Love You Forever sajan ss updated pg 40 1/18/2012

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i had an idea in my mind for sometime and today i finally decided to write it...i really hope u like it...i am not going to give a cs. so here it goes

a girl about 18 yrs old was working in the kitchen. when she was done she goes in a room and picks up a baby girl that is about 4 months. then the l girl goes to a different room, where a lady is lieing down. the girl goes and sits next to the lady.

G; aunti dekho aj pari apke sath kelhne ayi hai.

the lady didnt move a bit. she was lieing there lifeless. when suddenly a old man comes in and yells: payal tum yaha kya kar rahi ho Pari ke saat

payal scared; m..ai.n. m..ain v..v..vo

Man; main main kya kar rahi ho. maine mana kya tha na pari ko gunjan ke samne lane ko (yes guys the lady is gunjan).

p: sorry mujhse se galti ho gayi

M; teek hai teek hai, ab yaha se dafa ho jao.

payal quickly takes pari and leaves and goes to paris room and starts crying and starts talking to gunjan picture: sorry didi main ap ko teek karne ke liye kuch nahi kar sakti. par magar main fir bhi koshish karu gi ke ap teek ho jae. main malhotra uncle ke samne kuch nahi kar sakti par jab voh yaha nahi ho ge to main ab ko teek karne ki koshish karo gi. par mujhe malhotra uncle ke sari bate mani ho gi varna vo mujh par shak karne lage gi.. par main bohot jald ap ko teek kar doon gi

in gunjans room

the old man goes to gunjan and says; ab kya karo gi gunjan. tumhe bachane ke liye koi bhi nahi hai, Gunjan ji. he starts laughing; tumhara samrat bhi tumhe bacha nahi sakta kuin ki ushe pata bhi nahi hai ke tum kaha hoon.

then he takes out an injection and give it to gunjan. then he goes outside and yells for payal to get food for him. payal quickly goes and does as he says. when she brings the food for him. he tells payal that she better not repeat this mistake again. and that pari should never go near gunjan. payal says okay

when malhotra leaves pari goes to gunjan and says didi ap paresan mat ho main pari ka pura kayal rak rahi hoon. main ushe kuch nahi ho ne doon gi.

then she wait for sometime to make sure malhotra will not come back. when she was content. she takes pari to the park.

at the two little boys about 5 yrs old were playing with eachother and haveing fun. when they saw payal with pari they though pari was really cute. so they went up to her.
boy 1; HI main karan ho

boy 2; hi aur main angad. hum dono twins hai. ap ka naam kya hai

P; hi bacho main payal hoon aur yeh hai pari

K; payal didi kya hum pari ke saat kehl sakte hai

A; ha pari bohot cute hai

P; kehl sakte hoon magar pehle mujhe dosti karni pari ge

K; teek hai friends

P;friends

A; chalo ab kehl te hai

P; chalo

the three played with pari and were having fun because pari laughed at everything karan and angad did. and karan angad started to enjoy playing with pari. they were like they know each other since a long time

P; karan angad main abhi aye tum dono pari ka kayal rak na

A; teek hai didi

K; magar ap jaldi ana

P; main abhi do minutes main aye

when pari goes we see a guy who is look around for tensed. but when he sees someone he gets happy and goes over to them.

G: karan angad tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho. main kab se tum dono ko dund raha tha

K; sorry papa, hum pari ke saath kehl ne lage the

A: ha papa dekho na pari itni pyari hai

G: pari? tum dono akele is bachi ke saath kya kar rahi ho

K; papa payal didi humare saath thi abhi kahi gayi hai

A: aur humhe pari ka kayal rakhne ko bohla hai

G: teek hai ab mujhe pari do

and karan pari to them. the guy has a feeling that some how he knows pari. but in the mean time payal comes.

P; karan angand yeh lo tumhari liye chocolates

K A: thanks didi

P; ur welcome

A: didi yeh hamari papa hai

P; hi main payal

G: hi aur main samrat (yes the guy is samrat)

P; ap ke bache bohot cute hai

S: thanks aur apki beti bhi

P; pari meri beti nahi hai meri didi ke hai.

S: oh sorry.

P; koi baat nahi. saab ko yahe lagta hai ke pari meri beti hai kuin ke main hi pari ka kayal rak thi hoon kyun ki didi ki dabiyat teek nahi hai

S: sorry.

P; its okay

A: papa humhe pari ke saath aur kehlna hai

K; ha papa

S: bacho abhi hume ghar jana hai kal kehl lena teek hai

K; payal didi kya ap kal ayie gi

P; paka ao gi

A: really thanks

then karan angad hug payal and samrat gives pari back to samrat. and they all leave to there house

i hope u guys like it...and if u want me to pm you pls tell
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me 1st😊

res
luvd it n diff concept.....cont soon
hey ya wht m reading ????? sam n gunji both r married bt with sum1 else ? or nything else ????
welll ll kno abt it soon
hope sajan will b together soon....😊
thnx 4 pm....n ya add me 2 ewr pm list
waiitin 4 nxt part
Edited by avani_9 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome......
fab..
loved it......
thanx for the pm......
missing my SAJAN so much......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG.......!!!!!!!!!
awesum concept preety.......luvd it......
whu is that malhotra?
& r saJan married 2 each-other or 2 diffrent people......
aww.....my gunji is in so much pain.....hate that malhotra......😡
hope all bcums well soon.......
give a title 2 ur SS dear.......dnt keep it untitled......its just a suggestion hope u din feel bad......😳
waiting 4 the story 2 unfold......mind-blowing concept......

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GT 2 PM ME.......

w8ing eagrly 4 the next update........do cont soon......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: avani_9

me 1st😊

res
luvd it n diff concept.....cont soon
hey ya wht m reading ????? sam n gunji both r married bt with sum1 else ? or nything else ????
welll ll kno abt it soon
hope sajan will b together soon....😊
thnx 4 pm....n ya add me 2 ewr pm list
waiitin 4 nxt part



thanks for likeing...sam n gunji are not married with sumone else..i will try to cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ekta_monaya

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG.......!!!!!!!!!

awesum concept preety.......luvd it......
whu is that malhotra?
& r saJan married 2 each-other or 2 diffrent people......
aww.....my gunji is in so much pain.....hate that malhotra......😡
hope all bcums well soon.......
give a title 2 ur SS dear.......dnt keep it untitled......its just a suggestion hope u din feel bad......😳
waiting 4 the story 2 unfold......mind-blowing concept......

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GT 2 PM ME.......

w8ing eagrly 4 the next update........do cont soon......😊


thanks.....malhotra is the bad guy......sajan are not married to different people.........
i am still thinking for a title but i have one in mind its Zindagi ke rahe....and dont worry i didnt feel bad....thanks for likeing.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: preety88



thanks for likeing...sam n gunji are not married with sumone else..i will try to cont soon

ye ye ye nw m relex...bt update soon...can't see gunji in pain
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesome......

fab..
loved it......
thanx for the pm......
missing my SAJAN so much......



thanks for liking.....im missing sajan a lot too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: avani_9

ye ye ye nw m relex...bt update soon...can't see gunji in pain



lol.....i probably will update on the weekend.....i didnt go to school today thats why i posted this ss today....i cant either but everything will be alright soon

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