achi hai
A: ha papa bohot achi
A: acha papa se bhi zada
K; nahi apse zada nahi

then karan and angad get up and kiss samrat on the cheeks and samrat does the same.
A: papa hum kal paka payal didi aur pari se milne jaye ge.
S; ha jaye ge. ab so jao
K&A; good night papa we love u
S: good night my sweet babies.
then he kisses their forhead. and turns off the lights and falls asleep.

the next morning karan and angad woke up before samrat. and they ran out the room and quickly got ready. when they were ready they ran to samrats room and started to jump on the bed
K; papa papa
A: utto pls utto
Samrat wakes up and quickly holds them and starts to tickle them.
A laughing; papa pls bas
K laughing; ha papa pls bas
S: nahi main kyun roku ap dono ne mujhe sone nahi diya
A: sorry papa par humhe pari and payal di ko milne jana hai
S: itne subhe tori hon gi tumhari payal didi aur payal
K; arre ha hum ne to yeh socha bhi nahi
S: koi baat nahi. main ready hota hoon fir hum tumhari mumma ko good morning wish kare ge saath main
A: teek hai papa

both angad and karan wait for samrat to get ready. when he comes out samrat picks them up and kisses there forhead. and says ab chale
A&k; ha chalo
they go in front of a picture and its gunjans pic.
A&k; good morning mama
S: good morning chashmish. chalo ab mama lo good morning kiss do
A&K kiss gunjans picture and so does samrat. then he puts them down.
S: ab khana kaye
A; ha
K: mujhe bohot bhok lagi hai

they go and sit at the dinning table. when karan asks samrat a question
K: papa mama kab aiye gi
Samrat gets shocked by this sudden question because he doesnt know himself when his chashmish is going to come back.
S: bohot jald beta
K; par mama hai kaha
S thinking; beta main kud nahi janta ke tumhari mama kaha hai
S: mama ek bohot jaruri kam se bahar hai
A: par fir voh phone kyun nahi kar ti
S: kyun ki waha phone nahi chalta
K: oh. main baghwan ji se yeh pray karu ga ki mama jaldi a jaye
S;beta break fast chaldi karo
they all started to eat there breakfast. when they were done karan and anagad when to play in there room. when samrat was in his lost in this thoughts

the end......i hope u guys liked it.......dont forget to comment.....i will try to update longer next time
Edited by preety88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: preety88



thanks for liking....and i will tell u that gunjan will be fine.....i will pm u

👏No Problems..Thanks for adding me to the PM list..
I am sure Karan and Angad are not Samrat's kids he is just taking care of them.. Hopefully!!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: preety88



thanks for liking....and i will tell u that gunjan will be fine.....i will pm u

👏No Problems..Thanks for adding me to the PM list..
I am sure Karan and Angad are not Samrat's kids he is just taking care of them.. Hopefully!!! And Malhotra is Sheena's dad!
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: preety88



thanks for liking....and i will tell u that gunjan will be fine.....i will pm u

😊No problems.. I think Karan & Angad are not Samrat's kids.. He is just taking care of them.. Pari is SaJan's daughter and Malhotra is Sheena's dad.. This is their combined plan to seperate them! I am sure Gunjan will be alright.. Please continue soon!!😊
You are a superb writter👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Hi, this concept is so nice. I liked it. Who is this malhotra? Gunjan is in so much pain! And is pari sajan's daughter! I'm waiting eagerly to read the mystry. Is sam know that he is pari's dad? So many questions r running in my mind! Please cont soon. ADD ME TO UR PM LIST. Coming to title i like.... paas ya juda we always love each other. Don't forget to pm me. Do cont soon.
Edited by gnaneswari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Hey.. 😊

Sorry Preety I replied thrice.. The computer was not responding so I [ressed the post message thrice and it did so.. Anyways..
The update was awesome..
Now I know..
Pari, Karan and Angad are SaJan's kids...
Sam doesn't know about Pari maybe when Gunjan was expecting her they got seperated.. 😭Payal takes care of Pari and Sam of Karan and Angad..
Malhotra is someone who plays the role of the villian in Sajan's life and maybe is Sheena's dad.. Can be because he is old!!😕 And he injects some kind of wrong injection into Gunjan which pains her 😭
Continue Soon..
You are a Superb Writer!👏
Please PM me when you update the next!😊
- Nivriti😛
preety88 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: gnaneswari

Hi, this concept is so nice. I liked it. Who is this malhotra? Gunjan is in so much pain! And is pari sajan's daughter! I'm waiting eagerly to read the mystry. Is sam know that he is pari's dad? So many questions r running in my mind! Please cont soon. ADD ME TO UR PM LIST. Coming to title i like.... paas ya juda we always love each other. Don't forget to pm me. Do cont soon.



thanks......malhotra is the villan.....i will add u to my pm list.....thanks for helping with the title i like paas ya juda we always will love eachother
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SajanRox

Hey.. 😊

Sorry Preety I replied thrice.. The computer was not responding so I [ressed the post message thrice and it did so.. Anyways..
The update was awesome..
Now I know..
Pari, Karan and Angad are SaJan's kids...
Sam doesn't know about Pari maybe when Gunjan was expecting her they got seperated.. 😭Payal takes care of Pari and Sam of Karan and Angad..
Malhotra is someone who plays the role of the villian in Sajan's life and maybe is Sheena's dad.. Can be because he is old!!😕 And he injects some kind of wrong injection into Gunjan which pains her 😭
Continue Soon..
You are a Superb Writer!👏
Please PM me when you update the next!😊
- Nivriti😛


no problem...im glad all the confusion is gone...thank u but i dont think im a good wirter

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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
awesoooooome.......
fab......
loved it......
thanx for the pm.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyyyyyy preetyy

awwwsum update
ma realyyy relieved 2 read dat sajan were n r married 2 wch other onlyyy
n dis malhotraa..😡😡😡

cont soooooooooon
n
thnx 4 d pm
Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 14 years ago

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