OS ~A Desire to end~ Last Part..pg 15 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Am back......
Next part.... thanks for all your response...and comments.....

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Part 3

Its sun rise... Geet woke up ...stretching her hands and yawning.....Her eyes searched for Maan... but he is not in the room.... She got up quickly...and went down....but he was nowhere to be found...she enquired nakul....He said that Maan left office early....she wondered ...what happen to him and why suddenly....she called Maan....but he didn't respond.... she got worried and called to the office.... adi said that Maan left for an important work outside....Geet then realised that she want to make today night very special....so went to her room and threw all her saris outside and started to think what to wear....then someone knocked the door...It was nakul...he was carrying some gift pack...Geet got curious and opened and found a grand beautiful sari sent by Maan...



So this is the saree...




It was a beautiful red saree.....Geet really loved that saree.....then there was a note....

"My dear loving wife....I love you...

Get ready by 7... i will send you a car...

Your Maan.."

Geet blushed reading the note.... she soon got ready and was turning the clock to reach 7....

It was a long wait for her..... some on the door knocked and it was the driver.....she went down and got inside the car....Soon car stopped at a Punjabi daba....Geet's face was glowing like a moon....She went inside and saw Maan sitting....Maan looked at geet and his eyes were keep on staring at the beauty of geet....he did not even moved his eye lids....He was watching each and every move of geet...She came near and waved hands before his face...then he came back to his conscious...and both of them smiled....

Geet.."Maan....thank you soo much am soo happy Maan....Love you..." Maan smiled and said..."Geet for your smile i will do anything......anything even if it a impossible thing...i will make it possible." Geet blushed....They ordered the food and Geet has a masti time in the daba...

After a fun And masti time....Both of them reached home....Maan was keep on watching geet while walking....his hands were around her waist...holding her very tightly.....they reached their room....when geet opened she can't believe her eyes....Room was decorated with red roses and candles were around the room....Giving a romantic atmosphere.... Full room was covered with Maan and Geet photos....Marriage and everything.....Geet's eyes filled with tears watching the room....she turned and hugged Maan...Geet..."Thank you Maan....I love you..." Maan..."I love you to geet..."

He lifted her face and gave a passionate kiss on her lips....After breaking a long kiss....Geet moved away from maan.....blushing.... she went and stood near the window...Maan came near her....She could feel the presence of Maan....very close to her....He slowly moved his hands around her bare waist....Butterflies started to move in her stomach....He moved her hair and moved his fingers slowly on her back...his fingers reached her shoulder and then he grabbed her neck...he then started to kiss her neck....very slowly and smoothly.....Geet started to breath very hardly.....she then moved towards maan facing him....

Now she took a step and kissed Maan all over his face....and she started to remove the buttons of Maan's shirt...She moved her hands on his perfect abs...This move of geet Made maan wild and he pinned her towards the wall and looked deeply into her eyes... started to taste all over her neck wildly...He moved his lips all around her neck and shoulder...he took her hands and kissed her arms and fingers.....She moaned out of desire.....he then removed her sari ....while removing...she moved away from Maan looking at him seductively and went inside the washroom....her full sari was removed....She smiled at Maan and He followed her...He hold her hands and banged her towards the wall of the wash room....He moved his finger around the navel of geet....she started to have tingling feeling...Maan enjoyed the each and every reaction of geet....then suddenly shower opened.... they both got wet in the shower.....water was flowing over both of them....

Maan took her hands and brushed it with his lips holding her waist with one hand...very tightly.......He turned her face towards him and hold her face in his both hands.... geet closed her eyes....He kissed her forehead ...her eyes .... her lips and her neck...he moved down and kissed her waist...tasting her smooth skin....Geet was breathing very hardly and she softly said.."Maan..." out of passion....and then pushed him away and came out of the washroom....



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ramahesh thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
it very nice n 😉
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Awesomeeee update
loved it
Amazing
hayee soo HOT and passionate
still ☺️ the saree was beautiful
love the part
cont soon
thank you

553993 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Hawttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt update :D
Love it So much
Con Soon :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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My comment is just for the saree its was an amazing dizgin it was so betiful just loved it OMG it was so amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
great part, very hot and sensual!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
nice........ continue 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️well written!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful one love it pls cont soonnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey loved it..do continue soon...

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