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Debolina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

its ok hafsah....:)
evry1 makes mistakes...!!

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ZaryabJuhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Nice update 👏sorry for late 😳

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

hey friends!!! im very happy to see that u r liking my updates... thanks aloot for ur lovely comments!!🤗 they mean aloot to me.. here's the next update.. so read n enjoy..

PART- 5

shaam ko naintara ne geet ko call ki.. but geet ne attend nahin ki..
Naintara: lagta hai k geet ab tak naraz hai mujhse..(sad) ab main kya karoon?? arjun ko call karti hoon..
arjun's phone rang..
Arjun: hye naintara!!
Naintara: arjun! i want your help..
Arjun: kya hua naintara??
Naintara: yar geet is very angry with me aur woh ab meri call bhi attend nahin kar rahi..(sad)
Arjun: awww.. naintara! dont be sad.. geet ka to tumhein pata hai na.. kal tak dekhna theek ho jaegi..
Naintara: i hope so..
Arjun: ab tension lena band karo aur chill karo yaar..
Naintara: (smile) ok.. thanks!!
the next day:
next day, sab friends ek sath college aye.. maan n geet both were angry with each other.. when they enter the college, they didnt notice each other n went to class..
geet n maan entered the class..
Romeo: hey maan!
Maan: hye..(angry)
Dev: yar maan ab to apna mood theek kar le..
Romeo: han maan plz ek bar naye friends bana k dekho.. hum bhi to kabhi naye friends thay na!!
Dev: ya maan!! plz maan jao na..
Maan: (smiled) ok!!
all the friends become very happy..
whereas on geet side..
Naintara: good morning geet!!
geet came n sat silently...
Naintara: plz geet!! ab gussa choro.. plz
Arjun: han geet!! ab bas bhi karo na.. naye friends bana k dekho to sahee, boht maza ayega!!
Geet: (smiled) ok! agar tum log itna force kar rahe ho to try karne mein kya harj hai..
Arjun n Naintara: yippeee... its the party time!
Naintara: to chalo aao hamare sath, hum tumhein naye friends se introduce karate hain..
Geet: ok.. lets go!!
Naintara: hey guyz, wass up?? acha suno main tumhein ek awesome news dene ayi hoon.. guess what????
Romeo: what??
Naintara: geet friendship k liye maan gayi..
Dev: hamare paas bhi ek good news hai.. k..
Naintara: what?? batao bhi
Dev: maan bhi maan gaya.. hai na brilliant news??
Naintara: wow yaar!! fantastic.. acha chalo baatein boht ho gayi.. main tumhe introduce krati hoon geet se..
Romeo: ok..
Naintara: geet! yeh romeo hai.. boht masti karta hai..
Geet: hye romeo..
Romeo: hey
Naintara: yeh dev hai..
Geet: nice to meet u..
Dev: same here..
Naintara: tum maan ko to janti hi ho..
Geet: (whispered) es ko kaise bhool sakti hoon..
on the other side..
Dev: aao maan main tumhe sab se introduce karaun..
Maan: maan singh khurana kisi introduction ka mohtaj nahin hai..
Romeo: yaar aa na..
Maan: huh theek hai..
Romeo: maan!! yeh naintara hai..
Maan: hey dear!! nice to meet u..(flirting)
Naintara: (sharmatey hue) hey maan!!
Romeo: aur yeh arjun hai..
Maan: hey buddy!! wass up??
Arjun: hey..
Romeo: aur geet ko to tum jante ho..
maan aur geet hand shake karne k liye tyar hi nahin thay..
Romeo: hey guys, bohat hua! chalo ab hand shake karo..
Maan: hmm...
Geet: (thinking) hmm.. ek baar friendship karne mein kya jata hai.. waise thodi mistake meri bhi thi..
geet ne hath aage barhaya phir maan ne bhi barhaya.. n then they became friends..
Naintara: yaar ab to party banti hai.. aj raat ko kaisa rahega??
All friends: yipppeeee...
Dev: but party dey ga kon??
Arjun: obviously maan aur geet.. dono ki friendship ki khushi mein jo party ho rahi hai..
Maan: acha beta! abhi se lootna shuru kar dia..
Arjun: friends to hote hi lootne k liye hain..
Naintara: to bas pakka!! aj raat.. ok??
Maan n Geet: hmmm.. ok! tum logo se jaan churana itna aasan thode hi hai..(joking)
everyone was laughing, teacher came..
Students: good morning sir!!
Teacher: students kal dance competition ki last date hai.. aur abhi tak koi entry nahin.. thats not good..
Romeo: sir maan aur geet ki jodi kaisi rahegi???
Geet: romeo ye kya keh rahe ho..
Naintara: han sir.. geet to boht se prizes bhi jeet chuki hai dance k liye..
Geet: (staring) naintara!!
Dev: aur maan bhi to har saal prizes win karta hai.. dono ki jodi ko koi takkar nahin de payega..
Teacher: i think thats a nice idea..
Maan: but sir...
Teacher: no but.. i have listed u n geet as a jodi for the dance competition..
Naintara: yipppeee!! ab to double treat..
Geet: chup kar naintara! tujhe to bas hamesha treat ki pari rehti hai..
Arjun: guys, be positive yaar!! ho sakta hai tum log jeet jao ye competition..
Dev: u will definitely win..

friends! abi tak bas itna hi.. plz press the like button if u like it n if u dont like it, feel free to criticize.. n plz do comment.. they mean alooot to me..😃
thanks,
hafsah

Edited by dollie16 - 14 years ago