OS ~A Desire to end~ Last Part..pg 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
awesome update
loved it
sari was fab
haiiiiiiiiiiii so hot
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
I'm loving it.......can't wait for the next part......don't make us wait too long 😳
Can u add me to ur PM list.....Thanx 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
hayeeeeeeeeeee this is sooooooooooooo hot and maan's surprise wowwwwwwwwwwwww
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Superb update hasini..n man what a saree 😍

Great work.. thanks for the link..n sorry for a late comment dear 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow this is v good!
upd8 soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome parts dear
loved all of the parts
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sooooooooo sorry for such a delay....her is the last part of my OS... was having my exams...
Note: Only 18+


Part 4

She took a towel and started to dry her hair ....Maan came out and watched geet with hunger in his eyes....he went near her and took the towel in his hands.... he then started to wipe the wetness gently with the towel.....She took the towel from his hands and did the same....both were lost at each other....He then stopped her by holding her hands.....He moved her closer to him as her chest touched him....He moved her hair behind her ears and removed her ear rings she was wearing.....after removing...her kissed her ears....then he came towards her hands...where she was wearing bangles....he removed on by one and he kissed her hands....He then moved his hands towards her neck....he removed the chain she was wearing and he slowly moved his finger around her neck.....Making geet tickle....

He then turned her and he took both his hands and hold geet's waist and slowly moved his hands on her perfect curves....he then moved her hair front and removed her single strap of the blouse....then his lips moved smoothly on geet's beautiful back....He traveled from her back towards waist....Geet moaned and passionately said.."Please Maan"...Geet then moved away....making him more wild....while she was moving away... he hold her waist and pulled towards him....

He started to place many kisses on her neck....brushing it with his lips....He started to taste skin starting from her back....and turned her towards him....and He tasted her neck and travel towards her navel....she cannot handle the hotness of Maan's kisses.....she uttered his name many times....He then placed a kiss on her navel....very hardly.....He then moved towards her face...

She ran away from Maan and went to the washroom...and closed the door..... Maan knocked the door...."Geet....kya hua....Open the door...."

Geet..."Maan.....wait...thoda intazar kijiye...."

Maan.."Kyaa..."

he got annoyed and sat in the bed....after few minutes the door opened....His eyes didn't believe what he actually saw....Geet was wearing a t shirt top of Maan....he perfect legs were visible.....she seductively looked at Maan...standing near the door....Maan's feelings towards geet.... aroused and he moved towards geet....he then lifted her....

While carrying towards the bed....he said...."kya baath hai Mrs.Khurana....tumahara himmat baad chuki hai..." ....saying this he smirked. ...Geet.... "Han....Mein Mr.Maan Singh Khurana ki biwi hoon....to atleast tini himmat hoti hai na..." she also smiled saying this...

He then placed her on the bed....he then took the rose petals and covered whole body...He removed his shirt and moved over geet...he went to the ankle blew the rose petals and kissed it....he then travelled his lips from her ankle towards her legs....He came towards her face...He removed the rose petals from her eyes with his lips....he then gently kissed her eyes....he then came towards her nose...he kissed it....then he came to her lips....he gently removed the petals from her lips... both of their lips were touching very smoothly..While Maan was removing the petals...after he is done...he very vigorously kissed her lips....geet was not able to control his harshness...she scratched his bare back very hardly....

He tasted her skin of her face....from forehead to eyes to cheeks....He came down towards her neck...He moved his fingers from her chin to her chest....Geet moved her hands towards his back...and got up ....she kissed Maan's cheeks......then she kissed his neck and his chest...She placed her hands on Maan's face and moved her hands on his perfect abs..both of them looked deeply into their eyes....

Wild passion in Maan started to increase as he hold her hair very tightly and bend her.... tasted her neck very smoothly...then as she moved maan very close to her and kissed his shoulders. ...his passion aroused and he stared to kiss her neck towards her shoulders very hardly.....very intensely...She bit her lips out of anticipation...He started to remove her shirt buttons.....His hands moved towards her chest....feel her skin inside.....he removed her shirt...and turned her back....he removed her strip of bra and started his kiss her back...and tasted from her back towards her waist.....He then made her face him....he looked deeply into her eyes...full of desire and passion......then geet dragged Maan towards her and she feel on the pillow and maan feel over her....he took his hands and felt her milky cheeks....he smoothly moved his finger....geet closed her eyes....he then came to her lips and rubbed it with his thumb....thinking how tender they are....

He kissed her lips very hardly....Geet started to see an animal in him....he started to discover the whole beauty of his geet....

He kissed and tasted her whole body..Not leaving a single part....His intensity made her give more scratches on his bare back...and bite his shoulders and ears..He also gave many sweet pain to geet also by biting her out of passion....Both of them covered themselves with a blanket and ended their long wait.....A desire has come to an end.....Maan and Geet ...who are till yesterday two bodies and two soul by tonight they became one body and soul.....

Geet rested herself on Maan's chest and closed her eyes peacefully.....Maan kissed on the forehead of geet....holding her very tightly..... With full satisfaction he closed his eyes...


Hope you all liked my OS...thanks a lottt for such wonderful comments....Really enjoyed reading them...

do comment on this part also...and if you like press like button...

Love you all...

Edited by bubblygal1711 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
awesome update
loved it
finally they became one...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
wow amazing update.. luved their union...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ahem ahem

Hot hot part
Nice update
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