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ZaryabJuhi

@zaryaabJuhi1b8

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

awesome update dear....loved it so much...
🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Edited by zaryaabJuhi1b8 - 14 years ago

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: cue1
Awesome FF
Please add me to your pm list and update sooon
😊

hey dear!! thanks alot for liking it..
i have added u in my pm list..😃

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: geet06
hey due to some error i couldn't hit d like button...sry
But i like ur ff...
N dance comptition!!!!....wow
Kurban hua ki yaad aa rhi h...

its ok dear!!
im happy that u liked it..😊

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nazsij

@nazsij

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

it was good yaar.continue soon.thanks 4 pm.

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

hey friends!! im very very happy coz i have now become a goldie.. yippeee n thanks aloooot for liking my updates n also thanks for the comments!! here's the next update.. hope u like it.. so read n enjoy..

PART- 6

At night:
party ka time ho gaya tha aur abhi tak maan aur geet ne koi venue select nahin kia tha.. maan ne geet ko call ki..
Geet: hello!!
Maan: hye geet!! maan here..
Geet: han maan bolo..
Maan: woh geet tumhe yaad hai na k aj party hai..
Geet: oh babaji! main to bhool hi gayi..
Maan: kya??? tum bhool gayi??
Geet: han galti to insan se hi hoti hai na..
Maan: har galti sirf tum se hi kyun hoti hai??
Geet: main ne kaha na k galti ho gayi.. ab meri jaan lo ge kya??
Maan: huh.. galti!
phir maan ne cell off kar dia..
Geet: hello hello.. maan..
but the cell was off..
Geet: kitna badtameez hai.. ek to main ne us se friendship ki aur mujhe tewar dikhata hai..huh
whereas maan was very upset as he hadnt decide any venue..
Maan: main to samjha tha k geet venue decide karegi but.. main kaise bhool gaya k us mein attitude bhara para hai.huh
on the other side, all the friends were very excited..
Naintara: yippeee.. party! but dress konsa pehnu??(confused)
geet ko call kar k puchti hoon..
she called geet..
Geet: hello!(angry)
Naintara: hye geet.. yr tu phir gusse mein.. khair to hai na?? kya hua??
Geet: kuch nahin..
Naintara: bol na..
Geet: main ne kaha na kuch nahin..
Naintara: acha jaisi teri marzi..
Geet: han bol tu ne call q ki thi??
Naintara: yar wo mujhe dress ki samajh nahin aa rahi hai.. plz help kar na!
Geet: tujhe hamesha yehi problem hoti hai..
Naintara: acha bata konse colour ki dress pehnu??
Geet: black pehn le.. boht cute lage gi..
Naintara: aww.. thanks!!
Geet: acha ab sharmana band kar.. jaldi se tayar ho ja..
Naintara: tu ready ho gayi??
Geet: main party mein nahin aa rahi..
Naintara: (shocked) kya tu nahin aa rahi?? kyun??
Geet: bas mera mann nahin hai..
Naintara: mann nahin hai ye kya baat hai.. main tujhe lene aa rahi hoon.. jaldi se ready ho ja, main to tujhe sath le k jaungi..
Romeo: aj to ladkyan mujhse impress ho hi jayengi..😆
itne mein dev came..
Dev: tu phir ladkyon ko impress karne k chakkar chala raha hai..
Romeo: tujhe kyun itni jaleousy ho rahi hai??😉
Dev: ja main tujhse jaleous hoonga.. mujhe aur bhi boht kaam hain.. main teri tarah farigh nahin hoon..😆
Romeo: huh.. jal kookra😆
Romeo called arjun..
Arjun: hello!!
Romeo: hey dude.. wass up?? party k liye ready ho??
Arjun: party bhi bhala main kabhi miss kar sakta hoon.. ofcourse im ready..
Romeo: thats great! chal party mein miltey hain..
Arjun: ok dude c ya..
on the other side maan was worried coz koi acha jaga to mili nahin thi jahan pe wo party kar sakein.. then us ko yaad aya k uska ek friend ek club mein dj hai.. uska name yash hai..
Maan: shayd wo kuch kar sakey..
maan called him..
Maan: hello yash!
Yash: yes who is dere??
Maan: oye bhool gaya apne friend ko..
Yash: oh.. maan!! tujhe kaise bhool sakta hoon..
Maan: han tabhi tu meri awaz bhi bhool gaya hai, hain na??
Yash: maan, tu bhi na!! acha bta kya baat hai??
Maan: mujhe tere club mein ek party rakhni hi aur wo bhi abhi urgent..
Yash: abhi?? itni jaldi?
Maan: han kuch bhi kar bas jaldi kar.. meri izzat ka sawal hai..
Yash: acha main kuch karta hoon.. magar kam se kam ek hour to lage ga..
Maan: chal theek hai.. but ek hour mein ho jana chahiye..ok??
Yash: ok. jaisa apka hukam..😆
maan ne sab ko call ki..
Maan: friends, baat aisi hai k party zara late ho gayi hai.. to tum log ek hour late ana..
Naintara: late ho gayi??
Romeo: hmm..
Arjun: chal theek hai.. c u!
Dev: ok..
Naintara reached geet's home.. n saw that geet was sitting n watching tv.. n she was not ready..
Naintara: geet! tu abhi tak ready nahin hui??
Geet: main ne kaha na main ne nahin jana..
Naintara: tu seedhe tareeke se ready ho ja warna main dadaji ko bula lungi..
naintara dadaji ko bulane hi wali thi k..
Geet: acha acha! main ready hone jati hoon but plz dadaji ko matt bulana..
Naintara: acha phir ja jaldi..
Geet: babaji..
naintara was laughing at geet..
jab geet ready ho k ayi to she was looking like a princess.. naintara to usay dekhti reh gayi..
Geet: kaisi lagg rahi hoon main??
Naintara: wow.. awesome.. wonderful
Geet: thanks! mujhe pata hai k main boht beautiful lagg rahi hoon..😉
Naintara: geet tu bhi na!

friends, abi tak bas itna hi.. aur next part boht interesting hoga.. so dont miss the next part.. dont forget to press the like button.. n also do comment..
thanks,
hafsah

Edited by dollie16 - 14 years ago